I hate who my dog hates. Not just the mailman, though he’s a good example, but we differ on who to love. I’ve seen the way he looks at other men, women too, with large-eyed, cross-species admiration. If I had to be a man, says the look, I’d be a man like you. It never squares with who I am. For all their famous loyalty, the dogs I know hedge their bets. I have to wonder where Baxter would go if I left the front door open. He loves my ex-wife, I see that, perhaps for the same reasons I do—I hope not all of them!—but he also seems quite taken with her new boyfriend, and lawyer. Then again, he’s fond of trash bags. He gets up creaky from his rug at the sound of a car in the driveway and then, as if they were shouldering sides of beef, bounds hungrily to the door when they arrive. His tail thumps the umbrella stand; he wants them in his house. They’ve come to collect some signatures. I’ve been avoiding the mail, and now the statute of limitations on their willingness to unmolest me has expired. Ink must be spilled. We’re sitting together at a not-oak table on the most uncomfortable chairs I can find. With one hand she riffles papers that will unrelate us until death does us unpart. With the other hand her nails lay claim to Baxter’s favorite scratchy spots. How well I know those spots, those nails. The boyfriend witnesses everything and countersigns and seals. So now he’s her notary, too?! I feel a tiny strangled growl each time his little seal squeaks. And though he knows better, he speaks. And when he says the words “custody of the pet” I lunge without warning.
Copyright © January 19, 2007 David Hodges
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January 19, 2007 at 7:26 pm
ombudsben
Wolfed this one down. Keep up the good work!
Thank you, ombudsben! I will have trouble keeping your bowl full if you don’t learn to savor.
–David
January 19, 2007 at 11:12 pm
archiearchive
Such word economy and yet such suppressed emotion! Released so violently.
Thanks, archie. Believe me, you didn’t want to be there to see how it ended. And hey: Welcome back to wordpress comments!
–David
January 20, 2007 at 11:35 am
Lori
This one definitely caught me. Tasty!
Tasty like Kibble? Glad you liked it, Lori.
–David
January 20, 2007 at 10:27 pm
Jill Terry
That was a quick little ride on the emotional roller coaster of life!
I was content while reading about Baxter then I felt my shoulders slump ever-so-slightly and the smile I didn’t know was there turn to a frown, when forced to face the ex and the bag of pain she left behind, only to spring up in my seat with jovial laughter as the last line was read.
Perfection!
Thanks, Jill. I don’t believe I’ve ever named a character in any story yet, but the dogs, I love it when the dogs have names.
–David
January 20, 2007 at 10:31 pm
timethief
w00t! I loved it.
Thank you, timethief. This story brings out everybody’s inner dog, I see.
–David
January 21, 2007 at 11:36 am
David Schleicher
I loved how you moved from a ho-hum description of a dog and doglover into a deep psychologically complex examination of the leftovers of a dead marriage in just a matter of a few words. Very crafty.
Thank you, David. I love how you pay attention.
–David
January 23, 2007 at 12:53 am
qazse
truly a marvel, I raced through it like a pup…
Stay.
–David
January 23, 2007 at 8:38 am
red dirt girl
I just finished reading a book where members of a family sat around eating dog kibble as snacks while watching television…….i don’t believe that has any relevance to this story, but my strange twisted brain made the connection – NOT ME! As for the words “custody of the dog”……….in my part of the country, I believe we say ‘them’s fightin’ words……’
. . . as they should be in any country.
–David
January 23, 2007 at 1:28 pm
Daniel
That was excellent. I’m not gonna quibble (or is it Kibble 😉 ) with dog puns, just want to say, keep up the great work. 🙂
Thanks, Daniel. I consider it my responsibility to appeal to the writer in you.
–David
January 31, 2007 at 11:45 am
btocher
Any dog who shares my first name is just fine by me, David.
It’s a great read. I hope something awful and worthwhile happened after the lunge, and that the “off-camera” ending dispensed justice in the appropriate measure.
Keep up the good work!
Rest assured, Baxter. Justice and scratches are dispensed as due. Thanks for caring.
–David
February 6, 2007 at 7:09 pm
IreneA
I loved this! The details and striking images, the movement through the piece, and the bite of raw emotion at its climax.
Bravo!
Thank you, Irene. I guess this one is a new favorite for a reason.
–David