He sits in a chair of his own design, hewn from local timber. Arms laid like lumber on the armrests, trunk immobile, head erect, eyes at rest, he sees and judges who passes before him. Mostly, that’s us. Hewn, he said: Spelled like sewn, but rhymes with impugn. We listen, but we don’t always learn. Meaning, in this case, shaped from something larger, by cutting strokes, as with an ax. We nodded. Hewn, we repeated, Shaped with an ax. His right hand is raised in something like acknowledgment, greeting or blessing. His left hand curls around the armrest grip. Stationary in action, he moves by getting us to move. Climb up on my knee, he said, and we fetched the ladders and climbed. We would go to school if he’d let us, and make plans for Sloppy Joes with friends after class, or play games of offense and defense, but we’re cut from something larger than a school, and our arena is bigger than any arena. Let me tell you, he said, About the day I killed my family. This is our favorite story. We lay back and curled into the folds of his monumental trouser legs and closed our eyes to listen. Sit up, he said, This is important. My little sister thought he was teasing and giggled. I clamped my hand over her mouth. They knew as well as I did that the day had come, he told us. One by one, I looked into their eyes, and saw that they understood, even as I broke their bodies apart, that they were the heroes, and that heroes are born to be broken. Now, don’t you children have anything better to do? he asked us. We climbed down the ladders and went to the shed for our axes.
Copyright © August 28, 2007 David Hodges
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August 28, 2007 at 5:20 pm
briseis
Lovely, lovely piece.
Peaceful, despite itself.
Thank you, Briseis. That’s a beautiful reaction.
–David
August 28, 2007 at 9:23 pm
grantman
most interesting…taking it literally: we all have to break the mold from whence we came, to become ourselves, yet like the little one who “giggled,” we have to have a certain amount of innocence, tempered by reverence for the past, to do it….
grantman
Literally or figuratively, if you give axes to kids, something will get axed. Thanks, grantman.
–David
August 29, 2007 at 3:32 am
ideasmith
Beautiful story. What lovely imagery…complete with a really good idea!
Thank you, ideasmith! Good to see you back.
–David
August 29, 2007 at 6:59 am
Jenn
great story – liked reading this
Why thank you, Jenn, and welcome to Very Short Novels. I’m a fan of “Lie a Little” too.
–David
August 29, 2007 at 8:26 am
Gautam
Great one David. “..he moves by getting us to move..” is such a powerful line and so aptly used. I’ve been contemplating on doing a series of 299s on film at my blog as a sort of homage to your invention. I’ll let you know when I do.
Thanks,
Well, sure, Gautam, that would be fun. Check out “How to Live and Why” if you like: it’s as close as I’ve come to “doing a 299 on film” myself, as it is based in part on “Man on Fire.”
–David
August 29, 2007 at 9:14 am
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August 29, 2007 at 10:33 am
ramonez
Loved the hands, David.
That right hand, I tell you. I did it myself as I read it.
“His right hand is raised in something like acknowledgment, greeting or blessing. His left hand curls around the armrest grip.”
Brilliant stuff!
It’s something I read about the Lincoln Memorial, Ramon. All praise the sculptor.
–David
August 29, 2007 at 2:42 pm
c'est moi
I was picturing the Lincoln Memorial as I read the story.
I’m afraid that I often don’t understand the deeper meaning behind your stories. They are addictive reading and I visit here often, but I just don’t know if you are making a specific point, or addressing several issues, or if I’m supposed to just interpret it how I want to and add all sorts of insightful tidbits and pretend I understand.
Thank you, though, for the stories. As I said they are addictive- also beautifully written.
I’ll bet you know some parables that affect you the same way. Here’s what I think, sonshine: Story isn’t argument; it’s song.
–David
August 30, 2007 at 7:58 pm
Anna
Boy!!! you always have ideas for these cool short stories. Enjoyed as always. Anna 🙂
I love that you so often tell me, Anna! Thanks.
–David
August 31, 2007 at 8:22 am
bosquechica
ooh – comment on the comment: Story isn’t argument; it’s song. Exactly! Wish I’d said that . . . You are an excellent motivator, by the way. Quick, beautiful stories, well rendered and thoughtful. they are helping me start over after a slump.
Regards, BC (AKA teresa from cuentos)
Beautiful, Teresa. I love the thought of being an inspiration. Thank you.
–David
September 9, 2007 at 2:33 am
wizzer
Where do the ideas for these dark ones come from? As engaging as ever.
Just re-working an old myth, Wizzer. Thanks!
–David
September 14, 2007 at 7:48 pm
nursemyra
scary…
Hey, thanks, nursemyra!
–David