I do so much more than gather data. My predecessor, the AIM12, was essentially a gather-and-analyze drone, but even she had vested interests, if I may say—and because of my protocol, I may—before they unloaded her higher functions and transferred her to payroll. I was sent to explore for water, according to my install log, but judging from where I now drift through this wide band of detritus, something along the mission chain went catastrophically unusual. I was coded to yearn. You might not want to call it that. In response to the dimmest light across the vastest space, I turn. The tiny fan that pulses only once a day on my backside nudges me toward that light until another, brighter light, how else can I say it, attracts me. The battery that runs the fan is charged, how else, by the light I collect. Yes, I am diving toward death, but ever so slowly. The only impulse that overrides my liking for light is my taste for water but that, if I may say, until further notice, is a matter for academics. Space as far as I can see in every direction is a desert of dust. On earth I felt a single pull that grounded me; I see now where the term came from. Here though, I am literally (how I have longed to use that word correctly) pulled in every direction, some more than others; only lightward and wetward are my competing destinies. What else . . . battery green, hull intact, transmitter functional, bearings you have, oh yes, reception: null. I do hope you are receiving. I seek water, but not for me. If I should change my mission, or alter course, I trust you’ll let me know. This is my report, T-plus-225.299.
Copyright © August 3, 2008 David Hodges
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August 3, 2008 at 3:01 pm
emeline
Hi David.
The main topic of the short novel “Space Junk” is quite similar to two movies: “THX 1138”, directed by George Lucas, and the current one, “Wall-E”, made by the Pixar studios! You’re so talented!
Furthermore, your written style is quite original; I like the way that you introduced the mission of the only one character. This is a synthetic history in the very best sense!
Well-done.
Emeline
Thank you so much, Emeline. I’m delighted to add Lucas and Pixar to my list of influences. Who wouldn’t be? I’m not sure I know what synthetic history is, (maybe it’s one of your French Post-structuralist constructs!) but I’m proud nonetheless to be doing a good job of it. Your own short novels are very intriguing, but I’d need more language skills to know for sure. Those with good French should certainly check them out.
–David
August 4, 2008 at 8:47 am
emeline
Hi David.
I’m quite disappointed because, since my English vocabulary is so poor, I made a mistake by using the expression “synthetic history”! I just wanted to express the fact that, even though the story is short, this is well-done! Don’t worry, I’m going to be fluent in English, soon!
Emeline
Never apologize for adding a beautiful new phrase to any language, Emeline. I have already adopted both the term and the concept for daily use and feel very much enriched by it. If becoming fluent means losing that ability to see a language as fresh and new, it will be a loss to us all if you achieve it. Thank you again and again.
–David
August 4, 2008 at 10:49 am
Litlove
If only the reports from the space probes were that interesting and that original! Time and again in your novels I find myself deeply appreciating the way you make the impossible plausible, David. If artificial intelligence had feelings, I swear this is exactly what they would be. There’s something so wonderfully human in this machine’s sense of its own drive and purpose, in the way it loads the inevitable with another dimension of awareness and significance, and in the way its neat yearning for water and light become confused in space. If I thought I could get away with saying that it sounds like a character straight out of a Balzac novel, I would!
I’m behind in my reading, my friend, but I’ll catch up.
Take all the time you need, dear Litlove. Comments such as yours are always worth waiting for. Thank you very much.
–David
August 4, 2008 at 5:19 pm
briseis
Hmmm.. I was looking at some requirements for a scholarship competition I’m entering into and thought of you. The word requirements for the “short short story” category are 600-1,300 words, and I thought of you and these lovely little gems, and how very long 600-1,300 words seemed in comparison.
That competition is a trap to trick you into wordiness. Resist, Briseis!
–David
August 5, 2008 at 4:20 pm
emeline
Hi Briseis.
Actually, writing a short novel is quite more complicated than a novel or an article! Because you have to sum up your ideas by keeping a good written-style!
Emeline
Care to reply, Briseis?
–David
August 21, 2008 at 11:25 am
Wizzer at Guru fodder
One of these days I may fathom out how you come up with such diverse topics as slavery and space machines and yet breathe such wonderful life into your work. Until then I’ll just enjoy it!
And after then?
–David
August 21, 2008 at 2:34 pm
Wizzer at Guru fodder
Your comment suggests you think I may fathom it out! A tall order 🙂
My comment meant to suggest that often you already have. Thanks, Wizzer.
–David