The Deputy Assistant has died for an analogy. Some will recall four years ago his boss, the Minister of Health and Family Welfare, boldly revived the discredited effort to eradicate polio from the provinces west and south of the capital—bold because several children had been paralyzed by the vaccine given to protect them. Those precious souls with their bent frames were the statistical necessity of a cure for the world, but they were pathetic, and no matter what the Deputy Assistant said, their parents were impossible to answer. For several seasons after that, whole provinces of five-year-olds had closed their mouths against the disreputable sugar cube. An ambivalent man might have been daunted; instead, the Minister wept for an audience at the new sanitation plant, but warned that an excess of love for the stricken few unfortunates would cripple thousands of children. His Deputy was moved as well but understood the numbers better. Only one child would be stricken for every three million successfully dosed. “It is as if,” he told the Minister, and the comment has cost him his life, “to banish the scourge to oblivion, you sacrificed your three sons.” The details of how he fulfilled his accidental prophecy are appalling, and there is evidence he tried to sabotage it, but the clarity of the plan is as strict as a gem. In the capital today, the Deputy Assistant has eaten a phosphine tablet and died. The job is two-thirds done now, new cases are rare, and the Minister’s third son travels with him to the regions of greatest concern, where skepticism of the vaccine might nullify the nation’s triumph over disease. The boy stands straight and tall alongside his brothers in their chairs, and the locals decide for themselves the extent of the Minister’s nerve.
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March 5, 2012 at 2:17 am
Ashley
I love your dystopian works! So full of symbolism and brimming with emotion. Glad to see you are writing these again. Can’t wait to read more.
Thank you so much, Ashley! I’m happy to see you again too.
–David
March 5, 2012 at 3:25 am
mariathermann
Me too! Thank you for yet another thought-provoking story. This one was rather chilling as so very true to life…panic over birdflu springs to mind.
I’m delighted to see you again, Maria. Be careful out there; infection is everywhere. 😉
–David
March 5, 2012 at 10:52 am
Anonymous
Hey welcome back,,, you have been missed!! The piece reminded me of of Ignaz Semmelewis who tried to tell the hospital staff if they just washed their hands with a little chlorinated water deaths from infection would drop precipitously and John Snow who fought to tell everyone Cholera was caused by bad water!! Oh these unsung heroes, scorned in their day and pretty much forgotten in ours!! What a difference they could have made!!
grantman
Hey, Grantman! I’ve missed you too. It’s nice to see you keeping alive the memory of forgotten heroes. Obviously you’re quite loyal: you waited months for me to post another Novel and wasted no time letting me know you had seen it. I thank you, sir.
–David
March 8, 2012 at 2:52 am
nursemyra
excellent story David.
Myra! 🙂
–David
March 8, 2012 at 4:36 pm
Anonymous
excellent. thank you
Happy to provide!
–David
April 2, 2012 at 3:28 am
Damyanti
The last line is so powerful. Excellent work!
—Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2012
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August 7, 2012 at 11:32 am
Nourhan Ibrahim
Nice to hear you again sir!
This is a wonderful story. Thanks
August 11, 2012 at 8:19 am
Mario
lol you’re an idiot
February 1, 2013 at 6:36 am
bandido
hi david,i just a first timer reader to ur novel’s,..its nice and wonderful,..hope u have a clearer mind to write novels again…
February 11, 2013 at 9:08 am
Anonymous
ge lost asl