Neighbors and strangers are holding bits of my childhood up to the sunlight, the better to judge them. Mom and I have arranged the tables in loose chronological order; attentive shoppers moving clockwise will see my unformed adolescent self unfold into hopeful young womanhood over there by the plum tree. How much do you want for this, they ask me. I want my father back, I tell them. I want a better start in life, for everyone, not just me. I want a puppy that never gets old and a girl’s fresh faith in redemptive love. But I’ll take five dollars. I need the money for college. How many times can I do this, I wonder. Four years from now, will the souvenirs of the academic me sell for more or less than these trinkets I’m unloading today? Will Mom be here to lay things out; will she recognize the categories? I wonder too, since I’m selling my past, if I might also get an advance on my old age. That sounds like a deal a student might make. Tomorrow I will leave my yard with nothing but my tuition. Today, though, this is still my square of dirt and on these tables I lie back and stretch my limbs and let the customers pick over my old clothes and help themselves to whatever bits they can afford. I thought that I would study hard and travel far and send for Mom from wherever I landed rather than come back here, but nobody told me the cash would be so contagious and greasy from passing through so many hands. I don’t like where this is headed. I want to buy back everything I’ve sold already and keep what I have, however faded. I want every bit of it back.
Copyright © March 18, 2008 David Hodges
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March 18, 2008 at 10:59 pm
BillyWarhol
Gosh so True*
Thanks, Billy. Great to see you back.
–David
March 19, 2008 at 1:03 am
Kristyn
You’re a great writer. Not many can tell an entire story in so few words. This piece made me a little sad, to be honest. Probably because I can identify with her. The ability to touch one’s audience is priceless and the mark of a true craftsman. Keep writing.
Why, thank you, Kristyn. I guess this feeling is universal. Welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
March 19, 2008 at 6:01 am
verbivore
Such a great mix of nostalgia and anger. I like that you ended with a retreat. Her fear is the strongest element – fear of losing the past and fear of moving into the future.
Thank you, verbivore. That’s beautifully said. Are we directing readers back to incurablelogophilia now, or The Reading Writer. Such a wealth of choices!
http://www.thereadingwriter.blogspot.com
–David
March 19, 2008 at 6:34 am
Emily
DUDE! Come by my place tomorrow. We seem to be having parallel thoughts.
It’s a date.
–David
March 19, 2008 at 1:41 pm
wizzer
David, you know how much I love those seemingly insignificant lines. “I want my father back.” Now where is he, has he died, what happened, probably why she needs the funding but there’s a whole new tale with that line – don’t tell.
There’s something to be said for de-cluttering and moving on – wish I was brave enough to sell all my old stuff!
Thanks, Wizzer. I could tell you what happened, but it might diminish your enjoyment.
–David
March 19, 2008 at 7:23 pm
Simple Zack
Hey man, great story! I love your idea of blogging stories under 299 words each.
Thanks, Zack! Welcome to Very Short Novels. (One common misunderstanding: each is exactly 299 words.)
–David
March 20, 2008 at 7:18 am
wailin
Thank you again, David. Every day I find a new post is like Christmas morning and every tale a pleasant surprise.
Wow. Thanks, wailin. You make me feel like Santa Claus.
–David
March 20, 2008 at 10:00 am
Simple Zack
Exactly 299! Thats even cooler. Good stuff.
Thanks, Zack!
–David
March 23, 2008 at 7:50 am
grantman
…the reality of it is that we are all always unloading our past all the time to live and to survive, selling our past to pay for our future, yet that first realization always hits us the hardest! Nice piece…Saying goodbye is never easy….
grantman
Well said, grantman. Thanks.
–David
April 16, 2008 at 2:37 pm
asecondlook
Once it’s gone though …!
Very nice as always
Craig
You’re so right, Craig. Nobody gets it back. Thanks. Good to see you again.
–David