Yesterday I was grazing and cruising the heifers in clover. This morning I stand at the edge of the bull ring in sawdust and bullshit and sand, listening to music to salute an armada, triumphant strains for a dusty empire from trumpeters sniffing for blood. Whatever we were bred for, it can’t have been this. The matador spends his whole life rehearsing for his small part. Is it too much to ask for one short run-through for the bulls before our debut? They haven’t given us time to adjust to the stench of the city, the roar of the crowd. How can we carry the weight of tradition if we don’t know our steps? The matadors dress like conquistadors at a costume party. They tread this circle of dirt like their New World. I smell the battle horses in the pen. I see the spears. I understand the pageantry of a Sunday spectacle, for children with their ices and actors bowing in hats and capes, their buttocks plump targets in velvet. The trumpet sounds. The gate swings open. Enter the bull, snorting from the bullpen, blue-black in the merciless sun, my tongue a red flag of warning, otherwise naked confusion and fear. Very well, then, I’ll play it naked. If they look away, they’ll miss the show; if they look too long, I’ll blind them. The picadors stab my neck; the bandilleras plant their barbed sticks in my flanks. It’s meant to enrage me, to make a good show, but they’ve gone too far. I’ll never stand. The matador with his phony sword is fighting time. If I learn his maneuvers, he’s gored. Something between my shoulder blades is feeling for my heart. I appeal to the crowd and they see in my eyes this all seems very real.
Copyright © July 23, 2007 David Hodges
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July 23, 2007 at 1:28 pm
briseis
Spectacular, David. What a fine job you’ve done, showing humanity a bit of how treacherous and awful we really are.
Thanks, Briseis. I hope it wasn’t altogether bleak.
–David
July 23, 2007 at 10:57 pm
the scholar
hi david,
i don’t think it was bleak; i think it was heartbreaking.
i can picture that bull in the ring from your 299 words, and i don’t even want to!
i love all your stories — keep up the good work!
Thank you, Roadside Scholar. I love your latest finds: the matchstick art; the leather bathtubs!
–David
July 25, 2007 at 11:26 am
Coal2k
“…their buttocks plump targets in velvet”
This phrase is absolute genius, David.
Thank you, Coal2k? Are you trying to say I hit the bulls-eye?
–David
July 25, 2007 at 1:54 pm
Wizzer
299 words – full of emotion. So real I could smell fear.
Sidenote – David, I’ve tagged you today at my blog.
Thank you, Wizzer. Tagged, you say? Is it a game I play?
–David
July 25, 2007 at 2:29 pm
Wizzer
I see you stopped by – guess you saw the game. Just a way to boost our exposure, in particular your unofficial publicist (aka me) getting your work in front of more of the world!
Thanks again, Wizzer. It’s very flattering and generous of you. I only wish I could respond in kind to your invitation without encouraging other games and tags. That probably makes me sound very ungrateful. But thank you. I’m very grateful.
–David
July 25, 2007 at 5:12 pm
Uri
WOW!!!
Thanks, Uri. Tell your friends, please. And Welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
July 26, 2007 at 2:57 am
litlove
A wonderful piece of anthropomorphism, David, you are the alpha bull! It’s comic and it’s dark and it’s beautifully observed and rich in emotions. The details are, as ever, just fantastic.
Well, I can only say–snort–Thank you.
–David
July 26, 2007 at 7:32 am
buknoi
i really like the story!
can i ask for the writing style for this?
and may i ask a brief background about you sir David?
because I was assigned by my teacher to for this story (becoming the bull)
and have a research about the author.. please help me sir..
Thank you, buknoi. I don’t see how I can refuse, but let’s do it by email.
–David
July 26, 2007 at 8:31 am
Teresa
Haven’t I been in this fight before? It all seems very real.
Doesn’t it though? Thanks, Teresa.
–David
July 26, 2007 at 10:23 am
Jessica Weisenfels
I love this:
“blue-black in the merciless sun, my tongue a red flag of warning, otherwise naked confusion and fear”
Thank you, Weiswife! And welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
July 28, 2007 at 7:23 am
Dave Hambidge
I have lurked your website for many months and enjoyed many of your works. This is one of your most poignant, emotive and haunting to date, IMHO. Poor bloody bull!
Or is it poor ruddy tourists feeding the frenzy by going, paying local cash and supporting such barbarism?
dave
Poor you and I for still wanting to participate somehow, knowing how barbaric it is. Thank you Dave, for coming out of the shadows. And welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
August 22, 2007 at 10:59 am
cranelegs
geez dave, impale me already!
what a perfectly dismal vison for a gray, damp day in jersey.
brilliant!
Thanks, Bob. I know all about damp, gray days in Jersey (having one myself!).
–David