Two inches in any direction would topple the whole apparatus. But don’t think. Don’t think for godssake don’t talk, embrace the hug. Two inches along the plane defined by the circle of the horizon in any direction, if you must. But stop. You know what happens, people don’t know how to take you, you tempt misunderstanding, the wary eye and muscled intervention when you talk. Stand still and hold her tiny closely and breathe, loosely but closely and breathe with that deep and patient regularity they taught you for years of independent living and longevity, smell her hair and work your process. Never risk the Tuesdays. Fabric in your fingers is just fabric, not the pulse of another heart. She works for you. Her forehead on your collarbone is just another bone despite your need to anthropomorphize human parts into something more meaningful. To her, you’re a client, a patient, which? Are there words more dismissive? You’ve been leaning forward too long, thinking you had something to offer, that you could sustain it, and she has been squirming from your embrace since before it began. It’s just another Tuesday. You’re standing and you know the time. Her arms hang by her sides and still you clutch her. That’s some hug, you hear her say, the breath of three words on your neck. Forget about whether she’s wearing a ring and who might have given or lent it to her and why, the process is what keeps you from the rabbit hole. Compared to the cycle of seven days, your significance to her is nothing. Release her. Feel the small vibration of her careful voice recede and release its Thanks, and stand tall briefly, precariously on your own in the only time of day of the only day you know.
Copyright © September 21, 2007 David Hodges
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September 21, 2007 at 4:28 pm
Cinema 299, Episode 2: The Director
[…] are precisely 299 words in length. Anything more is waste. Today, I’d like to recommend David’s Some Hug Gautam Valluri Designer, Film Lover, Blogger and Interviewer. Vegan since 2006 and […]
September 21, 2007 at 4:31 pm
Gautam
Exceptional post David. ‘…the breath of three words on your neck.’ – Wow!
Thanks, Gautam. You’ve worked some beautiful effects at Cinema 299 as well.
–David
September 21, 2007 at 4:39 pm
pmousse
That’s some novel.
Thanks, pmousse!
–David
September 21, 2007 at 7:19 pm
nursemyra
really lovely david. never risk the tuesdays
Thank you, nursemyra. Watch your Wednesdays, too.
–David
September 22, 2007 at 9:09 am
Manictastic
Her forehead on your collarbone is just another bone despite your need to anthropomorphize human parts into something more meaningful.
I love this sentence. I’m thinking and I know I’m judging this as bad that you could be trying to say: look, literature analysts, don’t dissect every single word I write (no pun intended). Look now, I’ve analysed your writing (act like you preach, right?).
Thanks, manictastic. Actually, I was just trying to misuse anthropomorphize to make a bad joke. Guess I got what I deserve.
–David
September 22, 2007 at 11:01 am
litlove
Such a brilliant meditation on risk and vulnerability. I so want your narrator to be hugged right back.
Litlove! Having you back in comments feels very much like a hug. Thank you so much.
–David
September 22, 2007 at 12:52 pm
bosquechica
Whew. I like that. Thought yeah the anthropomorphized bone, the depersonalized patient/client, the distance of flesh on flesh. That’s some hug, alright.
That’s some comment, bosquechica! Thank you.
–David
September 24, 2007 at 5:40 am
blogOloco
so good i don’t understand it.
seriously it’s impressive writing.
Thanks, blogOloco. I appreciate your joke and its implied advice. Welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
September 24, 2007 at 6:14 am
Wizzer
I do so enjoy your explorations of the different perspectives of your characters and how often one voices their take on the others viewpoint.
“To her you’re a client, a patient…” I wonder, is that how she really sees it also. There is always so much more depth to your work than a first or even second read reveals.
Thanks, Wizzer! That complexity is what makes the first-person perspective so appealing.
–David
September 26, 2007 at 10:10 pm
Anna
I couldn’t stop reading, I really like this one. Sorry I have not been around, but here I am, lol. Anna 🙂 Glad to be back.
Happy to have you back, Anna! Thanks.
–David
September 28, 2007 at 9:39 pm
Anna
You are very welcome David, just so you know I visit as guest to read only. Enjoy your blog very much. Anna 🙂
I appreciate it, Anna. Thank you.
–David
October 11, 2007 at 12:50 pm
paisley
some self worth…..
Nobody can give you that.
–David
June 6, 2008 at 12:51 am
Hoda Zaki
“But don’t think. Don’t think for godssake don’t talk, embrace the hug.” Yes, that’s good advice… Wouldn’t you love for it to work every time…every hug?
Lovely story overflowing with Hugs and Tuesdays.
Hoda
Thank you, Hoda. It seems like good advice for any day of the week.
–David