He should only hang. He only survived his youth because he had his parents overmatched and lived by their protection. Their idea of punishing Butchie was to limit him to slightly less of something the rest of us couldn’t afford even a little of. He hung with kids whose fathers worked for his dad, so he was king at home and had diplomatic immunity abroad. When he got tired of playing with his stuff alone, he’d come around and break ours. He was sweaty and soft and could ruin an afternoon but we weren’t allowed to send him back home. We could ditch him. Sometimes we’d make him hide and seek and get on our bikes and go, except he’d break our stuff while we were gone. My parents had Butchie and his parents to dinner the night he got the farts at the table. Breaking news! he said the first time and got a nice laugh from his dad. Then began the reading of the encyclopedia of wind. He would not stop. Nobody could eat. Finally, his dad demanded to know what my mom had given him for snacks. She looked at Daddy and Daddy said: Well? What did you give him? I thought she might cry. We went to the living room to break my trucks. Our dads came with cigars and stood looking out the window. Butchie was trying to take the ladder off the hook-and-ladder. Nobody could stop him. Daddy told me to behave without turning around. When the painted metal truck hit him in the back of his head, I felt a sudden thrill. He snatched up Butchie by the hair and yanked him from the floor. All Butchie could do was cry and swing and, pointing, accuse me, but he was already guilty.
Copyright © February 17, 2008 David Hodges
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February 18, 2008 at 7:49 am
Emily
I am always so sad for people raised like that. It is tragic, really. They stand almost no chance to be decent human beings.
That’s just more evidence of your beautiful heart. Thanks, Emily.
–David
February 18, 2008 at 8:23 am
Wizzer
So is it nurture or nature???
Whatever the reason, as Emily says, what chance do the Butchies of this world have?
P.S. My avatar has changed – sorry if you didn’t recognise me!
I wouldn’t say recognize, wizzer, but I did notice the difference!
–David
February 18, 2008 at 10:30 am
grantman
I used to read my daugher a book about a bad little mouse called, ” Wendell.” a terrible house guest, and everyone by the time the visit was over would say, “When will Wendell be going home!” You captured it here real good…despite our best efforts, some are born to be bad!
grantman
I guess we’ve all had to host a Butchie or two. Thanks, grantman.
–David
February 18, 2008 at 12:41 pm
Terry Finley
Short, sweet, and to the point.
I’m impressed.
Thanks, Terry. Welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
February 18, 2008 at 12:58 pm
litlove
But what does Butchie turn out to be in later life? An investment fund manager? A prison guard? A President of the United States? I never know who’s more miserable under the circumstances – the people who have to put up with Butchie, or Butchie who has to put up with himself.
Happily, for once, my narrator found a way to use Butchie’s reputation to his own advantage. I’m more interested in what he grows up to be. Thank you, Litlove.
–David
February 21, 2008 at 8:25 am
Owen Gray
This one really rings true. Everyone of us has known Butchie — and watched as a human life was wasted.
Thanks, Owen, and Welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
February 21, 2008 at 9:04 am
wailin
Teehee
Yeah. Guess we showed ol’ Butchie, didn’t we, wailin?
–David
February 21, 2008 at 4:32 pm
nursemyra
“he was sweaty and soft” those few words create a very unappealing vision
True, nursemyra, and thank you, but I hope you’ll judge him instead for the prick that he was.
–David
February 22, 2008 at 4:06 am
verbivore
I love that you leave the outcome of the Dad’s intervention up in the air. It doesn’t matter whether he gets fired, does it? The Dad gives our narrator a defining moment about justice.
And this line is so great – “he was king at home and had diplomatic immunity abroad”.
Thanks, verbivore! I’ve re-written the last line to make it clearer who threw the truck, but no, you’re right, it doesn’t matter at all what happens after this. The moment is the moment.
–David
February 22, 2008 at 8:41 pm
first50
I can see him before me, little Butchie. I think I know what happened to him when he grew up, too. I think he quit messing with toy trucks and broke his wife.
Or his cellmate. Anyway, I’m glad he’s a vivid character for you, Virginia. Thanks!
–David