The light I saw flickering in my wife’s eyes as we sat at the little table we use for dinners that don’t involve watching reruns and the radiant golds that shimmered behind her, framing the face I love best after my own, may have sprung from my devotion or may have been reflected flames from the house fire down the street, but the smell of smoke was no metaphor. Fire filled every window and the heat we felt from the sidewalk was peeling the faux stone façade from the front of the home, one of the finest on the street pre-catastrophe and for the time being standing on an exquisite lot. Where are the fire trucks?, we asked our neighbors, the charming young couple whose home would soon be a smoldering blight on the avenue. We didn’t call them, he replied. She looked at him and smiled without showing her teeth, as if they shared a secret joke. She hooked her arm around his waist; he pulled her shoulders close and together they gazed at the inferno. Were you home when it happened?, my wife was asking at the same time I asked, How did it start? She showed us a book of matches and smiled. Other couples, worried about sparks, wondered what was keeping the fire company. We’re alive and healthy and we have each other, she said. Still, I said. She wouldn’t let me take anything, he told me. I knew it!, she shouted. I knew your stupid stuff would come between us! Several cell phones sprang to life and frantically called 911. We casually strolled home in silence, deeply breathing the soft air spiced with others’ misfortune. Our fingers touched by accident, then interlaced like cards from two stacks in the hands of an expert dealer.
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January 10, 2009 at 10:05 pm
grantman
I love that line…”then interlaced like cards from two stacks in the hands of an expert dealer.” great imagery here David..this one reads to me like a grass is always greener on the other side of the street piece, yet brings us right back with the card line.. A powerful piece for sure ..
grantman
Thanks, grantman! The other day I heard somebody say, “Love is like setting your house on fire.” Much as I don’t care for similes, the rest of the 291 words fell like dominoes, or a house of cards. I felt compelled to close with a simile of my own.
–David
January 13, 2009 at 9:46 am
petesmama
Wow! I took off for a while, thinking you’d be too busy “holidaying” to write. I get back after what I think is a decent interval to find five gems just waiting to be read – and some waiting to read me too!
I will return with a fresh head to comment on each and every one of them. But for now, happy new year David. And thank you for the pleasant surprise.
Thank you so much, petesmama! I miss the comments as much as you miss the Novels and am always delighted when I see you’ve visited.
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February 2, 2009 at 12:50 pm
Wizzer
Did they lose their home or their mortgage? The air seems spiced with a solution!
Thanks Wizzer. This is off the topic, but I want to say you’ve got quite a lively scene going over at WizzerSays. I’d recommend new bloggers in particular head on over for newbie tips.
–David
February 6, 2009 at 1:50 pm
wizzer
Thanks David, that’s very kind of you. It’s actually going really well – great fun too.