It has happened only rarely in his perfectly healthy life. He has reasonable relations with his spouse, his children, his parents, siblings, associates and friends. He’s honest with others, frank with himself, friendly. He has an easy way. Deep sustained unabashed eye contact is not at all the ordinary coin among people he knows and loves, and yet he finds himself locked in a prolonged reciprocal stare with a newborn who will not let him go. There can’t be anything to this, he reasons, from the baby’s point of view, but still he holds the gaze of his little little girl as if her childhood were at stake. She can’t have anything to share with her father of two hours and twelve minutes, he understands, and yet he’s terrified of all he hasn’t learned about devotion and dependence and something tells him he’s about to get a lesson. So he holds the stare. She will not let him go. She possesses him completely, as she inhabits her squeaky skin. So new is she and so complete, so vividly her own fresh entity that she’s on the verge of speech despite her youth, and what she has to tell her dad will stun him to a dreadful awareness of his own inauthenticity. For twenty years his nature has slipped away. He’s watched it go, and suppressed what little was left. There are people from his past he wouldn’t like to see today, though he denies it, people he would disappoint, and he knows it. With slippery little lips, she has formed the first syllable of this message to her dear dad. When he blinks, she spares him. She keeps her peace. He escapes without revelation, and his daughter, out of generosity, takes baby’s first step toward a diminished human life.
Copyright ©1997-2006 David Hodges
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October 11, 2006 at 1:52 pm
kamelda
I have read through all of these on the front page. This is one of my favorites.
They are all worth having read, which in my own handicap for words is meant for all it can be worth.
Good to have you as a reader, kamelda. I’ll try always to be worth your while.
–David
October 13, 2006 at 1:55 am
raysweat
Just wonderful, david…
and love that ending!
You, sir, may come back any time.
–David
October 22, 2006 at 11:55 pm
briseis
Your best short novel yet.
Hello, briseis! I can’t tell you how delighted I am you found me here. And thank you for the praise; it means a lot to me.
–David
November 18, 2006 at 5:02 am
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[…] I’d also like to point out the amazing and unique talent of David B Dale of Very Short Novels. His writing is original and always interesting to read. It is hard to pick one story, but here is one of my favorites, Baby Talk. […]
Why, thank you,
–David B Dale
December 9, 2006 at 4:35 pm
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hi, i found this link on mshahin’s blog. 🙂
this is SO well-written! sad but hopeful.
v. interesting blog u have.
mshahin is indispensable as a guide to blogs I know I will like as well. Thank you for the visit and especially for taking the time to share such kind words.
–David
March 22, 2007 at 12:09 pm
Daphne Jansen
David, I really loved reading this….will be back anon.
Why, thank you Daphne. Makes me want to check out your trueparenting site.
–David