When the world has too many parts and mine don’t fit, tango is another way to touch her. It can’t get me in trouble and always seems to please her, and I can drop in any time I have ten dollars and an evening hour free and wait my turn. I plod through most days like a load of cement; here I glide before I ever reach the door. I see her through the window with the one who’s come before me. She laughs up at him in a way I recognize, except it looks like pity when she does it for him. The music of her laughter over the plaintive accordion tango is rhythmic and lush, or so I imagine from the sidewalk, through the window, from my memories. I think about my shoes; are they right for dancing. I think about my hair, my age, the other men you see. I haven’t danced in days and I’m off-balance. I lean in your direction and where your body should be encounter nothing to keep me from falling. It would be romantic to say we fit together like spoons— romantic and wrong and frankly creepy. Reality is more inventive. You do the work to turn us into partners; you stretch and shift to match your limbs to mine and give us the illusion of fit. I’m obligated by convention, I know, to lead, but I’ve noticed how even dancing backwards girls with a special grace can guide. I see you now; you’re free. This is my turn. I only need to place my fingers on the small of your back to restore my equilibrium. “What’s that? No, no problem. You’re leaving early again. I understand.” There’s the look I love. “My wife will be disappointed. She notices my progress.”
Copyright ©May 25, 2007 David Hodges
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May 26, 2007 at 4:33 pm
timethief
What can I say? You are an awesome writer David.
Oh, timethief, thank you. So glad you accepted my invitation.
–David
May 27, 2007 at 11:00 am
litlove
I do so love your yearning narrators, David, and this one is particularly beautifully evoked through his admiration for the tango dancer. I am still in awe of the way you can conjure up such a detailed and complex character portrait in so few sentences. Naturally, I would have liked him to have got the girl, but I accept that the choreographing of desire is more shapely the way you have it. As it is, it is as plaintive and delicate and lush as a piece of tango music by Piazzolla.
Litlove, you’re such a good and attentive reader I’m certain the Very Short Novels are at their finest in your head. That you know Piazzolla’s accordion and that in describing her laugh I was also describing his music tells me a good deal.
–David
May 28, 2007 at 4:27 am
Wizzer
Oh yes, the VSN are at their finest in the head of the reader. As always my mind races off – who is this guy? is he in love? does he think he is? what is he getting away from? Beautiful, unanswered questions
You’re right, Wizzer. I’ve seen those questions lingering and growing in your comments. Thank you for bringing such a fine mind to the job.
–David
May 28, 2007 at 9:21 am
Michele
As usual, David, excellent. A bit of a teaser but that’s what I love about it…
Thanks, Michele.
–David
May 28, 2007 at 6:42 pm
Sharon
Reminds me of that Richard Gere movie…. Tango is such a beautiful dance, and it’s like poetry in motion.
First time I’ve been to your site. You have such beautiful writings.
Thank you, Sharon, and welcome! I’m not familiar with the movie.
–David
May 29, 2007 at 7:50 pm
Brody
Nice. I loved it.
-Brody Schuman from Brodyschuman.com
Thanks, Brody. Appreciate your visit and comment.
–David
June 5, 2007 at 6:26 pm
amethystlune
terrific! i’m a dancer and i can feel the guy’s point of view…. nice.
Thank you, amethystlune!
–David
July 13, 2007 at 5:11 pm
briseis
Litlove was right about your “yearning narrators.” The flashes of grace and adoration in this piece are absolutely stunning.
Thank you so much, Briseis. I do feel for those narrators of mine, and the women they adore.
–David