Dad has gone and left me with this box of I don’t know what. It has stood like a book on the cookbook shelf with undiscarded yellow pages and other worthless paper, but I never called anyone whose number I didn’t know, or cooked anything I couldn’t figure out, or needed to save my life. I was eight when I first got sick, and Dad showed me the box while I was lying in the hospital bed playing with plastic dinosaurs on a landscape of sheets a hundred kids had used. I had no fear of dying, but I could tell my adults were terrified. He never told me what was in it. Be wise in how you use it, son, he told me. This box will solve all your problems but only once. I picked up the spiny green tank-like creature with the open mouth and a tail like a spiked club. Take that, deathosaurus, I told him. Throughout my bumpy youth of loss, of deprivation and pain, my illness, my accident, my long recuperation, I never opened the box. When Mom died and I suffered a small amputation, I wrapped it completely in duct tape to reduce the temptation to see what was inside. It sits before me now on the kitchen counter utterly orphaned, scuffed, frayed, faintly ridiculous. I’m drinking wine that tastes like someone meant to make it better. I always thought that something worse would happen that would call for a bit of magic, and now that the worst is upon me, I know I’ll get through this too without opening the box. And anyway, I know what’s in it. I’ll probably pass it along to my daughter if ever she seems to need it, just as my grandmother passed it along to Dad.
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January 23, 2010 at 7:00 am
Maria Thermann
A safety blanket in the shape of a box? But then again, it could be Pandora’s box, too? I love that idea.
It reminds me of the difference between my (much-loved) grandmother and my (not so much-loved) mother. My mother was always full of advice and rebuke. My grandmother let me discover the world on my own terms. She just told me, she was there to pick up the pieces, if ever I got into trouble.
Thank you for this thought provoking post.
Best wishes
M.
Maybe Grandmother’s was the better way to keep you out of trouble. Thank you, Maria. I look forward to your visits.
–David
January 23, 2010 at 7:38 am
petesmama
I could do with a Box of What I Need right about now. But in the end what I really need is to stop whining and get on with it. This is a very well timed reminder.
Such is the wisdom of the box, petesmama. It’s there if you need it so you don’t. I’m so happy you found it at the right time.
–David
January 24, 2010 at 8:26 am
mazzz_in_Leeds
“take that, deathosaurus” – aww!
“wine that tastes like someone meant to make it better” – ah, I’m familiar with this vintage!
Even when things are terrible, you know that one day worse things might happen…
That’s about the size of it, Maria. And that’s why I’m glad to have a box. Good to see you here again.
–David
January 24, 2010 at 10:07 am
CJ
Ooh – a great piece of advice in story form. Poor guy sounds like he’s sure gone through the wringer, though.
Well done!
I try not to give them more than they can handle, CJ. Thanks and Welcome Back to Very Short Novels!
–David
January 25, 2010 at 1:59 pm
The Querulous Squirrel
Of course his daughter will need it. Everybody needs that box.
I hope somebody gave you yours, querulous!
–David
January 27, 2010 at 8:27 am
litlove
This story made me think of what a paradox it is that the gifts our parents give us are so often burdens as well as miracles. But as always, David, you turn the impossible-to-live-with into something uplifting and real.
I figure, if I made things easier for characters, they couldn’t display their better selves. Thank you, Litlove. That’s a wonderful tribute.
–David
January 30, 2010 at 10:40 am
Deb
I am torn between my curiosity for what is inside the box vs. the hope that it represents, unopened. As much as I want to know, I feel like if the MC knew, then it would lose its magic.
Nice story!
Welcome to Very Short Novels, Deb! Thank you for your comment. I may be paraphrasing John Updike when I say novels should keep a few secrets. What’s in that box is both unimportant and dangerous to reveal. No one item would please everybody. Most choices would disappoint more than they’d delight. As you suggest, the magic is in the box’s effect, not its contents.
–David
February 6, 2010 at 12:49 pm
thedropofahat
I loved this story. A perfect idea, subtly told. Wonderful Keep it up.
Hey, thanks, tdoah! Where’d you come from? Welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
March 27, 2010 at 2:26 pm
thedropofahat
I come from Ireland, living in Dublin. the majority of my stuff is based around where I live here. I like very Short Stories, although i don’t visit it enough. What does ‘tdoah!’ mean?
You’re gonna feel silly when I tell you, thedropofahat. “tdoah” means “thedropofahat.” Thank you for checking back in. Greetings to Dublin!
–David
April 16, 2010 at 3:03 pm
thedropofahat
I do feel silly. Not big on acronyms me. Well, the drop of a hat is from the expression “I’d do it at the drop of a hat’, which means I would do it in a second or without hesitation. It comes from an outdated custom about how to start a fight. I’ve always liked the phrase. I’d like to think it has nuanced meanings, but perhaps that’s just wishful thinking, or my own flights of fancy.
February 18, 2010 at 11:43 am
grantman
.. I know it is a very heavy issue dealing with legacy stuff,,, this handed down to this one and so forth and the more handing down the greater the importance, but the cynic in me thinks, his Grandmother made his Dad an lunch with a cheese sandwich in it, that has gotten very very stale! Open the box, the past is meant for sharing….
grantman
I’d say the narrator’s probably on your side on this one, grantman. Whatever’s in the box is irrelevant and of little intrinsic value. Cheese sandwich is as good a guess as any. 🙂
–David
February 27, 2010 at 11:55 pm
anhinga
This is definitely one of your best stories, and that is saying something! How appropriate that he wrapped the box in duct tape. That fixes everything.
I understand surgeons use it now instead of sutures after bypass surgery to mend a broken heart. Thanks, anhinga. I like knowing which stories you care about.
–David
May 14, 2010 at 11:14 am
fara
‘Box of What You Need’
the tittle make me curios what actually inside the box =)
nice story ❤
keep it up !!
Thanks, fara. What’s your best guess?
–David
July 29, 2010 at 6:59 am
sewingwithaskein
hmmm… I need to go check the attic and see if I too have a box! This was thought provoking I rather enjoyed it!
Let me know what you find, Na. If it’s a locked box, you’ll know what to do with it. 🙂
–David
March 24, 2012 at 10:15 am
Anonymous
sop nyc of d story….. sweet…. 🙂
March 24, 2012 at 10:15 am
Anonymous
so nyc of d story….. sweet…. 🙂
September 20, 2018 at 11:48 am
Maksim Davletkulov
A person needs something to cope with problems. You were helped by a box, as you always understood that you might need it in the future and solved your problems without help, becoming stronger.