In photos of my daughter’s wedding, I look thinner than I was and not at all as if I wanted to strangle the groom. There stands Sheila, radiant as always against a bank of pallbearer suits. Looking back over her shoulder, she lures the eye with one of those cheekbones and the reckless promise of that long neck, for the moment, single, while just inside the frame and staring the camera down, the heedless groom in black has no idea he doesn’t belong. He turned this day into her dream by depriving her of others. In all their time together, since the day I hired him to wash cars, he’s found way after way to diminish her. For every course she enrolled in, he found another system for losing at roulette. Money that should have gone to her tutors went instead to pay his hypnotist. She swapped certifications and a real career for bail bonds and court fees, or startup costs for businesses that never showed the promise of a profit. Each failure they punctuated with a pointless vacation to a place she loathed where drugs were cheap. I didn’t kill him. He couldn’t wash a car but she loved him so I let him live to plan this wedding and stick me with the tab. He rose to offer an unexpected toast. He loved her, he said, as no man has loved a woman. She was the only star his heaven needed. She hadn’t met her full potential, they both knew, but he hadn’t fallen in love with her potential and he was a patient man. I waited with the cake knife for a sign. She caught my eye. The look she sent said: See? So, I was wrong. I’ll say it once for Sheila, I was wrong.
Copyright © September 26, 2009 David Hodges
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September 26, 2009 at 11:40 am
Ken Kendall
There is always hope. You are wise to support your daughter.
I write a blog about how men can better love their wives. Maybe you could get your new son-in-law to take a look. I am committed to helping men be better.
whatsheneedsfromyou dot wordpress.com
Thanks,
I don’t mind a little self-promotion, Ken, but if you can’t tell this is fiction, I don’t owe you a plug. I’ve moved your linkback to your name, which readers can click if they wish to read your blog on marriage matters. Thanks for misunderstanding.
–David
September 26, 2009 at 2:06 pm
anhinga
Now I’ve crawled over the speed bump above, I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this. It is filled with tension, and as usual, fill-in-the blanks narrative. “He turned the day into his dream by depriving her of others.” Wow! Never thought of it that way.
Well, thank you, Anhinga. I like to offer a little surprise. Glad you liked it.
–David
September 26, 2009 at 2:07 pm
The Querulous Squirrel
You put so much into raising a child and then to watch a loser snatch them. Ugh…that must be so painful. What a good dad.
Yeah. It can’t have been easy for him. Thanks, querulous.
–David
September 29, 2009 at 8:43 am
petesmama
As a parent, I relate big time, but there’s no accounting for taste. Sheila may find an all-round Mr. Nice and proceed to make his life hell because he doesn’t push the right buttons for her. Love and happiness are strange things, and some people are built to think more pain = more love.
On the other hand, as my daddy’s ‘baby’, I join Sheila in saying: ‘See?’
As brilliant and entertaining and thought provoking as ever, David.
Thanks, petesmama. I can usually count on you to name several of the “other hands.”
–David
September 29, 2009 at 7:35 pm
grantman
..hey great to be back..you have been busy..you could have made him walk the plank or hung him on his vows! I know its fiction but every Dad that has ever married off a daughter has gotten a son in return . . . for better or for worse!! Some of us do get pretty lucky in the son in law dept!! I know I did..
grantman
Thanks, Grantman. I’m glad your daughter married well, Dad. I hope it lasts forever.
–David
October 4, 2009 at 12:41 pm
Hoda
Great work, David. I know of some lucky dads who died unaware of their daughters’ misery. What a blessing for them.
Hoda
My, Hoda. What a bittersweet blessing that sounds like. Even so, there is something to be said for a well-timed death, all things considered.
–David
October 30, 2009 at 8:43 am
fdana
what is the plot of the story ? and the settings , and the point of view , the theme , literary features ? and thanks
Writing a paper are you, fdana? Sure, I’ll do the work for you. The plot is: a man who’s secretly in love with his daughter stabs the groom on her wedding day. The setting is a mental asylum where he reminisces on his crime. The point of view is tricky; it’s either told by the bride as foreshadowing or by the dead groom from the grave. The theme of course is eternal love; that’s all I ever write about. Literary features include irony (let’s just call it sarcasm) and compression. Does that help? Thanks for your visit and welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
October 30, 2009 at 11:30 am
fdana
Thx that rlly helped but I hope u tell me what is the climex , the message from thos story , and the time , place , and
Absolutely, happy to. The climax is when the groom is arrested for selling drugs on the island and has to wash cars to pay off his fines. The message I would take from the story is that nobody sees his own life clearly and the best we can hope for is to find someone who wants to live with us anyway. I’m very sorry, but I don’t think time and place are relevant to this story: “It’s a timeless tale of love and betrayal that takes place in our hearts.” You should probably quote me on that. Now, do the rest yourself, fdana, and good luck.
–David
October 30, 2009 at 1:04 pm
fdana
Thaaaaaank you so so much , but i didn’t understood the point of view :s btw my name is dana :p
Sorry, dana, you’re on your own from this point. Send me a copy of your finished essay, if you like. I’d love to see it.
–David
October 30, 2009 at 1:07 pm
fdana
ok i will thanks agaaain 🙂
March 31, 2012 at 7:38 pm
Taru
Hello, I really enjoyed this novel, but some parts kept me wondering (except for the rather horrible after explanation, of course) “the heedless groom in black has no idea he doesn’t belong. ” Doesn’t belong- but where? Beside his daughter, in the picture, any where? Or is it supposed to be ambiguous? And for the moment, “single”, (sorry, I’m being really stupid here), does it imply that the picture is taken before they are officially married?
Thanks, Taru, for your questions. I’m glad you weren’t fooled by my explanations to fdana. 🙂
Everything said here is the father’s opinion, of course. I believe he means only that the groom does not belong in a wedding picture with the father’s daughter. In other words, is the wrong man for her to marry. As for “for the moment, single,” yes, you have it just right: still single in the picture taken before the ceremony. Come back any time!
–David
April 7, 2016 at 9:59 am
Hatshof
Gran trabajo .. Gracias