I owe the Xuuxu my life but no gratitude. Once they flushed us from our valley and stood us naked, side by side in the long grass under the sickle moon, lowlands clansmen that the colonists favored—by which I mean tolerated and bestowed with courtesies that felt like slaps on the jaw—they had to kill the lot of us, including my parents and sisters, the one I liked and the one who died knowing I didn’t. They should have killed me too, and I wish they had; instead, they spared me as a witness to their petty ferocity. When the warlord swept his hand above my head to point me toward my exile, I flinched all the way to the ground, thinking my turn had come, and all the stupid killers slapped their weapons across their thighs and laughed and spit until I would have silenced them if I’d had a weapon of my own. They kept me as a mascot. They never tired of slicing the air above my head with their machetes to see me dive, and I, to my shame, couldn’t help but throw myself into the dirt. You could stop reading now, I know, and I wouldn’t blame you. I haven’t described the machete blows that fell that day, their singing swiftness, or the sound of chopping down trees that meant they had struck another bone. I don’t think I can. I know I don’t want to. A woman they had tied standing to a tree, a friend of my mother’s, looked at me with pitying eyes, but nothing could prevent them from holding me by my shoulders and hips and forcing me into her again and again. They laughed and told me I was a man but I felt like something less.
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October 2, 2010 at 10:54 pm
chosenrebel
The Xuxuu disappear and yet are ever present. Fiction here, but too close to reality for too many boys in 21st century Congo. We could escape your fiction by turning him into a Marvel Comic hero who avenges injustice with a collapsing machete that fits in a thigh harness. But that would be a comedy.
And that would be wrong, right, rebel!? (Until next time, when maybe we’ll do exactly that!) You’d be doing me a favor if you read “Short Superman” for me, just for fun. Thank you as always for your wonderful comments and support.
–David
October 6, 2010 at 2:31 pm
chosenrebel
Not wrong, just different. I look forward to looking up Short Superman.
October 3, 2010 at 9:06 pm
Janny
As usual, you gotcha me… this was gripping… but I hope you have some exquisitely happy things to bring to my thoughts, too. I need some warm fuzzies after this one. Maybe that’s not the deal, but I can at least ask for your amazing mind to go to the happy place and share that….
thanks.
That’s not the deal, Janny, but I’ll try. Meanwhile, have you read “A Christmas Sort of Story”? It might warm you.
–David
October 4, 2010 at 12:52 pm
Maria Thermann
I was with your protagonist for most of the way until he/you lapsed and used the words “petty ferocity” – seemed verbiage out of character. Also, had to read twice the line “…looked at me with pitying eyes, but nothing could prevent them from…” because “them” is slightly ambiguous (could be “eyes” at first reading – but maybe it’s just this foreigner being a nuisance!).
Powerful stuff and once again you have reminded us that a young person’s life in this world can be as harrowing as a horror story and that little has changed for children and young adults…they are still the victims wherever we look.
Oh, Maria, thank you so much. Your very particular reading is most welcome. I did worry about this speaker’s voice. I thought he might be long removed from the horrors of his youth, and recollecting from a safe place, much older, having studied . . . but of course I communicated none of that. I’m going to take your implied advice and give him a more even tone. You’ve done me a big service. 🙂
–David
October 6, 2010 at 2:00 pm
grantman
… most times I wonder where you are going with a piece untill I get to the end… this time however, I could see the whole journey all the way to the bitter end… sometimes we find ourselves in places we don’t want to be and there is no happy ending. While I know you enjoy most of what you write, as a writer this thought line had to be more painful that most others….
Grantman
October 12, 2010 at 4:11 am
Md Muddassir shah
Now that is some story alright. Very tragic anda s grantman says ever since the start I had the hunch of a tragic ending
October 13, 2010 at 9:16 am
jane
it was so beautiful
October 13, 2010 at 11:50 am
Robert Crane
dave, you’ve gotta get to the jersey beach or something. don’t get me wrong. this is a brilliant piece of writing. fantastic sentences and storytelliing. but this machete stuff is taking its toll on my rather affable nature. i mean, can’t you go to the mall and write a nice story about the food court?
having said all that, don’t pay any attention to me. that’s some killer authoring, that is. how sad that he felt something less than a man when he was really quite more, if the men who tormented him were any barometer.
May 17, 2011 at 1:20 pm
Diamond
he’s not less or more of a man, but he’s a victim; for victims sometimes gender is not the issue at all.
January 18, 2014 at 7:40 am
Anonymous
So short.