You’d think by now the house would be empty, but every Saturday she seems to have more to get rid of. When we moved into the neighborhood, she was putting out just one long rack of men’s clothing in the yard near the failing azalea bed, beautiful suits arranged by color, fresh from the cedar closet, dark suits nearly indistinguishable, like so many groomsmen posing in a row, each suit paired with a complementary shirt and tie, as if the bridal party had undressed in her front yard and hung their clothes up neatly and tagged them for sale. When only the clumsier styles remained, she supplemented them with ladies’ garments from her own closets and never stopped putting things out. We started seeing furniture, not chipped knick-knacks but big upholstered reading chairs and a queen-size bed of substantial manufacture, with linens and pillows, ready for napping or lovemaking there on the lawn beneath the Japanese maple. We only see what we can see from two doors down. Her stuff doesn’t interest us. She chats and makes change amiably with people she’s never met, but when she drags the remnants back into the empty house in the afternoon, it’s clear the effort has cost her. Why does she keep doing it, without a man to help? Today she’s brought the laundry from the house directly to the yard. She’s folding the crumpled clothing from the basket onto her little sale table. She’ll sell the table, too, for an offer, and the grass from the front yard as sod. A man with a shovel is digging up hosta. Everything must go: the underwear, the photo albums, boxes of signed Christmas cards and packets of old letters. By the time she’s ready to move on, she’ll have nothing left to pack.
Copyright © June 8, 2007 David Hodges
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June 8, 2007 at 11:56 am
Lora
Ok that was bittersweet.
The lady is in the twilight of her life selling her underwear to strangers. Is she afraid her family, that ignores her, will fight over her underwear after she passes on?
David have a great weekend!
Be safe…
Oh, Lora, I wish I could answer your questions, but we only know what we see from two doors down. Thank you very much for your comment.
–David
June 8, 2007 at 12:14 pm
Wizzer
Oh for what went before! Why the change, what caused this, how old is she?
Is she widowed, abandoned? So many questions as always and so captivating. Great read, David.
Thank you, Wizzer. It is generous of you to be OK with questions.
–David
June 8, 2007 at 12:47 pm
Two Write Hands
I love the concept–what a great invention!
Thanks, Two! And welcome, new visitor, to Very Short Novels. Love your snappy attitude at Two Write Hands.
–David
June 9, 2007 at 6:57 am
Electric Writer
Grat blog, David. I dabbled in “flash fiction” myself a while back. I’ll definitely return. Cheers, Matt.
Thanks, Matt. I’ll follow you back to electricwriter and see what you’re up to.
–David
June 9, 2007 at 8:41 am
Marloes
It’s about time I left a comment dont you think? I can see her, getting rid of all the things she no longer needs, nor wants. To start afresh somewhere else doesn’t mean you don’t take the memories with you anyway.
Lovely story David, thank you and have a nice weekend.
Thank you, Marloes. That’s a beautiful perspective.
–David
June 9, 2007 at 4:11 pm
Diahann
Love your blog, David. And, much as I would like to know more about the protagonists, what comes after or what happened before, I find myself hooked into the plot as my imagination gets put to the test. Great work! I’m so glad I chanced upon you.
So am I Diahann! And thank you for getting into the spirit of the story; your collaboration is essential.
–David
June 10, 2007 at 8:46 pm
grantman
I felt she was much younger, not in the twilight as one has said. In her loneliness I see her as putting this stuff out not to sell so much as to bring new people into her life to fill the void she now faces. She has hope that someone new may come into her life. The comment from the people down the street says tons; they don’t want to get involved. Her cry of loneliness will not be answered by them, but if not them, who?
Thanks, grantman. I like that idea. Dragging a bed out into the yard certainly seems like some kind of invitation!
–David
June 11, 2007 at 2:26 am
litlove
Several things I love: that line that says that we can only see what can be seen from two doors down and they are not interested in her stuff. Beautifully done – so infinitely and tellingly misleading. The narrator’s trick here is to present us with a hotchpotch collection of everyday objects, but each described with a wealth of fantasy that encourages us readers to embrace them with our imagination and see each one as part of a rich but untold story of life. The narrator may not want to buy the objects but he has revealed all too clearly the extent of his projective interest in them. The woman’s house is like one of those pots in fairy tales that keep magically producing food, as it continually nourishes his imagination with more and more domestic ephemera. And the beauty of banal objects is that what we see beyond the given is always a reflection of ourselves looking.
Just so clever as always, David!
Wow, Litlove. I made that? Thank you very much.
–David
June 11, 2007 at 7:27 am
bluepanjeet
cool blog david
thank you, bluepanjeet!
–David
June 16, 2007 at 11:29 am
anonymom
I really enjoyed this. Sweet and sentimental but with a hint of mystery. Where is she going, where has she been? I would love to see that second sentence cut down and tightened a bit, perhaps split into two–it is interrupting the flow of your story. But overall lovely and I will read more. Thanks for writing.
Thank you, anonymom! That’s very kind. I’m particularly grateful for the technical recommendation. Do stop by again.
–David
June 22, 2007 at 12:39 am
Miriam Robbins Midkiff
As always, it’s nice to read a story that leaves one pondering…
It’s been awhile since I’ve visited, David, and I’m enjoying the catching up!
You certainly are making up for lost time, Miriam! It will take me a while to thank you individually for all the comments you left me overnight. Thank you, here, for this one.
–David