It’s understood the truth can not be told. At best we see what passes by the peephole, a monocled distortion barely glimpsed through a fog of curved glass, apprehended but incommunicable. Times are tough for the honest man with a story to sell. In reaching for the universal, he will suppress the details, and leaving out the details lose the truth. When the parents leave their toddler in a closed car for seven and a half hours of a summer afternoon and evening, we must be told, in degrees Fahrenheit, before we can begin to share the story with anyone else, how hot it got inside that car. If no one takes or tells us that temperature, we will invent. We also need to be able to say how many other children the couple has and whether they were in the apartment with their oblivious parents on the afternoon and evening of our particular catastrophe also unaware, or whether those children, if any, attempted to rouse the parents from their stupor, if stupor they were in, or whether the entire sorry lot found a way to ignore the muffled cries from the 160° interior of that car in the parking lot just outside. If possible, we will also want to know what melted. And we will need to characterize the stupor, now that it’s part of the story: was it drunken? the natural state of the mentally underendowed? Or was the word used inadvisedly: a reporter’s invention, an editorial flourish, or a simple accident of grammar, sparse vocabulary, miscommunication? A child has died. Father has a red beard. These are details. Mother drains off half a coke, tops off the bottle with rum. Somewhere in all the noise the truth coils sleeping. Baby reaches for a bottle.
Copyright ©1999 David Hodges
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April 28, 2007 at 9:38 am
schmutzie
Yowza, you hit on the power of language here. I like it.
Thank you, schmutzie! You’ve no idea how much a “yowza” means to me.
–David
April 28, 2007 at 11:25 am
Anonymous
An appropriate story for Child Abuse Awareness Month.
I wasn’t aware it was Child Abuse Awareness Month!
–David
April 29, 2007 at 12:29 am
Vi
Cannot is always one word? Or did I read that incorrectly?
I’m not familiar with that rule, Vi. But thank you for alerting me.
–David
April 29, 2007 at 6:46 am
litlove
You could subtitle this ‘Or Must Bad Things Always Happen To Bad People’ (although it would mess up the word count). This is both a profound meditation on how to tell a horror story and also a searing commentary on the way trauma is vulgarised by the media. And it’s tremendously powerful and intense.
Thank you, Litlove. You’re right. It is a horror story, isn’t it? But by now, the story line is sadly too familiar almost to shock us. Part of our demand for details is just prurient, I guess, but part of it is in our need to distance ourselves from that horror, to compartmentalize it as the kind of thing that happens to other people.
–David
April 29, 2007 at 4:40 pm
amethystlune
yes. yes. details. details. why can’t we go by celcius? the rest of the world does…
Is it enough of an answer to say: because it makes us so very American? Thanks, amethystlune!
–David
April 30, 2007 at 2:47 am
Wizzer
Read this first thing Monday morning (UK) I still use Fahrenheit (at least by converting Celsius), otherwise I don’t know how hot or cold it is!!
Now the important bit – this piece is brilliant. For me, not so much a story, but a fantastic observation of miscommunication (or probability / possibility thereof). It happens everywhere, every minute of every day – between friends, lovers, work colleagues, business partners – many of those could be innocent BUT via the media?? Is there a vested interest in sensationalism? Of course – it sells.
I observed a young girl knocked over by a car a few years ago. The driver of the car was travelling at about 20 mph maximum. The crowd that gathered (non-observers in the main) soon started talking about 40 mph, maniac drivers, no care and attention, probably been drinking etc.
Human nature or human weakness?
Great observation as always David. Sorry to post more than 299 words myself!
Thanks, Wizzer! Rather quickly, I think, our cherished “right to know” becomes something quite different.
–David