A steady breeze billows the laundry on the line in photograph after black-and-white photograph along the gallery walls. Dad says they make the breeze visible. He’s impressive that way, but I don’t say so. We’re at the gallery again, for the fifth time this week, hoping she’ll come tonight, but he doesn’t say so. He’s careful what he tells me because I’m sick. Dad says from affliction comes perspective and that as a photographer he should know about perspective. I think he knows more about affliction than he’s letting on, but what do I know, I’m an epileptic kid. I tend to see chaos wherever I look. I have this heavy head. A little nudge and down I go. I wear two crystals on a lanyard Dad designed, sapphire against my chest and against my spine a rich green moldavite to balance me and stimulate my vagus nerve. I’d love to believe, but I can’t both wear them and not wear them, so there’s no way to know if they help. The trouble is, I’m getting worse. They call my condition progressive, but that’s just cruel. So where Dad goes I go, to never be far from his sight because he adores and pities me and the thought of me on the floor in a fit makes him weepy. I know. Cool Dad. Sounds easy. This week, we’re on gallery duty, hoping his lovely student shows up, more my age than his. The way he used to look at Mom, that same sad joy, the way he sometimes looks at me, is how he looks at her. When she arrives, he has to pretend he doesn’t notice. The way you act when you know there’s a camera on you: there’s one person in the room he can’t look at.
Copyright © October 11, 2007 David Hodges
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October 12, 2007 at 2:11 am
WalksFarWoman
Oh My David, you captured me from the word go and the use of gemstones validated it as a truly real scenario. Your perception of human nature is as keen as if you were riding a bicycle over a six inch wide plank between 2 high rise buildings. I applaud you!
Wow, WalksFarWoman, thanks! Uphill or down? I’m so glad you liked it and took the time to craft such an elaborate comment.
–David
October 12, 2007 at 2:46 am
Wizzer
David, for me this is one of your finest pieces. For one who knows, you have captured so perfectly the father’s feelings “adores and pities / sounds easy” but the brilliance is that it is narrated by the son. Excellent.
He’s a remarkably understanding son. Thanks, Wizzer.
–David
October 12, 2007 at 6:00 am
nursemyra
oh my this is so moving.
Thank you nursemyra.
–David
October 12, 2007 at 11:08 pm
briseis
David! You surprise me.
Here, I’d thought (once again) that you couldn’t get any more intriguing, that your work couldn’t be more lovely. Thank you for proving me wrong!
There’s a sweet kind of sorrow in this that I love – you make all the awful things seem so lovely. And I’m very much intrigued by the father’s fancy.
[For some reason, I’m reminded of “Romantics,” by Lisel Mueller – I think the cue is hidden somewhere in your last two sentences.]
This is absolutely stunning, David.
Looking for hidden cues will only drag you in deeper, Briseis. I’m off to find “Romantics” now for myself. Thank you for the pointer.
–David
October 13, 2007 at 8:46 pm
pmousse
“They call my condition progressive, but that’s just cruel.”
Amazing. You can imagine this precocious child, having that thought, recognizing that it is profound, and coming back to it every time he thinks about “his condition”. Once again, great work with the new ‘voice’.
I count on you to appreciate these details, pmousse. Thank you.
–David
October 15, 2007 at 3:02 am
briseis
Re-reading this (re-re-re-reading it, more likely) uncovers so many delicacies. I love that it’s the “fifth night”—what if he doesn’t see the lovely student, loses her for the weekend?
I’m sure you’re right, Briseis.
And how unfair—while the student is in his class, he’s forced to bear her scrutiny (here I’m making the assumption that the student is a conscientious one—I can’t imagine a teacher actively hoping to see an irreverent slacker who disregards him) during class-periods, but when the tables are turned, he can’t return the gaze. How terrible of you to place him in such a circumstance, David.
I don’t know about “forced to bear.”
And I didn’t mention before how much I’m amazed at the epileptic’s self-description—how touching, how removed, and how flawless.
Thank you, Briseis, for the reading, the commenting, the re-reading, the re-commenting, . . . .
–David
October 16, 2007 at 9:27 pm
grantman
wow…I could feel the brace… the dad was just as real….very good…you gave me a great perspective on how one feels when one is responsible… and I think I could feel the wind blow… how do you do this! What is in your breakfast cereal!
grantman
I could say wheat germ, but you’d think I was making it up. Thanks, grantman.
–David