Our fear of tooth decay is functional; of saber-tooth tigers is not; of decay—or for that matter decadence—as a destination, can’t keep us from turning into soup bones and stew. It might save us some pain if being afraid kept us from visiting the dentist, but once we’re in the chair, it only makes things worse. We’re friends, this dentist and I; our wives are friends; I’m friends with his wife; she’s friends with me. He knows to turn the music up. He knows the jazz distracts me. I open wide and try to follow the saxophone. I never put my fingers in his mouth. This seems a fundamental imbalance. He scowls behind his glasses and peers into a deep recess and angles his interrogator’s lamp. I wonder what questions he would ask me, or her for that matter. He turns for the drill. A crack in the padding of the armrest pinches my finger. I test the tooth he’s working on with my tongue—there’s nothing left!—it will snap if he goes in again. I try to catch his eye. A tiny spider emerges from his hairline, shiny and bright, and makes a break for the cover of his eyebrow. Don’t move, he tells me, while the drill whines and stings that tooth. I choose a photo on the wall and stare recklessly at the two of them in bathing suits, her shoulders tan and lovely. When I look back, the spider is a drop of sweat and there are others riding the waves of his forehead. In his eyes I see the riskiness of the procedure. His glasses reflect my concern. I wonder if they also tell him what I’m most concerned about. Is he trying not to hurt me, or trying to decide?
Copyright © August 15, 2007 David Hodges
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August 15, 2007 at 6:15 pm
briseis
Very twisted, David. (in many ways)
Enticing and interesting. Wonderful as always.
Thank you, Briseis. I love that you had so many different reactions.
–David
August 16, 2007 at 7:54 am
grantman
you forgot to add, “and he is always asking me questions that I can’t answer because my mouth is full of his fingers & tools!”
grantman
So true, grantman. The dentist always has the last word.
–David
August 17, 2007 at 6:48 am
Madeleine
Woody Allen meets Mr. Bean.
Thanks, Madeleine. That’s the second time in two days Woody Allen’s been mentioned in comments (the first for Mister Bean). I wonder what it means.
–David
August 17, 2007 at 6:18 pm
Anna
I really enjoyed reading this one. Thanks. Anna 🙂
You’re welcome, Anna. Thank you for your visit and comment and welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
August 17, 2007 at 6:19 pm
Anna
grantman….this is so true, I think my dentist does it on purpose. lol
August 17, 2007 at 8:50 pm
whypaisley
AAAHHHH i am not a fan of the dentist, and i know just how unsure it feels to lie there and let him do what he will…. aaaahhhh
Thanks, Paisley. It does require a lot of trust.
–David
August 18, 2007 at 3:32 am
litlove
I usually begin my comments with ‘I love the way that’ but I’m not sure that’s appropriate when the topic is fear and dentists! Let’s say I’m very impressed by the way that fear becomes refracted across different elements of this poor, suffering narrator’s perception. The crack in the chair arm that pinches, the drop of sweat that transforms into a surreal spider. And all the time he’s trying to project himself elsewhere, poor guy; into the music, into his dentist’s life, into some world of the imagination that might take him anywhere other than where he is. Fear is written into all things that invade, the possibility of comfort into all forms of mental escape. Psychologically very acute and brilliantly executed. I think I might just go cancel that appointment for a check-up…
Thank you, Litlove. You’re so good at helping me find my strategies. I’m sure my own dentist will not appreciate how I’ve perpetuated the stereotype.
–David
August 18, 2007 at 9:20 pm
Miriam
The underlying story I read can be found in the following words and phrases: “decadence”; “I’m friends with his wife; she’s friends with me”; “I wonder what questions he would ask me, or her for that matter”; “interrogator’s lamp”; “I…stare recklessly”; “her shoulders tan and lovely”; and of course, the last two sentences. In this novel, as in life, I see there is often much passion beneath the surface of the ordinary.
Nice work, Miriam! Are you good at murder mysteries, too?
–David
August 19, 2007 at 7:27 am
Dave Hambidge
I thought I had overcome my phobia of dentists, until I read this one!
Back to the Ativan underthetongue 10 minutes before.
Or should that be for the dentist?
dave
As long as everybody’s comfortable. Thanks, Dave.
–David
August 28, 2007 at 6:50 am
LiteraryMinded
Ah, Miriam has summed up exactly what I felt from it –
‘In this novel, as in life, I see there is often much passion beneath the surface of the ordinary.’
Angela
Thank you, Angela.
–David
September 9, 2007 at 2:19 am
wizzer
What a tangled web we weave! – My mind went the same way as Miriam’s – well done, David – more questions than answers as always.
Like a spider’s web? Thanks, Wizzer.
–David