They have me locked up for something I didn’t do, which is lucky. If they had convicted me for the job I did pull, I’d be doing hard time somewhere real. This, I don’t know what they call this, experimental juvenile rehab or some shit, I saw an old war movie once just like this. Some Japanese general tried to brainwash these American prisoners. He didn’t tell them the war was over. He just kept them and played with their brains. The first day he got these elaborate histories of their families back home—jobs and salaries and addresses, political parties I think—then twice a day he stood them in the yard for lectures, three hours on their feet taking notes, and then quizzes before they could eat. I guess you can learn anything to get your lousy lunch. I forget how it ended. I figured, tell them the opposite of what they expect to hear, you know? See how smart they are. How my Dad was hardworking and went to church and loved my Mom and how my whole family was this loving unit and I was the only screw-up. So a year later I’m sticking to my story and every day I miss them more, this family I said I have, this Dad who takes me places and this beautiful Mom who knows about history and shit, and these twins! And I don’t know if they’ve checked, and know it’s all a lie, or what they know, so I go with it. The more they ask me, the more I keep my facts straight. I start sending cards on their birthdays. I’m making them things in shop. When they don’t visit, I cry in my bunk. I swear I would kill to have family like this.
Copyright © July 06, 2007 David Hodges
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July 6, 2007 at 6:46 pm
Valentin
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=5547481422995115331
this movie is not black / white, but worth seeing…..
Maybe so, Valentin, but boy it takes forever to get started. The first twelve minutes didn’t grip me, so I bailed.
–David
July 6, 2007 at 8:33 pm
nursemyra
you just keep getting better and better.
Thank you, nursemyra.
–David
July 6, 2007 at 9:07 pm
aloysius
I think this movie is not black/white, but i do like it. I hope to see your updated soon.
I think I know what you mean, aloysius.
–David
July 6, 2007 at 9:13 pm
whypaisley
i love it… of course you slay me daily with what you can do with 299 words!!!!!!!
Thank you, whypaisley. I only get confused if I go on longer.
–David
July 7, 2007 at 5:20 am
wizzer
Very touching piece David. I guess all messed up people would like stability if they could access their deepest emotions.
Thanks, wizzer. I wonder what the Japanese general would say about that.
–David
July 8, 2007 at 1:02 am
BillyWarhol
that is great boy can i ever relate*
;))
Have you had to learn for your lunch, Billy? Thanks.
–David
July 8, 2007 at 1:23 am
Trish Anderson
Hi David, interesting look at the tricks the mind can play on itself and the stories we tell ourselves. I like it! Now, I’m off to read some more.
TrishA
. . . especially when we’re placed into artificial environments, like our lives. Thanks, Trish.
–David
July 8, 2007 at 11:14 am
Miriam
Notice you’ve been on a crime spree lately! Fascinating!
You’re right, Miriam. It’s been nothing but mayhem since the Mustaches.
–David
July 9, 2007 at 1:42 am
litlove
What a beautifully clever exposition of how life follows art, not the other way round, and never more so than when we are in extremis. There’s a theory that pain and the imagination come into being at the same time, as fantasy is our first recourse in the event of suffering and this was the first thing (of many) that your VSN made me think of. As ever I love the layers in this and the way you manage to make 299 words expand over so many time frames and so much mental space. I shall miss your novels while I’m away, David, but the silver lining will be the little stash of them I’ll find on my return.
Thank you, Litlove. That’s a fascinating theory. I might have said fantasy was a remedy for deprivation, but maybe we’re saying the same thing. I’ll miss you, too. Hurry back.
–David
July 11, 2007 at 10:36 am
ombudsben
I like this one, David.
Thank you, Ben. I’ve just started reading your book. I want to say the moment when Anna realizes there’s a stain on the counter she’ll never scrub out spoke more poignantly about mortality than anything I can remember reading.
–David
July 13, 2007 at 12:05 am
briseis
This one is touching, David. It doesn’t really seem to fit in with most of your stuff, but it’s truly great.
Thanks, Briseis. I do my best to mix it up, but they’re all still chocolates in a box of chocolates.
–David
July 15, 2007 at 6:48 am
Kudu
nice writing style… short but awesome dude!
Suddenly I’m dude! Thanks Kudu and welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
July 17, 2007 at 8:17 pm
Eric "Speedcat Hollydale"
These ARE fun to read. Nice work!
Thanks Eric!
–David