I feel as if I’d met you yesterday though it’s been thirty years and at my age that means I die tomorrow or at best the day after. So what shall we do this blue evening streaked with gray? If I’m to cook you one last dinner, I want to know you’ll enjoy it. If only you weren’t so complex! You love the simple joy of something simple, simply done, I know: a fish intact, its organs and bones excused, brushed with butter and heated until happy. That said, you also love a dish of flesh that fills your mouth with blood and tastes like something running for its life. Shall I start with what agrees with you or should I try again to make you resolve your dispute with asparagus? I think I know your answer. Let’s not argue with dinner. There is a time, or better an age, for picking fights with appetizers and waging war on desserts, but we have long outlived that age and found our peace with meals. From now on let’s try something new just once, if at all, and if we don’t love it immediately, leave it for the kids. I’ve tracked down something from the yard you might like, burrowing it was beneath the porch a day from entering our lives; I think it will grill nicely. I’ve paired it with the fruit I foraged from the back of your closet that has almost turned to syrup. Before I’ve finished cooking, something else will turn up, I’m sure. Every room can be harvested. We scarcely need to shop, now that all we’ve planted has come into season. The table is set. The candles sparkle like something new. I stand behind your chair in a bloody apron ready to push you in.
Copyright © October 03, 2008 David Hodges
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October 4, 2008 at 4:26 am
petesmama
This is beautiful; there is always so much going on – and yet so little. I love the simplicity. This actually reminded me of someone and made me smile.
“yet so little”! I love that! Thank you, petesmama. That reminded me of someone and made me smile.
–David
October 4, 2008 at 5:28 am
litlove
I couldn’t possibly regret asking you for your writing, David! This is marvellous – spine-tinglingly chilling in such an entertainingly gruesome way. I was reminded of the old saying, food is love. That makes the dinner preparations an intriguing commentary on a thirty year romance, doesn’t it?
If it does what you say then I’ve achieved just the balance I was hoping for, Litlove, but I have a hard time believing it accomplishes everything you credit it for, except perhaps for you. Thank you so much for always finding my best intentions.
–David
October 4, 2008 at 8:24 pm
Jannie
I love that “every room can be harvested,” maybe his profile burned into the rec room wall from 40,000 nights of news, her once-rounded wooden spoon worn flat and angled, fingerprints varnished onto undersides of windowsills, and such.
Wow, Jannie, you make me wish I allowed myself a few more words to spend on “and such”! What a beautiful comment. Thank you.
–David
October 6, 2008 at 6:55 am
wizzer
David, the depth of your writing always amazes me. I read the first veneer, which ALWAYS reveals something more and invariably something else is found upon a re-read. The tenderness of the words, the life of love and the huge sadness at the need to”push you in.” A true reflection of the brilliance and trials of life.
Thank you, Wizzer. I assure you the stories wouldn’t be nearly as deep or effective without your help.
–David
October 6, 2008 at 3:36 pm
grantman
…David no one writes this way better than you… it is almost like you write these great sentences, throw them in a bag and let fate put them out there for all to see as you randomly try to glue them all together into a single unit… This one took me from psychotic cook standing before a mirror to senile old coot all alone talking to pictures… Wow… Great ride… somebody get me my keys!!!
grantman
Fascinating, Grantman. Your brain is one fine collaborator. I promise you just one thing. I’m not random. As many possibilities as stories may suggest, I have only one in mind from start to finish. Thank you as always for your readings.
–David
October 6, 2008 at 3:47 pm
Jannie
David, we love your blog! Where will you take us next? Somewhere secretly bold, I bet.
That’s right, Jannie. Because you’d have it no other way.
–David
October 7, 2008 at 4:02 am
Wizzer at Guru fodder
Great comment Grantman – like you I’ve read so many of David’s novels to know the meaning is often hidden. My mind wanders all over before I decide (and quite often get it wrong) – but for me that’s the beauty of quality writing – the depth and intrigue
Grantman, if you’d like to reply to Wizzer here, I’ll be your amanuensis.
–David
October 8, 2008 at 10:08 am
grantman
..I guess therin lies the beauty of Short novels.. You get just a taste and it can set your mind on fire with asking questions and i n search of new adventure… The idea that you know where you are going from the start is a fantastic insight to your writings David. Thank you for sharing..Like Wizzer I get it wrong sometimes too, that is why I like reading what all the other regualrs say! The short novel community stands, sits and waits ready for our next adventure!
grantman
Thank you, Grantman. I worry the community will shrink if I don’t find a way soon to post more often. I’ll have another tidbit for you as soon as I possibly can.
–David
October 8, 2008 at 3:38 pm
Litlove
Grantman and Wizzer (and David, of course) – it’s a constant lure to me to know that behind every vsn there is a particular idea or thought. I don’t often get it right either, but I do admit to a little quiet cheering if I’ve come close.
Thank you, Litlove. Let the quiet cheering begin!
–David
October 9, 2008 at 12:32 pm
grantman
..not to worry David… writing is not like putting out sausage or product in a mass assembly line.. We all get tied up with other projects; the election and credit crisis has all my attention right now so the Geo 299’s have been suffering…. but what we all need to remember is to never substitue quanitity for quality…your writing is too good for that….we can wait..and I am sure the wait will be worth it!!!
Grantman
Hey, thanks, Grantman! How did I manage to let this message go unanswered for so long? I appreciate it.
–David
December 8, 2008 at 8:17 pm
latoya sandy
Your writing is amazing. Life is so short, yet full of content, much like your short novels. You can give such a graphic and fulfilling message in 299 words. I commend you!
Wonderful to see you here, Latoya! Thank you so much.
–David