Every shelf is stacked with books I’ve read and reread, or so it seems. This depleted room, these spine-cracked volumes rubbed of their wishes, cannot detain me long. If only the wider world offered something new instead of cheap diversions and bloodless familiars. I need a future. I would settle for a present. In the parking lot, the woman on her cell phone, the cop, the two nuns pushing carts are the same nuns, same cop, same woman I know from the last time, the same shopping carts, the same wobbly wheel. You say I’ve never been here but I remember it all and this argument. This is not the first time we’ve talked about coincidence and memory in this parking lot. Things recur, I understand. Weekends follow workweeks; people order the usual; we do the same thing every New Year’s fucking Eve, for Christ’s sake, I get it. Why don’t you admit that this is more than the seasons repeating and my subconscious? Everything has happened already. Pork loin is on sale again. This song is on the radio just like last time and you want to argue. Why do you keep asking me what will happen next? Whatever happened last time! You give me that look? The nuns roll by loaded with pork? The cop knocks on the window and asks if I’m all right. I back out into the nuns. Take your pick. You snatch the keys from the ignition. Like last time. I leave the car and stride halfway across that busy highway and wake up in the hospital again to your helpless fucking face. Don’t touch me. Don’t pity me. Don’t try to talk me down. You’re no help at all. I’ve never been hit by a car, you say? We’ll see about that.
Copyright © January 01, 2009 David Hodges
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January 2, 2009 at 12:57 pm
grantman
…wow.. you captured this guy’s anger and frustration to a tee! We don’t know why he is upset, but in this fill in the blank with your own diagnosis piece, you leave the reader feeling angry at him, sad for her and hopeless as to what might be the solution… and you framed it all in the New Year cacophony of whopt tee do, here we go again……I loved it.
grantman
Thanks Grantman! Hope you’re enjoying your own whoop-tee-do! (I wonder how many ways there are to spell that?) Happy New Year.
–David
January 2, 2009 at 2:11 pm
andré benjamim
i wish you a happy new year. embrace, andré
Very kind of you, André! Thanks, and Happy New Year to you.
–David
January 3, 2009 at 9:05 am
paisley
i got mail returned from the email address i have for you so i am cutting and pasting my reply here… please feel free to delete after you have had the opportunity to read it….
hi david,,,
just wanted to let you know that the david of which i speak is dead,, and will have been gone for 5 years as of the 16th of this month… it is from the hereafter that i call to him to come get me… yes,, in life,, i do believe he needed his ass kicked,, but i loved him too much to “tough love” him… and my love ,, and acceptance of his wild ways and use of drugs is what eventually killed him…
i miss him more than life itself,, and often do cry out for him to come get me…. but i know i must have a purpose in still being here,, tho i know not what it is,,, so i continue to search for it,, even on those days that i would much rather,, “go home….”
you are a good friend… happy new year…
jodi
And to you, jodi. Thank you for the explanation. I will delete this comment only if you ask me to. Thank you as always for your kind attentions.
–David
January 4, 2009 at 6:31 pm
lissa
all his emotions are here, the anger, the frustration of having done everything before, it’s like he couldn’t get his anger out fast enough, wonderful read
Thanks, Lissa. I appreciate your appreciation.
–David
January 20, 2009 at 10:36 am
avecchioni
First rate story. Great concept of recurrence coupled with powerful, succinct narrative!
Hey, thanks, avecchioni. No matter how many of these I write, I never think, as this poor narrator does: I know what happens next. Welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
February 2, 2009 at 12:40 pm
Wizzer
Looking for a different ending – some different twist along the way – the perpetual torment it seems to me
April 14, 2009 at 7:10 pm
cynthiariede
Wow. The compression and beauty, again and again in these pieces, is so awesome and so powerful.
May I say then, you are welcome to them at any time? I think there are 250 in the collection now (getting closer, slowly, to the target number [can you guess what that is?]). Thank you, Cynthia.
–David
April 19, 2009 at 5:25 am
Mia
“I need a future. I would settle for a present.”
There’s always at least one or two sentences that are simply perfect in your stories. Thank you for creating this website.
This entree really reminded me of milan kundera’s work especially unbearable lightness of being
Thank you again, Mia. I would gladly link readers back to your own stories if you like, or have you sent them all out to publishers?
–David
April 24, 2009 at 8:01 pm
tammy
beautiful. im drinking right now so i can only type with one hand, otherwise i would probably say much more but im enjoying myself reading these stories and the fact is that when I really enjoy something, I have much less to say about it – talking ruins the feeling. I like this sensation and i can’t share it. words dont do it. same thing happens when someone tells me a really funny joke. I can’t laugh out loud – instead i spend the whole time trying to convince them that i truly thought it was hilarious — they never believe me though. pity. i hope you do. damn i wrote a lot! lol
I’m pretty easy to convince, tammy. You tell me you’re having a good time, I’ll buy it. Thank you. Now back to drinking for you!
–David