We can’t just weep on paper and call it Book of Tears. We can’t just stab the book and call it Rage, but certain stories are more physical fact than art. The books that tell those stories have a temperature, a heft that gives them balance; they can be gripped and wielded like weapons. But you and I, we do the work in words, or else take everybody into the bedroom and show them the knife in the bed.
She’s just begun to feel safe to move back after weeks of living at her sister’s, on a pull-out sofa in the little guest room, with a noisy radiator and a litter box. Before that, she’d spent two nights spinning in a rented bed at a local hotel with her daughter, who slept fine. Before that, she’d come home from errands to a house that had been ransacked while she was out. They hadn’t taken much, but they’d broken the door and run their hands over everything that used to be hers, crapped in the hallway, then left. They’d stolen her house. She called the police; she called me to go to the house; she packed up her daughter, left for the hotel and didn’t return until I’d put the place back into order, this morning in fact.
She called me again tonight. We’re here in her bedroom looking at it, the indescribable object, where they left it for her to find. We’re meant to know what’s concealed somewhere in her daughter’s bed, too. What chance does language have to blunt these edges of metal and menace, and how are we to live, when items out of place can have such hurtful power? She hasn’t spoken since I arrived. She points. She shows me the place where it cut her.
Copyright © March 8, 2007 David Hodges
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March 8, 2007 at 12:39 pm
Lora
David I will be jumping at every little sound I hear today because of this story.
Now I got to go check all the beds.
LOL
Be safe…
Be safe, Lora.
–David
March 8, 2007 at 1:23 pm
Silas Pritchard
This story conjured up some incredibly vivid images for me. Thank you for sharing a story that allows my brain to travel the twisting corridors’ of “what if”.
SP
You’re welcome(?) Thank you for your visit and comment, Silas.
–David
March 8, 2007 at 4:41 pm
porchhound
Very well done David. It captures the the perspectives and emotions of victim and rescuer and leaves the reader to ponder the mind and motives of the antagonist.
David Brockett
porchhound
Thanks, David. That leads me to believe there will be good things to read at porchhound.
–David
March 9, 2007 at 4:58 am
litlove
You know what’s so clever about your work? You understand that to evoke the real power of transgression or evil or fear you can’t look them directly in the face. It’s like staring at the sun. So I really appreciate the way you circle around the nightmare at the heart of this and leave its power intact.
Thank you, Litlove. If I were really clever, I’d know what I’ve been up to before you tell me.
–David
March 9, 2007 at 9:46 am
Marloes
I wish I had words to tell you how your stories grab me, but alas. My knowledge of English simply isn’t good enough.
I wish I had just a little Dutch, so I could thank you properly.
Dank u, Marloes.
–David
March 9, 2007 at 12:26 pm
ombudsben
Excellent stuff, David. I really liked this one — if like is the right word for evoking such a sense of violation.
Made me uneasy too, Ben. Thanks.
–David
March 9, 2007 at 12:44 pm
Wizzer
Another emotion-invoking piece David. In the depths of night I still sometimes struggle with the feeling of violation of privacy that comes from some uninvited person being in my house – a throwback to returning home to such a welcome! – this story touched that same inner feeling.
Thank you, Wizzer. Hope you’re finding ways to cope.
–David
March 9, 2007 at 1:04 pm
Anthony
Would be a horrible situation to be afraid to live in your own home.
Have you not been broken-into, Anthony? It’s startlingly commonplace.
–David
March 9, 2007 at 1:38 pm
jaterry
The change in format is refreshing. Great dark little tale too.
Thank you, Jill. So. Tiring of the unbroken 299-word paragraph, are you? 🙂
–David
March 9, 2007 at 7:05 pm
Anonymous
Really insightful piece, David. I bet it hits too close to home for far too many people.
You’re probably right, Anonymous. Nice trick of hiding your identity. Are you sure you’re not a burglar of some kind?
–David
March 10, 2007 at 9:34 pm
Edseverripit
Way too close for me, even now I’m still paranoid about being near windows or in my room at night with the lights off. You know who this is, by the way 🙂
Yes, I do. Thanks for the visit.
–David
March 11, 2007 at 3:33 pm
JaneDoughnut
Sorry! I forgot to fill in my name. I am not a burglar today.
Good to see you back, Jane! Thanks.
–David
July 4, 2007 at 11:11 pm
tovorinok
Hi all!
Great book. I just want to say what a fantastic thing you are doing! Good luck!
G’night
Thanks, tovorinok! I love how your link goes back to a Google search for very short novels!
–David
September 4, 2007 at 10:55 pm
smilgy
this is second story i read from here, really fantastic.
I see that you’re making the rounds, smilgy. Thanks for taking me along with comments.
–David