Where we live, the troopers are always on call, even if their kids are in the patrol car with them on their way to the shoe store. I’m twenty minutes out, is all Mom said to the dispatcher, but I could tell from the road we took she wouldn’t be dropping me off. There was no safe haven where we were headed. Have they found the boy?, I asked her. We’re on his trail, she said. We passed a steaming, unfamiliar lake, then followed the flashers that bounced off the trees from the ravine. In her sunglasses too the tree trunks silently flashed and faded. She had to know I had questions. Her grip on the wheel said Later. The Chief was there ahead of us, with backup already and dogs. I knew to wait in the car, but my mind raced ahead across dry leaves to the last place the boy was seen running. Toward what? Away from what? The kid was just a name from another town, but Mom struck out into the woods to maybe get shot at or who knows taken hostage. I locked the doors and sat with her backup piece in my lap. They came back at dusk, bearing the boy, and laid him in a cruiser to wait for the pointless ambulance. When I reached them, I still had the gun in my hand. I dropped it when Mom shrieked and the leaves swallowed it up. I would have learned something from hearing them talk, about how they can keep doing this job when they always arrive too late. But I had squandered the chance, and Mom was too angry, or frightened, or just too sick in her heart to say anything as we drove toward the boy’s home heavy with news.
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December 13, 2009 at 11:42 am
grantman
…trying to find the good in the bad and the bad in the good, this bright sunny morning…this piece is strong with sad…leaving us, like the boy with many unaswered questions…..ones that no one should ever have to ask.. I like the line where the boy loses the gun in the leaves, reminding us all that danger, like bad…is always there…but once back in the car he was safe….
grantman
Thanks, grantman. Strong with sad it is, but inspired by those who chase the bad for all of us in the hope, sometimes fulfilled, that they will outrun it this once.
–David
December 14, 2009 at 2:29 pm
Jared
The themes and ideas of your stories continue to amaze me. The only part that confused me was when the protagonist holds the gun in his/her hand. My first read I assumed that this kid had killed the boy who was lost.
That’s a legitimate confusion, Jared. No, our boy is not a killer. Sorry. For ideas, I listen to the radio.
–David
December 22, 2009 at 2:51 pm
Dave Hambidge
Sorry to have been AWOL for a while, you know how it can get. I’m still amazed that I found time to do a full job as well!
Another dark meditation, but brilliantly crafted.
Seasonal whatsits to you and them
dave
Thanks, dave. I hope your holidays are bright as well.
–David
December 28, 2009 at 3:36 am
petesmama
Yes, for a moment there I thought the poor boy had shot the other one, but after a second read I did not think so.
The idea of ‘keeping at the job even when they arrive too late’ touched me. Reminds me of a lady I know who runs an orphanage. Joy when one of the kids gets a home, then back to square one when another three abandoned children are brought in the next day.
Yes, petesmama, that devotion to the chance of good was my motivation too. They are inspiring, those who go in hope.
–David