My stupid sister says she wants to be a Sudanese baby in Darfur. Mommy says when we find her, she’ll wish she was a motherless African orphan. It’s just emotion talking; I’m just emotional too. Daddy loves the babies in Darfur. He tries to get their pictures in the paper. He leaves the door to his office open, on sick days and healthy days, but we know not to disturb him when he’s working, which is always. Eating his meals or taking his pills, he’s thinking about babies in Darfur; sending his emails, too. I heard him on the phone tell an interviewer he can’t remember what it’s like to be without them in his thoughts. He uses my old room to be sick in. He uses my sister’s room for the babies. She’s probably not smart to call herself a refugee. Daddy gets up early when he goes to bed at all. Murder doesn’t sleep, he says, and neither can the truth, and someone who could pressure someone is always at a desk somewhere in the world. I just want a regular birthday with candles and presents. They’ve tested our bones for marrow. We’ve been to all the places my sister usually goes to hide; maybe she’s in Africa, I don’t know. I want to change the world, but closer to home. Everyone can do something, I told the interviewer. If teaching college kids about Shakespeare was helpful, I’d like to do that. I’ll bet he had something useful to say about killing. But if I could save a family by sending an email, I wouldn’t go to class. I’d see what I could do. Mommy’s not sure. We’re at the bus station buying all the papers. She won’t tell me why she’s crying, but I can guess.
Copyright ©January 15, 2007 David Hodges
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January 15, 2007 at 9:01 am
red dirt girl
Fantastic! Finally an intelligent and thoughtful post on Darfur…………i had been working on one regarding ALL the genocides of the 20th century, but it definitely is not as eloquent as yours (me all rough edges and work boots)…………….lovely. Thank you David for the poignant reminder why we all should cry over the papers.
Post yours, too, red dirt girl. One Shakespeare professor can’t do it all alone.
–David
January 15, 2007 at 10:41 pm
Hajera
An excellent post! Strangely enough, it reminded me of Barthelme’s writing, especially 110 West Sixty-First Street, which is one of my favourites from his works. The similarity between the way that story and your post deals with the particular issue each tackles seems remarkably striking. If you haven’t already, I’d recommend reading it – I think you’ll like it.
Thank you, Hajera. Any comparison to Mr Barthelme is most welcome. I don’t find the story on my Barthelme shelf, but I’ll find it on your recommendation.
–David
January 16, 2007 at 4:40 am
litlove
Very poignant child’s perspective here; what’s that saying about ‘out of the mouths of babes and innocents?’ You manage to raise an extraordinary number of questions about the meaning of ethics in your 299 words…
Not a lot of answers, I’m afraid, litlove. But if we don’t find answers in Shakespeare, the Psalmist is another good place to look.
–David
January 16, 2007 at 5:23 pm
Daniel
like litlove says, your 299 words say far more than the word count indicates. There is real power in such few words.
Many thanks, Daniel.
–David
January 18, 2007 at 12:02 pm
David Schleicher
I like your sparse writing. Truth be told, I had to read it over a few times before I “got it.” But since its only 299 words, it didn’t feel like a chore. It became chilling in the end.
Thank you, David. They don’t all make sense to me, either, the first time through.
–David
January 19, 2007 at 5:14 am
Lola Rogers
I like this one very much, too. Raises tons of weighty questions, and has all the elements of a good story.
Thank you, Lola. Good to see you back again.
–David
January 23, 2007 at 9:26 am
soozie
I like this post. It really got me thinking, great work.
Thank you, Soozie. Come back soon.
–David
January 23, 2007 at 10:17 am
BADKitty
Love this! I have so many images for art floating through my mind now, and am inspired to cut to the chase and create in a emotional flurry. Great wordsmithing, I’d love to collaborate. Heather.
It wouldn’t be the first time, Heather. More like the second. You can either start with this, or offer me visuals to illuminate. Thank you.
–David
January 23, 2007 at 10:20 am
Arthur Browning
Whew!! It was a lot of work—but let me guess. It’s a very dark satire of a storyboard for a media blurb on Darfur? I have written a few things like this but it’s been a long time. The last time I did it was by voice recording while I drove overnight—loaded on caffeine so I wouldn’t sleep. Since I had to do it every week I decided to start recording. – Don’t get crazy(?)(!!)
Thanks, Arthur. I wasn’t thinking of this as a puzzle to solve, but, you’re probably right. It’s puzzling, I’ll give you that.
–David
January 25, 2007 at 8:15 am
Oh, The Joys
Wow! I’m new to you so this is my first 299 or less!
You are most welcome, Oh, The Joys; but just to be clear, they’re always exactly 299 words, no more, no less. But your comments can be as long or as short as you like. Bring your friends!
–David
January 26, 2007 at 4:57 pm
Sprite
I was fascinated reading this but my take on the purchase of newspapers at the end was very different than that of other people. I could feel the pain of a young child wanting for the attention of his father.
I figured Mom was buying newspapers to wrap her breakables for packing because they were moving out! Sorry, that’s where my mind went — a man neglecting his wife and children for the children in another country. Very American if you think about it. We always try to fix other people’s problems and ignore our own back yard.
Nobody could be blamed for misreading this one, Sprite. I tried to play so many angles at once it sent everybody scrambling. Most of what you say squares nicely with my own reading, but the papers refer back to an earlier mention of trying to get the children’s pictures in the papers. I’m delighted you were engaged enough by the story to work it out for yourself and reach such a logical conclusion. (Of course, I wanted you to have to guess, as the child does, and, as you’ve noted, Mom has plenty to cry about.)
–David
January 29, 2007 at 5:10 pm
Mouwaten Tounsi
We can change the world by small action. Just believe in the power of solidarity.
Thank you for your comment, Mouwaten. Readers of French would be wise to follow the link back to your own website for a wider perspective on Africa.
–David