Of all my tools, although more often I use a single-edge razor, I’m partial to the paper punch. I love the neat little hole it leaves behind and the ripping thwick of the two round fitted edges cleaving the fabric. If I have time in the dressing room to do more than ruin the garments, I like to punch the holes where my nipples would be if I were trying things on. It must be comical when someone actually does. They tell you they’re not watching, but believe me there are cameras in those dressing rooms. I’ve seen myself on tape, not once, in the back rooms where they hold you for hours when they disagree with your politics. I don’t steal anything. I discount. Sometimes I’m content to alter the dresses still on the racks out in the brightly-lit showrooms. I slide my razor from the waist down to the hem or open an incision across the bust line in the time it takes to check a tag for a markdown. I don’t actually look at the tags any more. They infuriate me and touching them draws the attention of the sales team, but sometimes I’ll clip one to bring home and paste in my book. These are the designers I have bagged; they’ve got some nerve. I don’t take time to savor my successes in the store; the music there will shrink your brain. I cut and punch and walk to the exit, leaving behind my slits and holes and fashion-turned-to-fabric on a hanger, feeling valued. When the sales girl looks me over for bulges, I pinch the blade between my fingers and watch her from the corner of my eye. She doesn’t know she doesn’t want to know me but she doesn’t want to know me.
Copyright © February 07, 2008 David Hodges
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February 8, 2008 at 9:51 am
Emily
That is totally disturbing. Somehow, I feel as if I know a tremendous amount about this person.
Almost as if you had read a very short novel about her? Thanks, Emily. That’s high praise.
–David
February 8, 2008 at 10:58 am
Wizzer
“…feeling valued” What I so admire about your novels David is the way you open up subjects that I wouldn’t otherwise consider. I am at a loss to understand why someone wilfully destroying things would feel valued. I’m certain you are right but this concept really challenges me – there’s so much outside of this story that I’d like to know!
David, thank you for your work – when I’m “bored” with my daily routine I can always rely on you to get the grey matter working overtime.
Thank you, Wizzer. I only hope I’m paying you time-and-a-half. I write, you must know by now, for “you and the few” who don’t want everything handed to them but find it rewarding to wrestle with a text and take it down. I try to fight fair and give you all you can handle but not more.
–David
February 8, 2008 at 1:53 pm
Paul White
That was excellent David. I had that person and the store setting vividly in my head instantly. Uber-creepy. Makes me glad I don’t work in retail, because I get the sneaking suspicion that this person is going to use that razor for more nefarious purposes at some point.
Thanks, Paul. We can only hope someone designs something she likes before it comes to that.
–David
February 9, 2008 at 5:10 am
litlove
Your comment to Paul really made me laugh. I love the way you get right into the perspective of twisted desires, David, and somehow make them seem so very human and real. I really appreciated the laughing, triumphant tone of this, that accompanies your narrator while she accedes to her dark negativity.
Thank you, Litlove. You’ve given me an idea for a title. I don’t believe I answer them for these characters, but I try to ask the questions of their corkscrew hearts.
–David
February 9, 2008 at 7:32 am
archiearchive FCD
“The music there will shrink your brain.” Seven words put the whole story into context. Wonderful writing again, David.
Thanks, Archie! I’m laughing out loud here imagining sales girls who have stayed too long, no longer able to find the exits.
–David
February 10, 2008 at 4:47 pm
first50
Powerful, powerful. And spooky. Well done.
Thank you, Virginia. I’m happy to see you back.
–David
February 11, 2008 at 11:29 am
grantman
..and don’t forget the fluorescent light in those rooms is just god awful ..how anyone can think they look good in anything! this one really was twisted David…
grantman
Have to agree with you there, grantman! That lighting will sizzle the synapses.
–David