The girl who circled the world traveled sometimes by water, sometimes by wind, arrived always lightly carrying nothing but what she knew, departed again when she had delivered it all. If they were wrong, the lessons she taught, she taught wrong lessons well. Once she arrived with a boy and left with a man, but mostly she left the men behind; more often than not she outran them. The minute she knew what a man was about, or a country, she wanted to test what she’d learned on the next one. She broke the hearts of several civilizations, but not mine. Startlingly blond she was, and short and strong, with reflective eyes that picked up their color from whatever she was near. Her voice, too, sang the music of her newest neighborhood, but rang with deep echoes of everywhere she’d been. Her passport might have been issued by Earth. I met her in Kamakura. She’d just arrived from Kingston; the English she had learned to organize a Jamaican mango cooperative she was now teaching to Japanese businessmen at the Literary Museum night school. De one bud in de hand beats de two bud in de bush, she taught them. I thought she was an idiot. But six months later, I had to flee to keep from being the one who was left behind. Neither I nor cellophane-thin Japan could have kept her. We didn’t offer enough surprise. She didn’t travel to discover that home is where the heart is; she didn’t travel to discover anything at all. The one time we’ve seen each other since, accidentally, on the continent, I told her she travels like a bee spreading pollen. I thought she might sting me. Instead I got that smile that makes me wish I could keep her interested.
Copyright © September 29, 2007 David Hodges
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September 30, 2007 at 12:22 am
briseis
Oh! David, this is gorgeous!
What a lovely melancholy you’ve painted this with, what endearing distance.
Marvelous.
My, Briseis! Just one of those compliments would have been sufficient! Thank you.
–David
September 30, 2007 at 12:55 am
Gautam
What a trip! It’s an action-packed adventure—a slightly surreal one too. I’ve just read a marvellous short story by Jane Gardam called ‘Light’ and ‘Circle the World’ shares the same sense of wonder.
It’s very inspiring David!
Thanks, Gautam. I’m off to find “Light”!
–David
September 30, 2007 at 3:10 am
Manictastic
I can almost feel the pain in the dude’s heart. In the words of the great Fresh Prince (aka Will Smith): girls ain’t nothing but trouble.
Wow. Fresh Prince gets the job done in 5 words!
–David
September 30, 2007 at 1:23 pm
André Benjamim
Hello David,
I’ve been on holidays, and because of that, I almost didn’t visit any blog. Today, I’ve read all your short stories that I’ve missed, and I leave this comment/message as a little incentive to you to keep the good stories. And, as I’ve already told you, when you publish the Portuguese translation of your book-to-come I’ll run to buy it! I enjoyed specially the River novel. Embrace from Portugal. André Benjamim.
Very kind of you, Andre! Thank you.
–David
September 30, 2007 at 6:00 pm
badthing
Hi David 🙂
Guess who is going on my blogrolling list? Ummm…YOU? 😉
That was my first guess! Thanks, badthing.
–David
September 30, 2007 at 8:08 pm
pmousse
She sounds absolutely wonderful. And possibly like my soulmate. 🙂 There’s a lot to be said for being the one who keeps moving, who leaves them behind.
Glad you like her, pmousse. I’m very fond of her, too. Thanks!
–David
October 1, 2007 at 1:35 am
verbivore
I like how the narrator jumps ship to pre-empt his own abandonment. And “She broke the hearts of several civilizations, but not mine,” is such a great line.
Likewise, verbivore, “jumps ship to pre-empt his own abandonment” is very nice! Thank you.
–David
October 2, 2007 at 6:23 am
Wizzer
Exquisite, David. When middle age befalls us, how enticing to have such an elusive spirit to remind us of what is possible in life!
No need to resort to the m-word, wizzer, but I do appreciate the compliment. Thanks!
–David
October 2, 2007 at 8:28 am
litlove
What a beautiful myth for modern times! I wanted to think of something clever to say, but all I really want to tell you is that I loved it. I was particularly enamoured of your vacillating narrator, who doesn’t know whether he’s hunter or hunted but is trying to hang on to the safe position of independent expert witness. Just delightful!
That all sounds pretty clever to me, Litlove! Thank you.
–David
October 2, 2007 at 5:07 pm
c'est moi
This is very beautiful. What are your plans for 6pm on March the 14th, 2008?
I have a wedding to go to, sweetheart. What are your plans?
–Uncle David
I’ll be the one in the white dress!
–c’est moi
October 4, 2007 at 11:45 am
Emms
my favourite. reminds me of a girl called starcall from the book with the same title 🙂
Why did it take me so long to find and reply to this lovely comment? Thank you, Emms, for taking the time. I appreciate it, and welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
October 4, 2007 at 9:10 pm
Andrew
What I like about her is that she represents that adventure we all seek. Whether it be love, action, travel, she’s that elusive enigma that scares yet intrigues.
This is my first visit here and I enjoyed the post! Do you always stay true to the 299?
Thanks, Andrew and welcome to Very Short Novels. Yes, they’re always 299.
–David
October 4, 2007 at 9:33 pm
grantman
you have captured that essence we all feel in a relationship that both scares us all to death yet draws us into it like a moth to a flame…well done…well done indeed…
grantman
Thanks, grantman. I guess she is a little intimidating!
–David
October 11, 2007 at 7:25 am
Abby F
Hello,
I stumbled upon your blog and stayed for a delightful read. Love your work, David. Added your blog to my b-roll. If you can advise me on how to add a feed to my blog, I’ll gladly do it. Stop by (http://writeitabbyf.wordpress.com/) anytime.
I will stop by, and if I can help, I’ll gladly do it. Thank you for your lovely compliment, Abby, and welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
October 11, 2007 at 12:46 pm
paisley
this one was excellent… i am a bit behind in my reading but i am here to catch up today…..
That’s OK, Paisley. I’m behind in my writing, too. I owe everybody another very soon.
–David
October 17, 2007 at 10:50 am
Yu
She’s like magic.
But you made her.
So you weave magic.
=]
I miss reading your stories.
– yu.
That’s very sweet, Yu. Thank you.
–David
October 22, 2007 at 6:58 am
Nathan
Im sorry i can’t put across a meaning of greatness quite like the others, but like the others i thought this story was great… i want to get into short story writing, but i don’t quite have the vocabulary
Of course you do, Nathan. No such thing as a vocabulary is required. You need either craft or heart or a bit of both; good grammar is a plus; find a strong narrative or develop a method for making something out of nothing. Actually, it’s starting to sound complicated. Anyway, you missed the memo: this is a no-apologies comment zone. I’m happy for your visit and your kind compliment. Welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
October 26, 2007 at 5:35 pm
I've Been Reading Very Short Novels Again : Travel Tripz
[…] daughter was talking last night at dinner about one of the stories she read called Circle the World and said I had to read this, so this morning I sat down at the computer with a cup of tea and did […]
How very nice of you, traveltripz. Thank you.
–David
November 21, 2007 at 9:52 am
Jamaican Dawta
I like this very, very much. She reminds me of a hummingbird, which is Jamaica’s national bird. Have you ever seen one? The way they flit and dart from one flower to the next at an amazing speed is something to behold. Your use of Jamaican Creole was a nice touch too. Sweet, like our mangoes, and hitting the spot just right. 🙂
Thank you, Jamaican Dawta. I appreciate your feedback. The incomparable young woman on whom this story is based just happens to have a hummingbird feeder at her back door.
–David