He shows his hands as bidden. Across each palm, and flecking the edges also of his bare soles, doily patterns of lesion and wart, the arsenic array. His hands outstretched toward the inspector, palms up, thumbs east and west, elbows extended slightly from his deflated torso, his fingers cupped to receive whatever is freely given, or falls from the sky, he doesn’t beg, he isn’t grateful, doesn’t wish or want, has no questions, can’t be helped. To judge from his posture, he might be offering, from hands cupped not to catch but to proffer. They seem empty, but in their lines they map the journey of the king’s advisers to this desiccated village with its wells tapped deep into poison. The women are too weak to walk to clean water. The children wither inward from the fingertips and toes. In the land of flood and drought, too much water kills what too little water doesn’t. For the ancestors, pests that thrived in water that pooled when the floods receded took off the weak and weary. Longevity did not favor the thirsty. Then workers, sent by the king to tap the artesia, planted pumps within reach of the huts, and the villagers weaned themselves from the pools, and drank and cooked whenever they wished. Now those wells are poison, too, and workers have painted the handles red but not dismantled the old pumps, and healing water has been tapped a quarter mile away, to no avail. He didn’t ask for the old well, and he won’t walk to the new well while the old one is at hand. He was content to have no king, to drink pond water, red water, or do without. If the well outside his door goes dry, he’ll cup his hands and catch the rain.
Copyright ©1997-2006 David Hodges
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February 20, 2007 at 10:01 am
ngriffin
Very Very good short story. Character, conflict, emotional climax, and solution all in one very impressive paragraph. I like it…..
Thank you, ngriffin. I brought it back today for new readers. Glad you like it and thank you for (first-ever?) comment.
–David
February 20, 2007 at 12:38 pm
Rose
Very Moving David.
Thank you, Rose. Wonderful to see you back so soon!
–David
February 20, 2007 at 4:32 pm
Marloes
I found my way here by accident, but I will came back of my own free will to enjoy your writings.
The door is always open, my new friend.
–David
February 21, 2007 at 9:54 am
red dirt girl
Darfur………..
…and other places that have no name.
–David
February 21, 2007 at 10:05 pm
archiearchive
So many places, so many times. I despair of my kind.
It is hard to imagine how we’ve lasted this long.
–David
February 22, 2007 at 1:07 am
David Schleicher
I like how the place remains nameless…the predicament all too well known…the last line is an emotional killer…almost like a snuff…
I’ve forgotten the name of the place, if I ever knew it. But the red handles stayed in my mind.
–David
February 23, 2007 at 10:31 pm
Lakshmi
Very Al Goresque…His is documentary form, yours is definitely word play..
“Catch the rain…” — Is there rain?
As far as I know, Lakshmi, there’s still rain. Thanks for your comment.
–David