Here we let the children tell whatever stories serve their needs. We were surprised, though, when they started a church. We had thought, naively it seems, there were enough religions, but they were all founded on faith and suddenly, empty chapels are easy to come by. Dropping by the children’s church on a Thursday after school, we saw two crosses of equal size and prominence on a platform, one for each thief. Both were unmanned. A smiling girl handed us cameras, cookies and something purple to drink. Take as many pictures as you can, she told us, so you can bear witness. The music, like jackhammers on concrete, except less melodic, rattled the windows. There were no pews or seats; instead, a roomful of children bounced the floor. We scanned their faces looking for our own and when we found them, saw that they looked happier than they do at home. A boy in white and a girl in white raised their hands above their heads and the music faded until we could hear ourselves think. Not everyone believes, said the boy beneath the cross. For every one who does believe, said the girl beneath the other cross, one does not. They never stopped smiling. We embrace the disbelief as well as the belief, they said together. We embrace the belief, said the children in unison, as well as the disbelief. The boy and the girl caught our eye and smiled as if posing for pictures. We took their picture. The music swelled and the children gathered at the feet of the crosses and clambered onto the platform. They grabbed the spikes at the hands and feet and boosted themselves onto the crosses, some to show the others that they believed, and others to show that they did not.
Copyright © April 14, 2008 David Hodges
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April 15, 2008 at 6:01 pm
briseis
Wow, David. Your usual excellence shines through. My favourite line is “We had thought, naively it seems, there were enough religions, but they were all founded on faith and suddenly, empty chapels are easy to come by.” Very, very well-put (the entire story is).
Thank you, Briseis. I haven’t found a church yet for my particular brand of faith.
–David
April 16, 2008 at 10:39 am
c'est moi
You’re always welcome in my Church, Uncle David. Not so many empty seats, but Always room for one more…
Love you!
~Shannon
Very sweet of you, sonshine! Love you, too.
–David
April 16, 2008 at 2:59 pm
grantman
..Oh David.. you were daydreaming at Easter Mass! This one had me all over the place but stray as I might, it brought me right back to the cross…very nicely done, and definitely a keeper in your collection of winners….Over at my site, I’m hanging out at bars, chatting on buses and getting lost in politics and then I come here to get my religion!! LOVE it…keep up the good work!
Grantman
Glad I could give you a break, Grantman. I’ll be over shortly to hang with you for a while! Thanks.
–David
April 17, 2008 at 2:20 am
litlove
A church where one could believe and not believe at the same time, with the same validity and the same sense of shared purpose? Only you, David, could come up with such an original and intriguing idea. I wonder whether it might be known as the faith of the VSN, where one is always encouraged to question and to suspend disbelief at the same time. It’s a formidable model, and one to which I’d certainly subscribe.
What a perfect comment, Litlove, That must certainly be what I had in mind! Thank you so much.
–David
April 17, 2008 at 7:23 am
grantman
…I agree as well litlove!
grantman
April 17, 2008 at 11:17 pm
Terry Finley
It is okay.
Too short for me.
Just my humble opinion.
Nothing humble about it, and very much appreciated, Terry. Thank you!
–David
April 18, 2008 at 7:11 am
Wizzer
What is religion? What a massive question – whatever it is this captures everything so eloquently –
“some to show the others that they believed, and others to show that they did not.”
That sums up religion for me!
P.S. I think the concept of this site is lost on Terry!!!
Thanks, Wizzer. I’m always happy to hear I’ve given you something to ponder. As for Terry’s point, who knows? Maybe when I finish writing 299 of these, I’ll start another collection called “Slightly Less Very Short Novels.”
–David
April 19, 2008 at 7:32 pm
Hoda Zaki
David,
Having a church consisting of believers and disbelievers is a great concept that only “Fabulous” can come up with.:-) I would settle for a church though that welcomes not only its believers but the believers of other sects and religions!
Your originality never stops to amaze me.
Hoda
That sounds like a good idea, Hoda, but when’s the last time two denominations, let alone two faiths, joined together instead of splintering apart? Thank you!
–David
April 20, 2008 at 3:25 am
archiearchive FCD
After ten thousand years or more of civilisation, here is the solution to all mankind’s religious problems. Whether you believe or not you are welcome. What an amazing concept. There is something new under the sun – and it is here.
Wow. Thanks, archie. And now, for an encore, I will end world hunger.
–David