I don’t know this man across the table but if we’re dating, I’m a reasonably lucky woman, depending on my age, my looks. I don’t know much. A plate of eggs and bacon before him, scrambled soft, I believe they call it and nearby, toast in uneven stacks, so the meal is underway. Is this breakfast? Poised before me a spoon of hot soup spells out LTOS and maybe an E under the carrot, which only confuses the issue. This might be lunch. He mentions people I don’t know, but casually, not waiting for me to recognize or reply. The waitress comes with coffee and fills his cup, so he’s a coffee drinker, and so am I, I see, she gives me decaf. There’s bacon on a little plate for me; it can’t have come with soup: he shares! He shares with me and looks at me with, is that love? It’s certainly close attention. I stop him talking by placing a hand on his. His looks at me with—the waitress is back. He clearly likes her and uses her name, but keeps a careful eye on me. I look at and withdraw my withered hand and see it for the first time. A customer walks by whistling a song I strain to recognize. I notice I’m holding that spoonful of soup and return it to the bowl and as the letters swim to rejoin the alphabet the lyrics form in my head like learning to read: Nearer my God to Thee. It must be Josephson coming to lunch from church and whistling his hymns. Of course, and this is the diner down the street and this reasonably charming boy is my dear second son who doesn’t work but buys me lunch and is showing me some investments.
Copyright © November 10, 2007 David Hodges
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November 11, 2007 at 9:48 am
pmousse
Wonderful. You captured that frightening point of view so well, and how one memory brought the rest back in a train and in a rush. I love that the soup letters spelled “LOST”.
Thanks, pmousse!
–David
November 11, 2007 at 3:45 pm
briseis
Spooky, wonderful, endearing. You’re a master at this art form, David.
Very kind, Briseis. Thank you.
–David
November 13, 2007 at 3:34 am
Litlove
This is rather beautiful. I can only hope when I’m old and confused that I have someone as caring and tender to accompany me through my breakfast. I thought alphabet soup was a great metaphor – the tempting possibility of coherence, so near, and yet so scrambled.
Scrambled soft, I think they call it. Thank you, Litlove.
–David
November 13, 2007 at 9:33 am
Wizzer
How sad life can be to bring such confusion yet maybe, if your narrator is to be believed, one can still be happy and comforted by those that love?
We can hope so. Thanks, Wizzer.
–David
November 13, 2007 at 2:43 pm
grantman
why did I get it that the person was eating in front of a mirror, and all of those thoughts were running through the author’s head as he reflected on a world going by; with or without him, one way or the other….great job
grantman
Reflected! Good one, grantman. Interesting reading.
–David
November 14, 2007 at 3:18 am
Thanh N
Hey David. It is soo geat to me. Continously please.
I always meet equally sittuation in my life. I some time Share with they What I having. I really like Alphabet Soup.
Have a successfull. See you soon. Lovely.
Hey Thanh! I think we can all agree with that.
–David
November 15, 2007 at 6:08 am
WalksFarWoman
Oh my David – I’m worried. That second son is a rogue and his confused mother is about to get ink on her hand at any moment when she signs those papers he has furtively hidden in the portfolio….;)
Certainly a possibility, WalksFarWoman! Thanks.
–David
November 20, 2007 at 9:17 am
modoathii
ain’t i glad i stumbled on your writing. quite powerful writing. indeed as grantman said, you’s a master, maaan!
i love the way you told this. i can’t stop laughing at the twist…hahaha…kool!
Thank you, modoathii! And thank you, grantman.
–David
November 20, 2007 at 3:19 pm
Cyberchic
What a great blog idea! I love this post especially because you capture the essence of the situation without melodrama. I’ll definitely keep visiting!
I hope you do, Cyberchic, and that you continue to let me know what you’ve read. Welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David