The secret I felt thrust upon me is nothing I wish to claim; a syllable it was that earned me this room and in itself the syllable was true. From my small town near Pisa where bread was scarce I’ve journeyed here to a room of my own, impossibly neat and clean, warm with candles and a beautiful book to keep my counsel and a window that looks at the tower. I’m not a student of geometry, but if the shadow reaches my window, won’t the tower crush me when it falls? Yes, I said. My soul was worth a syllable. Yes, I have often dreamed of studying with the Little Brothers at this school. I have no brothers of my own, I told the friar when he asked, and neither do my sisters. If he didn’t follow my logic, am I to blame? He stroked my head and questioned whether I could devote my life to poverty and repentance. I have, I said, as they have devoted themselves to me. He smiled and asked me for a lesson. I told him about the second thief—how salvation was at hand even in the shadow of the cross—and kept to myself what I thought about the first. He brought me here, bid me pray and took my tears for tears of joy. When the tower falls, will I hear the bells in time to repent? They will find me out. The little dog who sleeps outside the confessional knows the difference when I pass, but I will learn to read and write and take what they put before me and if the tower doesn’t smite me where I sit, is it wrong to feel I’m forgiven in advance for taking a room that was meant for a boy?
Copyright © January 08, 2008 David Hodges
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January 8, 2008 at 6:57 am
briseis
David, you know that I think this is beautiful. It’s entrancing.
Thank you, Briseis.
–David
January 8, 2008 at 10:20 am
wailin
David, I just got here and have been awestruck, which is only trumped by my jealousy. I will be returning often.
You’re doing nice work of your own, wailin, but thanks, and welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
January 8, 2008 at 10:16 pm
Virgilius Sade
This like much like a classic Gothic novel with its own style of the poetic.
Thank you, Virgilius.
–David
January 9, 2008 at 7:11 am
Wizzer
I do so enjoy your clues and find myself elated when I spot them, if you follow my logic.
Oh, yeah, I follow your logic. Thanks for the appreciation, wizzer.
–David
January 9, 2008 at 8:25 pm
Teresa
I’m with wailin. This is a terrific piece, as always, and as always I think about your economy of language, so like poetry and yet so clearly narrative fiction. Neat.
Nothing focuses my imagination like the barest structure of a story, Teresa. Thank you for so often leaving me smart comments.
–David
January 9, 2008 at 10:32 pm
grantman
..you are never to old to follow your light or to seek forgiveness, in any way you can find it…. in prose or poetry…. a very moving piece…
grantman
That’s a beautiful sentiment, grantman. Thanks.
–David