My daughter Magda is four years old and a frightening specimen. I’m running out of preschools that will take her. “We can’t tell when she’s kidding,” they tell me, “It scares us.” I know: you need an example. Yesterday in the grocery store, darling little Magda, riding in the shopping cart, waved a cucumber at the checkout girl and said, “Hey, Daddy, what does this look like?” I don’t know how she knows what it looks like, but she has access to books. They had to give her a library card when she completed her own application. And found a typo. She’s doing a play for preschool called “My Garden.” They’ve cast her as The Worm. She asked me to contribute a poem and here’s what I wrote:
A little worm is born with me.
He eats me as I go.
And everything I think I learn,
The worm already knows.
My life’s discreet; I eat no meat;
The cows die anyway.
The worms all gather, in apocalyptic weather,
And make a last meal of the one that got away.
I fall in love, which makes them laugh.
My lover dies before me.
I make the world a better place;
My neighbors all abhor me.
Then I got stuck. Magda said she could finish it for me. Tonight, backstage, I overheard her talking to her teacher who already looked appalled. “Mommy died,” she told the poor woman, “But Daddy was acquitted.” She was adorable in her little worm costume, under the spotlights as always, out on that other stage. I heard my poem read aloud, then this:
The worm’s is not an easy life.
She lives on human fatality.
She chews on bone and drinks our tears,
And crawls through the marrow with a
Certain, if inconvenient, undeniable vitality.
Copyright © September 08, 2007 David Hodges
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September 8, 2007 at 11:51 am
verbivore
“And crawls through the marrow with a
Certain, if inconvenient, undeniable vitality.”
Chilling. I can’t add anything but my sincerest praise.
Verbivore, you are wonderful to check in so often with your appreciation. I thank you.
–David
September 8, 2007 at 12:17 pm
WalksFarWoman
Thanks for the laugh, David. So different, so brilliant, so you!
WFW! Thank you! With that sort of encouragement, I’ll keep on trying something new.
–David
September 8, 2007 at 1:24 pm
briseis
My goodness, David! This is spectacular!
Thank you, Briseis! I love to hear you say so.
–David
September 8, 2007 at 1:50 pm
Slices of Life
Amazing! Is this a true story? If it is, you’re up for some lively parenthood, it seems 🙂
No, Slices of Life. The entire collection of Very Short Novels is one big pack of lies. Honestly. Welcome to the party!
–David
September 8, 2007 at 2:40 pm
briseis
Interesting name choice, by the way.
Thanks, Briseis. I’m not sure why it feels so right, but I couldn’t resist it.
–David
September 9, 2007 at 2:13 am
wizzer
A poet as well, David. What an interesting piece – brilliant way to show Magda’s understanding of her role in life!
I don’t make claims to poetry, Wizzer. I’m just happy if the verses worked in the story. Thanks!
–David
September 9, 2007 at 3:43 am
Manictastic
Chilling. Kids are so smart (yes I consider myself still a kid 🙂 )
Around here, you can consider yourself anything you like, Manictastic. Thanks!
–David
September 9, 2007 at 9:02 pm
Kathleen Maher
Very spooky. I noticed WalksFarWoman said this was “so you.” She must have read more of your work, more closely.
Some of your stories I think in a blind reading I might guess were yours. Your voice is distinctive and you write in a form that impresses me as unique to you. But this story? It might well be my favorite in and of itself. Yet for me it resounds differently than your other stories; differently from any story, as if you’ve discovered a heretofore hidden wormhole. Bravo!
I guess I just tire easily of forms I’ve tried, Kathleen. But 299 words seems to be a big enough space to handle various styles. Thank you so much.
–David
September 9, 2007 at 10:23 pm
Anna
I actually found this story very cute. I don’t know how you do it, but you connect the dots so perfectly, the story lines and the poem lines are in unity. Thanks for writing, anna 🙂
And thank you, Anna. I’m delighted there can be such different reactions.
–David
September 10, 2007 at 2:02 pm
Selina
David,
I love your daughter! I hope my girls (who are now 2.5) turn out just like that. They are already showing signs of fierce quirkinesses and honesty. One of them I’m sure will be a “goth girl” (nobody understands me) and the other, well she can just be plain mean sometimes. They already defy the definition of “little girl”, just like your Magda.
Great piece, as usual. Love the poetry too.
So very kind of you to comment, Selina. Sadly for the world, Magda, like all the named and unnamed characters at Very Short Novels, is a figment of my imagination. I’ve come to know a little bit about your delightful upstarts from your stories at Lingoslinger, and I’m glad for you they’re real!
–David
September 13, 2007 at 8:21 pm
grantman
that was just awesome…hats off…how do you do it!
grantman
Beats me, grantman. Thanks!
–David
October 11, 2007 at 12:57 pm
paisley
i loved this… what a remarkable child… puts me in mind of the little girl in the bad seed….and the poetry was awesome!!!!
I wish I could tell you she exists, but, alas, she is a fiction. Thanks, Paisley.
–David
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November 24, 2008 at 3:06 pm
Owen Gray
She may be fiction. But, as they say, “out of the mouth of babes. . .”
Thanks, Owen. Somebody else said “Did it happen? No. Is it true? Yes.” I strive for just that sort of truth. Or a good joke, either one.
–David