Although aspects of the procedure must be painful beyond enduring, I’m not among the noisy many who call it cruelty to harvest an essential medicinal from its only source, but I admit I don’t envy the donor. Her lips are blue from blood loss and the trauma of repeated donations, and chapped from breathing through her mouth, and nobody has heard her speak for weeks or seen her eat except through the tube in her nose. If we could keep her comatose, out of mercy we would, as we tried with her predecessor, but she and we are more likely to live if she’s conscious, medically speaking. She gives her marrow twice a day, not willingly, so that all of us can fight off the killing infection. For all her pain, she doesn’t make nearly enough, so thousands who die daily do so cursing her, not the disease. In the house where she was found were the dead or dying bodies of all her relatives, suppurating, bloated by the final stages and smelling of evil. She’d been living on god-knows-what, too young to use a can opener and weak from hunger but otherwise, to her perpetual sadness, inexplicably healthy. Since then she’s been in what is called my care, making more of what saved her so I can steal it. Before procedures, a metaphorical light will sometimes enter her eye with such subtlety I can’t describe what about her face has changed, nothing probably, a needle skipping, her own awareness, or mine, that there will be no youth for her. Our families had quicker fates. On efflorescent nights like these, when the staff’s been dismissed and every last breath sounds the hall, I give her more relief than is prescribed, in gratitude, and calculate at what cost we survive.
Copyright © July 22, 2009 David Hodges
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July 23, 2009 at 7:54 am
Dave Hambidge
Cripes, very bleak and maudlin.
Try a lighter theme next time?
But, it is very poweful for all that.
Best
dave
This wasn’t funny to you? 🙂 Sorry, dave, my muse is a bitch who doesn’t take requests. I’ll try, though.
–David
July 24, 2009 at 4:34 pm
dalal
thank you for this deep meaning…
Even if you are spam, dalal, you are most welcome.
–David
July 27, 2009 at 6:36 pm
anhinga
Okay, maybe this will lift your spirits, Dave. I chuckled at the “too young to use a can opener.” This was my first dinner wine after a two-week diet, so who knows if it was the writing or the vino. The rest of the piece though threatened to bring me down. Am I back in the human race?
I’m not sure how to reply, Anhinga, but welcome back to wine, to dinner, to humanity, to Very Short Novels!
–David
July 28, 2009 at 9:03 am
Litlove
I’ve just watched an episode of the X-Files that dealt with similar territory, and after all, if swine flu turned really nasty and only a tiny number of people had natural immunity… Well, this struck me as a chillingly plausible tale. I appreciated the doctor’s uneasy, ambivalent narrating voice.
Dear Litlove, so wonderful to see you here! I don’t think I know the X-Files version of this story, but it’s easy to imagine.Thank you very much for your reading.
–David
July 31, 2009 at 7:23 pm
The Querulous Squirrel
Edgar Allen Poe.
I will take it. Thanks QS!
–David
August 6, 2009 at 1:41 am
petesmama
“For all her pain, she doesn’t make nearly enough, so thousands who die daily do so cursing her, not the disease.”
For me that was the saddest bit.
Thanks, petesmama. Stingiest of all are those who feel cheated by charity.
–David
August 18, 2009 at 9:51 pm
grantman
okay; soylent green came to mind right off the bat. and for some reason states rights, human rights and that all too unpopular idea of human rights flew by me on the screen. We all know its a dog eat dog world out there, this just puts what we all might have to do to survive one day a little closer to the open door of imagination than many might be comfortable with!
grantman
Well, so far, nobody’s eating anybody in this story, but I understand what you mean about the uncomfortable accommodations to necessity. Thanks, Grantman.
–David
May 5, 2010 at 9:55 am
Jim Hild
exquisite
Interesting form
and knowing that a one act play is more difficult to execute than a full 3 act version, this narrative sings with brevity and spurs the imagination
Hey, Jim, thanks! How appropriate that you should mention one-acts! I would be delighted if you and several fellow actors mounted a handful of these little nuggets for the stage. A few are written as dialogue; others could easily be adapted; several are monologues. Give it some thought. And a hearty welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
May 10, 2010 at 5:34 pm
Jim Hild
That’s a great idea!
Let’s get together over some wine that someone made to taste better.