The day I nearly lost him, he was such a little man. Rolling his miniature suitcase down the concourse with his boarding pass, threading his way through the taller adults, he looked back just once like a confident boy friend, roguish that he was in the lead, then disappeared from the face of the earth, a suddenly vulnerable child without his mother. He likes to hide, I told myself from B4 to B9; I told myself, please god, he likes to hide. I didn’t find him before I cried. I snagged him by the collar as he was running for the skyway toward flight 203, and I hurt him a little, I’m afraid; I frightened him. I needed to make him fearful of something, but I wasn’t sure quite what. He needed to know that his mother was fearful, but not exactly why. His father caught up with us and appraised the scene: the tears, our tears, his frightened boy, and I saw in his eyes he thought less of me, as a parent. I hadn’t thought that possible. My mother-in-law was with us again, and her I couldn’t look at, at all. I took a breath. I straightened my baby’s collar. “I ran ahead,” he explained to his daddy and grandma, “I got lost. Mom found me.” There was nowhere at all for me to look. We split up again for the shuttle train ride to our departure gate, daddy and grandma in the forward car, me and my hero in the last. He climbed on board and offered me his hand. I put one foot up, heard an announcement that made me doubt, and stepped back in a panic of confusion. And watched the doors close. And watched the doors separate me again from my little man.
Copyright © August 22, 2007 David Hodges
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August 23, 2007 at 1:19 am
Shelia
I love coming here, David!
Thank you, Sheila. I try to make it worth coming back.
–David
August 23, 2007 at 9:49 am
ramonez
Brilliant, David – that hit a nerve.
My little one is sick, see?
That hit a nerve.
I see, Ramonez. Thanks.
–David
August 23, 2007 at 1:15 pm
Rod
Heart breaking, Dave. Absolutely heart breaking.
You’re a big man to admit it, Rod. Glad you’re feeling better today. Thank you.
–David
August 23, 2007 at 7:57 pm
Anna
Enjoyed reading this story. Anna 🙂
Thank you, Anna. Enjoyed your toad. Welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
August 24, 2007 at 12:15 am
Tai
Ah, this is just right–the terror, the grief, the absurdity, and the way life conspires to separate parent and child. The detail of the miniature suitcase made my heart constrict.
Thank you, Tai, and welcome to Very Short Novels. I love your Frog Prince.
–David
August 24, 2007 at 5:46 am
J J Loch
My hand has flown to my throat. Great story!!! Thanks for the visit on Blog Catalog. I’m thrilled to have found your site!!!
Thank you J J and welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
August 24, 2007 at 10:46 am
litlove
It’s the realization that that first separation was only a rehearsal of loss that makes this so gut-punchingly powerful. The lessons are supposed to have been learned, the catharsis played out, but that sudden, brutal repetition of loss at the end makes us look ahead to the story of inexpressible anguish that was almost written the first time around. Of course, until that ending, we didn’t know the first separation was a rehearsal. So cleverly structured, David, and exquisitely written.
They’re all rehearsals, aren’t they, Litlove, for the separation we can’t express? Thank you.
–David
August 24, 2007 at 7:55 pm
Evelyn
Oh gaaaad! She went the wrong way! Aaaaarrrrggghh! Instant emotional response. Good job! As if I didn’t know there would be. 🙂 I miss you! Needed a fix! Hugs, ~Sprite~
Hugs back at ya, Sprite! Good to see you.
–David
August 27, 2007 at 9:42 pm
LiteraryMinded
I love the expression of her guilt and how she cannot look at the other adults. Thanks for finding me and telling me of your site 🙂
You know, with a name like LiteraryMinded, it’s not as if you were hiding! Thanks Angela, and welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
August 30, 2007 at 6:50 pm
Teresa
Worry worry worry. Not the baby! Geez, shame and guilt and fear and love is a full time job. How do we ever get the laundry done?
Not to mention make our planes on time! Thanks Teresa.
–David
September 9, 2007 at 2:27 am
wizzer
So touching – can there be a greater pain?
If the child didn’t mind being lost, that might be worse. Thanks, Wizzer.
–David