Life is the skirmish our dreams are meant to resolve. Lucid dreamers like Bernard don’t leave it to chance; they’ve trained themselves to take control in sleep. They lie down with a plan they repeat like a mantra. The first time he looks at his watch, Bernard sees numbers; the second time, numbers again. The third time, his watch is a coin on a strap and Bernard knows he’s dreaming and sets to work. He sees he’s in the family kitchen with its wallpaper of fat blue cows and milking pails and his mother’s voice calling from the upstairs bedroom. He tucks in his shirt and opens the door to the yard but finds himself in a slaughterhouse instead. He closes the door and repeats his plan and opens the door again. This time it’s the yard at night beneath a sickle moon. He orders his dream to find his dad and glides out to the shrubbery beds as if across a slippery floor and stops behind Dad scrabbling in the dirt. He could be digging something up or burying something beneath the wet dog plant with its dangling purple blossoms, beneath the dogwood tree with its fragrant blossoms, beneath the mulch of rotting skin deep in the bed. Bernard smells the turned earth. He tastes it and suppresses the urge to vomit. The figure turns and its face is the face of a coin—, the face of his father—, the figure is Bernard burying his father in the dog’s grave beneath the holly—, beneath the dogwood. He wakes himself up and comes to in bed, panting, fingers sore, conscious of his wife’s movements. “You’ve been digging again,” she says. On her pajamas are fat blue cows. Bernard repeats his plan and returns to the kitchen.
Copyright © June 13, 2007 David Hodges
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June 14, 2007 at 6:24 pm
Forumer
Peace n howdy?? Are these novels your creation?? Whhoaaa, nice work then , keep it up my fren 🙂
June 14, 2007 at 6:35 pm
JaneDoughnut
As someone who cherishes her nightmares and doesn’t achieve lucid dreams as often as she’d like, I find the idea of trying to control the subconscious so completely pretty scary. I realize that’s your point – at least part of it. But the part of us that’s aware, the part with inhibitions, can’t figure life out by itself.
I’ll keep cherishing my nightmares.
Another excellent piece, David. I always wish they were my own.
Thanks, Jane! I guess you noticed, Bernard’s not very successful in his attempt.
–David
June 15, 2007 at 1:08 am
verbivore
Extremely vivid – and I love that first line about life being a skirmish our dreams are meant to resolve. It’s interesting, this idea of controlling our dreams as a way to find control in our life. I’m not sure whether to be afraid of Bernard or feel sorry for him. The writing – as always – is splendid!
Thank you, verbivore. The notion of controlling dreams fascinates me too. As for Bernard, I’m frightened for him.
–David
June 15, 2007 at 4:08 am
wizzer
This one ran a chill through me such is the power of those thoughts! Did Bernard really kill his father? Does he wish he had? Did it only happen in a dream he controlled? I’m sure you know what happened David, but the brilliance of the unanswered (for me) works every time.
Thanks for my daily (almost) brain exercise!
Thank you, wizzer. I wish I could make one of these every day. Every two or three days is the best I can manage.
–David
June 15, 2007 at 7:13 am
Arthur Browning
You have a varied but interesting range of categories. I have a friend Giselle Borzov with a new art blog at http://gborzov.wordpress.com that you might also want to check out.
I wouldn’t call it an art blog yet, Arthur. It’s one self-promotional post about selling to corporate clients.
–David
June 16, 2007 at 3:27 am
litlove
I seem to have had an unusual reaction to this one, in that it struck me as just tremendous black comedy. The battle between Bernard’s pedantic attempts at excessive self-control and the resolutely, provokingly, surreal world of the unconscious seemed so richly and darkly humorous. As ever your writing is tremendously clever too, in its metonymic transformations and cunning chains of association. I hope you slept soundly after writing this one, David!
Thank you, Litlove. I always sleep well, if not often or long enough. But poor Bernard needs help.
–David
June 16, 2007 at 6:31 am
Somerset Bob
Especially for you, David:
http://www.bobkingsley.co.uk/blog/?p=96
Why, thank you, Bob! I’ve cross-posted your kind acknowledgment on my “Cross-Posted” page. (See menu bar above.)
–David
June 16, 2007 at 3:21 pm
Miss Million
Nice read, David.
Yes, our dreams are meant to resolved.
Recently I have a dream. Dream to be millionaire by 2012 without finding out any crosscut to success. In legal way. 🙂
Wish me best of luck.
Of course I wish you luck, Miss Million. Thank you for the visit. My friend became a millionaire by Forex trading. He started out with two million!
–David
June 17, 2007 at 8:27 am
constructicle boy
hello david, i have added u in my blogroll. ur blog is great and informative. i will keep watching
Thank you, constructicle.
–David
June 18, 2007 at 6:44 pm
Sean Wilson
David, another great one! I will will myself to dream of fat blue cows tonight in the spirit of lucid dreaming and Lucid Dreams, though I may regret it.
Seriously, though, I am quite sure I have seen such wallpaper before—and more than once. The story was excellent and made me smile. I’ve explored lucid dreaming for years, a result of looking for other tools to use alongside self-hypnosis, visualization, and meditation when I was in the military.
I really liked the premise of this story. I could even see this a basis for a very long novel. 😉
Please do, Sean. I’d love to see you tackle this subject matter in a longer form! Thanks for your appreciation.
–David
June 22, 2007 at 12:25 am
Miriam Robbins Midkiff
I’m envious of those who can control their dreams, who are somehow cognizant that they’re dreaming while they’re dreaming. I’ve never reached that state. My dreams are always out of my control, for better or for worse; and I suppose therein lies the adventure!
I don’t have that power either, Miriam. The only control I have over my dreams is to repress and forget them, or turn them into fiction.
–David
June 27, 2007 at 4:48 pm
ombudsben
“Life is the skirmish our dreams are meant to resolve. …”
Yes, or if not resolve, at least give us a plan of attack!
Do they work for you that way, Ben?! Good to see you back.
–David
July 11, 2007 at 7:41 am
Ross
I am adding you to my blogroll! Hope you do the same… thank you… I have also stumbled you!
http://www.rosshetherington.com
Great post!
Very generous of you, Ross, especially for such a new visitor! No need to link yourself back, though. It’s automatic for anyone who wants to follow your name.
–David
July 13, 2007 at 12:17 am
briseis
….
I know that every time I read your stories, I proclaim one to be my “new favourite,” but this time I’m serious.
This is absolutely stunning.
You can change your mind any time, Briseis.
–David