I like him better when we’re on vacation and I don’t think he’d disagree. I’d never ask, I don’t suppose; we don’t talk like that. I don’t know what we talk about. He was sweet, though—playful, boyish and attentive, with his sunscreened nose and his silly sunglasses, and I thought: If he could be like this at home, I might stay. Our first night back he found clothes in his suitcase, clearly not his—not his style, not his colors—because they had color and style. I braced myself for what might follow and left the room to listen from a distance. I made cocoa and drank it and petted the dog a little too hard and waited for something like thunder. Instead he came down dressed like somebody else and filled the blender with fruit and ice, a splash of rum, pineapple juice, another splash of rum or two, and flicked the switch, whistling all the while. He caught my eye as he brought down the holiday glasses: Whatcha drinkin’, girlie? he asked me, quoting someone, and poured the drinks. I don’t know who he thought he was. I didn’t care to know. He surprised me while my head was tilted back, draining the last of my glass, and knocked the stool down scooping me up, and somehow managed to get my pants off by the time he laid me down. And did everything I asked him. I woke up muddled in the morning light, but gathered my focus to watch and wave as he left for work dressed like a tourist in the islands, whistling. I spent the day unpacking, remembering one sun-blinded, glorious day for each garment I folded and put away and wondering who will come home tonight and who he’ll be dressed as.
Copyright © July 15, 2007 David Hodges
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July 17, 2007 at 8:25 am
wizzer
Ah, David, back to my questions I see. Whose clothes were they? Will she have others for him tonight? Who does she really want? Full of mystery — just as I like it.
That’s the beauty of a sampler menu, wizzer. Thanks!
–David
July 17, 2007 at 11:27 am
grantman
…nah..having been a husband for thirty-two years I felt this one hit home…The girls have been changing dad’s wardrobe for many a vacation….but alas…like the perfect wave…it doesn’t last forever, but as long as it does….it sure is great…
grantman
So you, too, are a different man on vacation and after! Thanks, grantman!
–David
July 17, 2007 at 11:48 am
Kathleen Maher
I agree with grantman: a perfect wave.
I hope you mean the Novel is a perfect wave. At least that’s how I’ve decided to interpret you. Thanks, Kathleen.
–David
July 17, 2007 at 2:50 pm
Claudya
Make the bag to vacation is always a trouble for me David!
I wish I knew as much Portuguese as you do English, Claudya. Will you permit me to rephrase for you: “Make the bag to vacation” = “Packing a bag for vacation”. At least, that’s what I think you mean. Thank you for your comment, and welcome to Very Short Novels.
July 18, 2007 at 9:05 am
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July 18, 2007 at 2:49 pm
bellevelma
I like this one. Makes we want to go on vacation all over again.
Thanks, bellevelma! Careful with your luggage!
–David
July 18, 2007 at 5:43 pm
OmbudsBen
I’ve wondered what the consequences of the airlines mixing up people’s luggage might be.
Happy to shed some light on that mystery for you, Ben. Thanks!
–David
July 18, 2007 at 9:57 pm
briseis
You took a wonderful idea and ran with it.
This makes me a little nervous to open my suitcase.
It’s all in how you react to what you find there, Briseis. But do take care. Thanks!
–David
July 19, 2007 at 2:38 am
Madeleine
A perfect summer treat – short, breezy, and just a tad woozy.
Well, thank you, Madeleine. Sounds just right for the movie poster!
–David
July 19, 2007 at 8:54 pm
whypaisley
as always david.. this is excellent… i feel like getting my own little suitcase so i can travel between personas at will…
Thank you, whypaisley. You don’t already have one?
–David
July 20, 2007 at 12:21 am
Teena Stewart
David, you give a new meaning to writing tight. Very clever site. Pardon the rhyme.
Teena Stewart
Thank you, Teena and welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
July 20, 2007 at 8:10 am
litlove
An object lesson in how to translate fantasy into reality on any number of levels. Loved the cunning time scale of this as well. Still the same old magic in your suitcase, David.
August 10, 2007 at 12:17 am
Gautam
David! you missed a second ‘l’ in ‘Travelling’ 🙂
Since you learned to write in India, Gautam, you were taught what we Americans call the “British” spelling.
–David
Aha! I stand corrected.