I hear it all from the basement where I’ve been sent to get more seltzer. Voices like crumpled linen tumble down the laundry chute to where I stand, all ears, eyes on nothing. This is my sister-in-law’s house, emptier now that my brother-in-law has died, far from where he started, in this city where snow falls early on a white Thanksgiving. This will be one of those holidays. Three women upstairs talking, only one of them still with a husband, one of them married to me: my wife, her sister, their mother. What I hear is mostly rhythm and pitch, but the music of their speaking carries meaning enough to know who loves who, and how much. Mom wants to help; I hear that clearly, but she has terms. She’s looking for an ally to help her defend her own uncertain future, to not be dragged down by misfortune. What she says next does more to drive two sisters together than either of them closer to her. Some of this I don’t hear at all; most of it I know before they start talking. My wife has fled the upstairs scene and come to the only place in the house she thought nobody would be. She looks stricken. She looks pursued. From where we stand together we can hear two voices rising and crashing, one pleading, one flat. She wonders what I know. I don’t know where to start. A moment later we show up on radar, and now Mom’s in the basement with us, vivid, still debating. I married a woman who turns into a girl who leaves home over and over again at moments like these and takes back her life the best she can. She’s in the back yard now, without a coat, staring at snow.
Copyright © March 12, 2007 David Hodges
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March 12, 2007 at 1:28 am
ngriffin
I love the story! I thought it was great.
Thank you, ngriffin.
–David
March 12, 2007 at 2:36 am
jennifer cruz
great writing! i love the concept of your whole blog
Thank you, jennifer. Come back any time.
–David
March 12, 2007 at 9:33 am
Marloes
I wonder how much of this story is fiction? You wrote this so very very well. I almost thought you wrote about my sisters and me.
Thank you so much, Marloes. When I do my job right, you should always think the stories are about your sisters and you.
–David
March 12, 2007 at 3:20 pm
Wizzer
If I had sisters I know I’d feel the same way 🙂 – seriously, another great read always touching in a deep way – really makes you (one) think and “deal” with things so easily overlooked.
Thanks, Wizzer. I do my best to keep you coming back.
–David
March 12, 2007 at 3:47 pm
Melissa
I don’t have sisters, but I do have a mother who turns me into a twelve-year-old girl upon her arrival at my house once a year – this was brilliant.
Thank you, Melissa. I did think I might be tapping into something universal. Glad you liked it.
–David
March 12, 2007 at 4:25 pm
litlove
I love the way you play with the distance of witnessing in this post. It’s so right that the narrator, who is separated from the details of the discussion, should be able to hear so clearly the emotional forces that drive it. He performs the same trick, but visually, in that last line (which is something very special).
Thank you Litlove. You’ve no idea how close I came to putting a window in that basement so the husband could see his wife in the yard, instead of rightly knowing how she’d react.
–David
March 12, 2007 at 5:10 pm
Dorothy W.
I agree with Litlove — listening to the voices and knowing what they say through the rhythms and emotions is great.
Thank you, Dorothy.
–David
March 13, 2007 at 1:06 pm
Madhav Singh
Its cool and amazing. Keep going David, you write so well.
Thanks, Madhav.
–David
March 13, 2007 at 9:26 pm
grasshopper
I really admired and enjoyed the story. (Thanks so much for alerting me to it.) It’s very lovely, in every sense of the word, and I’m intrigued to read whatever you write next.
Thank you, grasshopper. You shouldn’t have to wait very long.
–David
March 14, 2007 at 12:27 am
Dariana
Wow, I have a lot of catching up to do. Love the way you write and this one is no exception. Keep up the great work.
Thank you, Dariana. No more sleeping and working: you have blogs to read!
–David
March 14, 2007 at 1:24 pm
Polli
Beautiful writing. You amaze me David.
Thank you, Polli!
–David
March 15, 2007 at 11:19 am
ombudsben
Without ever needing the words they’ve spoken, you capture the emotions so well.
Funny thing about words heard through walls, Ben . . . .
–David
March 16, 2007 at 2:46 am
verbivore
A beautiful novel – just stunning. “Voices like crumpled linen” says so much in just three words. And the nearly telepathic connection between the husband and wife is perfect.
Thank you verbivore. I love that you call it a novel.
–David
March 19, 2007 at 7:20 pm
yzed
You are a poet – perhaps one of the best compliments I can give a person.
Well, thank you, yzed. I appreciate that.
–David
March 31, 2007 at 9:07 am
Lilian
I just picked this entry to read at random when popping by after you left your comment on my blog (thanks), and I loved it! I think the last sentence is my favourite. Will be adding you to my blogroll if that’s ok.
If that’s OK! Thank you, Lillian. I thoroughly enjoyed my first visit to Bookmouse, too.
–David