I don’t know how long he’s been supposedly dead. Nobody will tell me. They don’t like me doing research either, but he’s all I ever overheard about. He’s the most exciting relative I never met. I’ll tell you this: if there’s an angle to dying, Uncle Frank’s working it. I know Aunt Florence thinks he’s coming back. Hell, Dad saw him embalmed, and even he’s not sure. That’s how it is with Uncle Frank. You can’t put it past him. Dad says he could make you pay, and not get what you paid for, and beg to pay again. He says the third time, Uncle Frank would lend you money at murderous terms so you could pay again, and still you wouldn’t get what you paid for. The letters started coming last summer. At first, I thought they were from my cousin Frankie, Florence’s kid. So did Mom; she thinks I have a new pen-pal. My job is to keep her thinking that, and send Uncle Frank his checks on time. Pigeons are greedy, he writes. They don’t believe, but green-tinted glasses make them believe. He says Dad doesn’t check his bank statements because he wants to believe he has money. He says the bank doesn’t notice I’m using Dad’s checks because they’re the system. Banking’s just a con game, right? I mean, where does your money really go? The way I figure, Dad got what he had coming. He must have known something was fishy before he went in on the scheme. He wasn’t man enough to face that everything is a cheat. That sounds harsh. Maybe he just wanted more. Maybe he believed Uncle Frank really was in trouble. Anyway, we’ll start breaking even by Christmas. Then I can bring back Santa Claus for the whole family.
Copyright © May 30, 2007 David Hodges
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May 31, 2007 at 7:25 am
litlove
What an intriguingly conflicted narrator you have created there, David! Struggling between fantasies of rescue and abandonment of his family, complicit in both their ruin and their salvation, idealising the crook whilst knowing his duty. And all this written across the uncertain demise of the uncle – no wonder they’re not certain he’s dead when his power lives on so potently. I love the way the title gestures (so economically of course) to all the many layers of the tale. Fascinating!
Thank you, Litlove. He does seem to be busy post-mortem, doesn’t he?
–David
May 31, 2007 at 3:25 pm
Jill
Sweet.
Thank you, Jill.
–David
May 31, 2007 at 9:23 pm
Jill Terry
You do know that was SsssssWEET and not sugary?!
I understood, Jill, but thanks for the clarification. Sugary it’s not.
–David
June 1, 2007 at 6:04 pm
nursemyra
Love this story. If I weren’t going on leave, I’d hang around and read your entire back catalogue.
have added you to my blogroll and will be visiting regularly when I return
Bon voyage, nursemyra! You’re in my blogroll, too, for all to see, as Gimcrack Hospital (PG).
–David
June 4, 2007 at 3:48 am
Wizzer
“Dad saw him embalmed and even he’s not sure” – Well I’m certain I’m not! Really intriguing story – complicated by the uncertainty of Uncle Frank’s current status but with the usual thread of human weakness – greed, misplaced loyalty. Such much in so little.
Thanks, Wizzer. I do love a character who keeps you guessing!
–David
June 5, 2007 at 6:34 pm
amethystlune
another fantastic and intriguing story. love the narrator’s tone in this one. i keep reading your stuff in hopes that your style will one day rub off on me so i can eventually find my own voice.
Maybe living in a foreign country will help focus your “native” voice! Good luck, amethystlune.
–David
June 26, 2007 at 5:41 am
Franxbudi
Nice story David.This story make me understand about what is confidence.
Thank you, Franxbudi!
–David