—What does she look like?
—I don’t know who you mean.
—The slut your father’s sleeping with.
—Oh. There’s no such person.
I began to follow her then, in anticipation. I cut school and took my bike. She worked in town and lived in an apartment. She smoked and kept a messy glove box.
—Have you taken her picture?
—You don’t want a picture.
—Your teacher called.
Her boss was a creep, and handsy. He worked her late. I went to the apartment and found a picture of Dad. It didn’t look like him, with his arm around her, smiling. I heard the door.
—Who’s here?
—Burglars.
—You’re Frank’s son. You’ve been following me.
—You don’t know that.
—I do now.
We shared a sandwich. She kept a couple cigarettes going. She got up and came back in a loose robe. The smoke detector started to wail. I picked up Dad’s picture and went to the door.
—That’ll stop.
—No, it won’t. It’ll go on forever.
I’d never had a reason to go to his office. (Does everybody hide keys in the same place?) I left the lights off and followed the scent of smoke. The desk was him. The chair was pure Dad. I found a picture that didn’t look like him, with his arm around Mom, smiling. I heard the door.
—What are you doing here?
—Looking at pictures.
—Your teacher called.
—Don’t even start.
—What do you want, son?
—Mom needs you home.
I took her what I had. Two shots from the same roll is what they looked like.
—I don’t understand.
—It’s you, Mom. They’re both you.
—I’d like to kill them both.
—Good idea. We can start fresh in Canada.
—What could fifth grade ever do for you, son?
—Maybe provide an alibi?
Copyright © November 21, 2007 David Hodges
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November 22, 2007 at 3:54 am
Wizzer
I can’t help wondering whether it’s the smoke detector or something else that will go on for ever.
Love the use of school as an avoiding tactic throughout.
Thanks, Wizzer. Something else, I think.
–David
November 22, 2007 at 5:58 am
Manictastic
I like the way how you dumber down your English to match with the fifth-grade narrator. And of course the fact that school is an alibi 🙂
Thanks, Manic.
–David
November 24, 2007 at 7:34 pm
Dean West
Impressive flash
thanks for the read
Thanks, Dean, and welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
November 26, 2007 at 4:18 am
Litlove
I loved the metonymic circularity of this and the way each fragment of dialogue was a little back and forth that danced with a certain way of knowing or understanding what was happening. I thought it was a kind of 21st century rewrite of A Sentimental Education – who needs 5th grade (except as an alibi) when there is so much life education on offer elsewhere?
Metonymic, is it? Thank you, Litlove. I love coming to you to discover my influences. This young narrator might have Flaubert’s cold eye.
–David