He says he has to release the tape in service to the truth. I think he means The Truth, but the truth is the story’s not his to tell. He’s embedded with us again, running tape while we clear this mosque again of insurgents and search it again for weapons. Like changing shifts, we enter the mosque as other marines depart. Our enemy works in shifts too. At 500 meters he’s a target returning fire; at 10 meters he’s a guide with pointing fingers giving up rebel enclaves; closer than that and he’s hostile again, hopped on uppers, suddenly armed. We do our best to kill him before he turns civilian again. We left you some wounded in there, the other grunts tell us as we enter the mosque. Any weapons? we ask, but they’re already gone. You hear it on the tape, that silence of no answer. We enter the murk and follow the moans of men who want to do one more thing. Dead and wounded awaiting transport line the walls, none of them standing. The camera picks out two, one dead, one shot and breathing fresh bubbles of blood. I enter the frame, still bloody myself from the shot I took to the face, and raise my rifle to the one who’s faking death and do my job. I think of how that looked on tape as I lift this casualty into the ambulance come to collect him. It’s hard work hauling a city away to hospitals and cemeteries when they don’t want to go. He feels too heavy for his size and I worry how well he was scanned for whatever he might be concealing. We touch these people every day in ways we may not understand and sometimes when we touch them, they explode.
Copyright © October 25, 2007 David Hodges
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October 27, 2007 at 8:26 am
litlove
Brutal and dark, but so very lucid. You make me wish I were still teaching a seminar I used to take on violence in narrative, David. This would be so perfect for it. We used to talk about the way that violence was the place where narrative fell silent because it couldn’t touch the truth of the act; not that language doesn’t try to explain violence, it does, a lot, and often, but anything said about extreme violence seems to exist on a different plane of reality. You put the words war and truth together in this vsn whilst showing how resolutely they cannot unite, and as ever the perspective of your piece is clever in the way it opens up a dimension where the reader can see that very impossibility.
You’re so right, Litlove. Texts about war and texts about sex both become pornographic when they focus on the details. As for the truth, if we don’t know how to tell it, we should at least say why. Thank you.
–David
October 27, 2007 at 6:04 pm
grantman
this one gave me pause . . . my first thought being, been there, done that . . . just a different place; a different time . . . war is not only hell . . . it is contagious . . . and once you catch it . . . you have it for life . . . yours and the ones you remember catching it from and with . . . .
grantman
You know more about it than I do, grantman. I’m glad if the scene seemed reasonable to you. It’s certainly nothing I have ever experienced.
–David
October 27, 2007 at 8:58 pm
briseis
You’re amazing, David. I’ve already told you most of my opinions on the piece, but let me re-iterate how much I love your play with “again.” Astounding.
Thank you, Briseis. I had to fish your comment out of the spam filter again, but it was worth going fishing!
–David
October 28, 2007 at 4:19 am
Genie King
Really captures the confusion and uncertain decisions of war. Nice!
Thank you, Genie King and welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
October 28, 2007 at 4:19 am
Wizzer
David, this one seems so real to me, though I’ve had no personal experience, it is almost like a newsreel documentary. So many perspectives – who is right?
The frightening thing is that these guys have no choice and have to “do my job”.
grantman, I can only imagine how bad it must be to “catch it for life”. Those of us who have not had to endure such hell should be truly thankful – for that and to those who have caught it.
Thanks, Wizzer.
–David
October 28, 2007 at 5:37 am
Sriram
Thanks for recommending this..Will read this.
No idea what you mean, Sriram, but welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
October 28, 2007 at 5:50 am
Virgilius Sade
Gruesome. I hope to see a rainbow after this unfortunate rain of blood.
Luck of the draw, Virgilius. Sometimes you get three face cards in a row.
–David
October 31, 2007 at 12:43 pm
Mr. Grudge
Hi David,
This is powerful stuff. Taken from the newsreels I suppose? I can read your blog for hours.
That’s right, Grudge. This is the story of a tape recorded by Kevin Sites. Thanks for your kind comment and welcome to Very Short Novels. I love your stuff, too. Your name will show up alphabetically in the Rolling Blogroll, or readers can link back to you from here today!
–David
Thank you, David. I’ve added you to the list of Mr. Grudge’s friends. Have a great Halloween!
~Mike~ (Mr. Grudge)
November 7, 2007 at 11:27 am
c'est moi
Hi again!
I’m afraid that you owe my employer a few hours wages for being so fascinating that I cannot help but read your blog on work time. This was really wonderful.
Denying all personal responsibility,
Moi
Thank you, Moi! I don’t see how I’m responsible for your job being insufficiently fascinating, but I do appreciate the compliment.
–David
November 8, 2007 at 4:23 am
Travel Tripz
[…] But of course I didn’t stop there, once you start it is very hard to stop reading the next and then the next story. I particularly liked Bridge Toll, the kid could be my grandson, the other Truth at War . […]
Thanks for the link, Travel Tripz.
–David
April 12, 2008 at 11:10 am
Hoda Zaki
David,
This is a powerful piece about the death of peace. The repetition of “again” did not only hold the reader captive the whole story, but it also symbolized the “no-end at sight” of this war. The story also shows how soldiers have no time to think. They act like machines to protect each other. I understand now he shot the man who was still alive because he assumed he’s faking death. It’s a beautiful piece.
Hoda
Thank you, Hoda. I only hope there’s some truth to this telling. I welcome any soldier with first-hand knowledge to help me get it right.
–David