We bought the farm, not to grow anything, but because it came with so much food. The farmer had died without a will and let it go for taxes, complete with furniture and cars, and in the barn some big machines we siphoned of their gas to joyride down the country lanes. The first and second seasons we passed lounging on big wicker chairs on the broad porch of the farmhouse, watching the sun rise and set over seas of produce waving in the breeze. Animals happened by as we sat, big-eyed, long-tailed, black and white animals hung with crude bells, trusting and slow, to chew the tender shoots that by rights were ours. We picked them off with rifles we found in the cabinet in the dining room until the ammunition ran out and we didn’t know how to reload. Plants are wasteful, we discovered. So little of what grows on them is really delicious and even the parts that are good soon lose their appeal. But worst of all, they don’t last very long. Of all the acres we command, we can’t have dined from more than a small percentage before everything died, and just as winter was coming on. Some birds about the size of a roasted chicken had moved into one of the smaller buildings; without their eggs I don’t think we’d have survived that age of ice. But now again the grass is greening and the days are getting longer. Little plants are sprouting from last year’s fallen crops. We look out over the softening earth and eat our omelets on the porch and smile in wonder and relief that the beautiful earth might soon reimburse us for the losses we sustained by trusting a farmer whose negligence failed to provide for our future.
Copyright © March 10, 2008 David Hodges
9 comments
Comments feed for this article
March 10, 2008 at 8:34 pm
archiearchive FCD
Oh dear. I think Zimbabwe, I think Hippie Commune and I think of the Indigenous Communities I have seen here in Australia. I think of the third generation of wealthy, powerful families who always seem to go down the path of squandering their heritage because they have forgotten its origins. It is unfair – I need far more than 299 words to talk about this novel!
Archie, you can do it in stages if you like. Consider this your first installment. Thank you for anything else you can tell me about all the ways this novel applies to the world.
–David
March 11, 2008 at 6:21 am
wailin
You lied! It was not mediocre! It’s a truth wrapped in words, David. Were I or anyone I know to somehow have to survive with only a farm’s stock I doubt I’d fare much better. Which is sad. While I have an idea about the ordeal of farming, I don’t think I’d be very good at it. We have lost our roots and ability to provide for ourselves when a plastic package and microwave aren’t available.
That’s why, should there be an apocalypse of some sort and I survive, I trained myself to bake bread the old fashion way. Who would kill the one man who provides the essential staple of human life for thousands of years? Since farming began there was bread, I’m sure. I also took ballroom dancing lessons, because you never know when that will come in handy.
Thank you again, David.
Thank you, Wailin. I’m not sure what I’ll provide to the post-apocalyptic world, but I’m happy to know (if we can find somebody to grow the grain) that there’ll be bread.
–David
March 11, 2008 at 9:02 am
wailin
And the tango. You can’t forget the tango.
Thanks for the reminder.
–David
March 12, 2008 at 11:42 am
Emily
I love this one. There is a lightness to it that belies the seriousness of people’s refusal to take account for their own survival.
Thank you, Emily. Next time I’ll probably write seriously about trivial matters.
–David
March 12, 2008 at 1:46 pm
grantman
…from shirt sleeves to shirt sleeves in three generations is the old saying I believe… this one fully loaded and ripe for discussion.. great job getting folks to think about how little we sometimes appreciate all that has gone before us…
grantman
I don’t think these characters will last three generations. Thanks, grantman!
–David
March 13, 2008 at 3:46 am
anthonynorth
Hi David,
I was advised to take a look at your work as we have a similar liking for writing short short stories.
It was good advice.
Very kind of you, Anthony. Thank you and welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
March 13, 2008 at 4:29 am
verbivore
I’m with Emily about the nice contrast between the seriousness of the subject and the offhand way the narrator reveals himself. I like how you bring the reader into that understanding without giving the narrator the same enlightenment.
I have a new blog project, David, that might interest you as well as or more than my Incurable Logophilia. I’d be honored if you took a peek!
I already like what you have to say about both JM Coetzee and Dom DeLillo. Perspicacious readers would be wise to follow you back to The Reading Writer immediately. Thank you as always, verbivore.
–David
March 14, 2008 at 1:39 pm
Wizzer
And I thought everything came wrapped in cellophane!
It is more convenient that way! Thanks, Wizzer.
–David
March 15, 2008 at 5:35 pm
vdebolt
We do live in a world where people think they are entitled to anything they want for nothing, no effort. You story captures that so well.
Thanks, vdebolt, and Welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David