Had they been a less practical couple, my parents might have had children by accident. Instead, one night, before I was born, at the wobbly table in the breakfast nook, Dad drew a line down a page of yellow paper to separate the pros from the cons of Kids, then a second page for No Kids. Mom stirred the ice cubes in a diet cola with her pinkie, freely associating, and offered suggestions for Dad to codify and record. Lips closed, he beamed at his neat columns and marveled at his wife’s abundance and variety, then added imaginative mothering to the list. A common mistake is to neglect the second page, thinking it redundant. To a novice making that mistake at the very same table, in my rocket ship pajamas, on a list of little consequence, Dad would patiently explain that there is no opposite for chocolate ice cream, only alternatives: other flavors, different desserts, other foods entirely, no food at all, or chewing gum, to name a few. The opposite of a richly fulfilled man could be a richly fulfilled woman or a miserable bitch. Now, a sandwich eaten with the non-preferred hand leaves the writing hand free, so when they decided to renew their vows, I ate a grilled cheese and composed a list for Dad about staying together and one about splitting up. He didn’t thank me but sat down to edit while I poured drinks. Dad’s rebuttal to “get a fresh start” convinced me I’d never known him, or that writing the lists was not about balancing truth with truth. Since finding them, in times of doubt, I had treasured the yellow pages that had brought me to be, until I watched Dad move “permanent truce” from one side of a list to the other.
Copyright © June 19, 2009 David Hodges
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June 19, 2009 at 4:37 pm
Hoda
Rich with meaning, like a delicious heavy meal, it needs time to be digested. So well-crafted, it could have not been written by any other writer, David.
Thank you, Hoda. After these last three, we could probably all use a light and frothy dessert.
–David
June 23, 2009 at 11:34 am
grantman
Giving insight to relationships is what you do best… this one is fantastic…you have the ability to put us all right there, as if we are all just looking over the shoulder watching it happen….. I agree with Hoda, no one does this better than you…
grantman
Thanks, Grantman. Maybe it was the rocket ship pajamas that made you feel so “present.”
–David
June 29, 2009 at 3:03 am
petesmama
Oooh, I like this one! Like Grantman, I think your novels on relationships may be my favourites. This sort of ties in with something I have been thinking and talking and writing about a lot – the idea that love, ultimately, is a choice.
Well, I don’t know if I’d go that far, petesmama, unless temporary insanity is a choice. Thanks!
–David
July 20, 2009 at 11:49 pm
Smita
Professor I have not read short novel like this before, this one is so rich and very deep meaning to it. And has story of many couple. Just like Miss Hoda said need time to digest. I really loved it different then I have read so far.
Take your time, Smita. Take the rest of your life. With luck, each reading you’ll be different.
–David
August 3, 2009 at 11:16 pm
Amy Flanagan
“Dad’s rebuttal to “get a fresh start” convinced me I’d never known him”
I love that line. I remember the same moment with my father. (It involved an entirely different subject matter.) The sudden realization that he was more than just my father, but a human.
Thank you for these beautiful stories.
Thank you, Amy. That’s a moment worth remembering. I’m very happy you’ve joined us. Welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
August 3, 2009 at 11:19 pm
Amy Flanagan
David,
The above entry listed my website as thehaikudiaries.wordpress.com. That is a stunning blog, but it is not mine. I cannot take credit for it. Sorry for the auto-fill error.
Amy
I fixed that problem, Amy, but left your explanation here, for the benefit of haiku diaries, and because it gives me an occasion to send readers to http://theshortestblogintheworld.blogspot.com/ .
–David
November 10, 2009 at 3:40 pm
Jared
Well, it’s official. I love your writing. I’ve added you to my blogroll, AND I finished my story! You should check it out. 😉
You can be sure I will, Jared, and that I’ll comment on it there. Thanks for all your kindnesses.
–David