—What if she dies while I’m away?
—You can’t stay home until she dies.
—I can’t leave either, while she’s alive.
—I don’t like where this is going.
—What would you do? Would you call me?
—What would you want me to do?
—
—How important is this trip?
—As important as everything else.
—Which means?
—Compared to death, not very.
—Compared to your death, sure, but hers?
—I want you to call me.
—And tell you what?
—And tell me she’s fine.
—You’ll know.
—I won’t know. Do it right.
—Tell you she’s had a big meal?
—Something. Some detail. Make me believe it.
—I could do that.
—You could.
—And you’d forgive me.
—
—Should we call someone?
—What, a doctor?
—
—I didn’t think we’d get through this ourselves.
—No, you’re right. I don’t want her to suffer.
—
—No, you’re right.
—
—It’s good we’re having this talk.
—
—Do you think she’s suffering now?
—We can’t know.
—But if you had to say.
—From watching I’d have to guess yes.
—You couldn’t just tell me no?
—
—No, I know.
—Suppose it were me.
—Let’s not do that. Suppose it were me.
—Let’s not do that.
—However. If it were me,
—I thought we weren’t doing that.
—I’d have found a way out.
—That’s easy to say.
—Not so easy. Not to you.
—Because you’d be leaving me behind.
—I would.
—I wouldn’t be enough to keep you.
—No.
—I’m just like you in that.
—
—That’s why we can agree on her.
—But should we help her?
—Um.
—We are helping her.
—I want someone else to make this choice.
—I know.
—I want you to.
—I know.
—But make the choice I would make.
—Which choice is that?
—When you make it, we’ll both know.
—So, what have we decided?
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Copyright © September 16, 2008 David Hodges
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September 16, 2008 at 3:12 am
ireadthese
🙂 good one! kept me riveted till the end
Excellent. Thank you. I’d be sad if I couldn’t hold your attention for 299 words.
–David
September 16, 2008 at 8:42 am
Emily
Dialogue is so hard, but when done right (like here), it can be incredibly powerful.
Thank you, Emily. I was listening for the silences on this one.
–David
September 16, 2008 at 9:26 pm
briseis
Your dialog IS always powerful, and hardly ever more-so than here.
Thank you, Briseis. Almost as important as what we do to one another is what we say to one another, except when all we do to one another is talk, and then it’s more important.
–David
September 17, 2008 at 2:01 pm
Wizzer at Guru fodder
There are no easy answers to some questions.
I’m not sure I liked where that was going either!
It’s hard to be entirely happy with any of these choices. Thanks, Wizzer.
–David
September 17, 2008 at 7:59 pm
Hoda Zaki
steel and velvet….
They do seem to complement one another in just that way, Hoda, and sometimes trade sides! Thank you.
–David
September 17, 2008 at 8:02 pm
grantman
…In dealing with people who have this conversation on a regular basis, I always remind them that all any of us have is today..unfinished business or never said I-love-yous can haunt one for a lifetime…make your peace with not only those you fear for, but for those you love and hold dearest everyday….
grantman
Beautiful words, Grantman. Thank you.
–David
September 18, 2008 at 7:01 pm
damyantig
You said so much by saying so little. I admire that.
http://damyantiwrites.wordpress.com
Thank you, damyanti. Please let me know if I ever say too much.
–David
September 22, 2008 at 2:54 pm
litlove
I do love the bit where one interlocutor says ‘It’s good we’re having this talk’ and silence surrounds it. Congratulations on packing more invisible words into your silent spaces than anyone else I read! 299 words going on several thousand in this one, I think. The passage about choice-making within the couple was extremely poignant too, I felt. Very beautifully done with great economy.
Thank you so much, Litlove. What I love about this game of leaving things out is that to me it feels so real because when people who know each other well have something to say they do it just like this. I’m sorry we’ve been out of touch so long.
–David
November 22, 2008 at 2:58 pm
helen
Wow! This is such an amazing dialogue though it is a daily ordinary one that can take place between any two people. The way it ended reminds each one of us of him/herself and how we always throw the load of choice on others but still manage to make it seems as if it is the same choice we would have taken. I loved the way you gave us the chance to fill in the blanks where silence prevailed making it our own instead of theirs.
Loved it.
What a beautiful comment, Helen. I’m so glad you didn’t think I was just being lazy opting for silences. Thank you very much and welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David