I usually have to tell my students to question the meanings of photographs and the motives of photographers, but not her. I sense instead, whatever I tell her, she’s wondering why. Standing before her black-and-whites, across the gallery floor I see her enter and find him and go to my son and ask him what is what. She asks as if she doesn’t know what’s what. He rarely makes new memories now, so every meeting must seem like a first, but she takes his hand and guides him through it and breaks my heart at twenty paces that seem like twenty years. Okay, I’m emotional. I watch him with her and envy him that he doesn’t know his future as clearly as I know mine. I need to believe in something. Mornings in class when I tell them how my son is doing, I know whose eyes will moisten and cloud. He finds me now and brings her along to introduce—to me!—the girl I know as well as I know anyone. She’s asked about the stones he wears and he needs me to explain because he wears them for me and not because he believes. I say something even I don’t hear and nobody’s listening now. My voice goes on about color and mineral properties, but words that started out as resonance and attunement break down into chirps and gargling and bits of leaf trash blowing like destiny through our lives. Was I fooled by her eyes the color of amber flecked with mica that she might have the power to save us both? What haven’t I tried? I tell you this, my son, I will spread myself like a sail before any wind that blows. I will give up for nothing as long as you live.
Copyright © December 02, 2007 David Hodges
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December 3, 2007 at 2:11 pm
Wizzer
Oh David that is just so sad. You have totally captured a father’s unquestioning love and pain in so few words. This has been an exceptional series (I hesitate to say trilogy because I don’t know what else you have up your sleeve!).
Thank you, Wizzer. I don’t have plans for four.
–David
December 3, 2007 at 10:31 pm
grantman
the tags tell me art, photography & epilepsy…the words tell me of three stories of three people all in love with different parts of each other’s lives… all with futures tied to a shared past, a past that tragically will end with the death of the son, the birth of the father, and the awakening of the girl photographer… Awesome, just awesome.
grantman
Thanks, grantman. They don’t make tags for all of that!
–David
December 3, 2007 at 11:03 pm
briseis
David, the beauty in this piece leaves me speechless, breathless. It’s entirely magnificent. Thank you for sharing this with us.
I don’t know what to say but thank you, Briseis.
–David
December 4, 2007 at 2:16 am
Sylvie Dakota
I really enjoyed this Wind Prints series. I like how you show temporary windows into these worlds.
Thank you, Sylvie. It’s thoughtful of you to say so. Welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
December 6, 2007 at 11:33 am
verbivore
I love this montage, David. Each one is stunning. I also like the way the emotion gets more intense as the series progresses. Did you write them in order?
The last line of Wind Prints III just howls.
Thank you, verbivore. I did write them in order, yes.
–David
December 10, 2007 at 3:15 pm
JJ LOCH
A beautiful, poignant short with great imagery.
Hugs, JJ
Thank you, JJ, and welcome to Very Short Novels. Nothing pleases me more than comments; I appreciate it very much.
–David
August 9, 2008 at 4:47 pm
briseis
You’re something like prophetic, David. I was in a mood and re-reading these, and you’ve made me all weepy. This is still a lovely series.
I couldn’t have written them without you, Briseis.
–David