Something so good and pure at the core of a man like my husband hardens to a bullet in the forge of an inhuman world. He might laugh at me for saying so. He doesn’t need me to sing his praise. Those who don’t know him will never admit his humility. They don’t know how strife can temper a man, or that his failings can be strength. They’ve never heard him laugh or cry. (I know he wouldn’t want me saying this.) I’ve seen tears in his eyes at the mention of a baby in distress, but compassion propels him, even as he debriefs the other men with details of the sacrificed, past the whining flesh to the crowning beyond. That’s when his jokes are at their wicked best. That’s when they know he is their leader. Nobody is innocent, I hear him say, but action can purify. At night he has to impress only me. I contemplate the back of his head on the pillow. Nicks in his hair are all that remain of the violence of things that went wrong in the field, unless he’s dreaming of those troubles now. I breathe the endless night. This is the consummation of my life, to lie with his snoring champion’s body, and have it to myself. How many other women would trade with me! I lift the sheet and follow the line of his backbone as far as I dare and keep my motions small. I touch a place that makes me think of him, and gently a place on him that feels like a man, and remember times when we had no mission but one another and all the time in the world. I bite my lip to keep from crying out with the splendor of it all.
Copyright © June 13, 2009 David Hodges
Terrorist’s Wife by davidbdale is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.
Based on a work at davidbdale.wordpress.com.
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June 14, 2009 at 6:46 am
Dave Hambidge
Hi boss, just a quick question more than a comment.
“Those who don’t know him will never admit his humility.”
This has got me puzzled. If I don’t know someone, how can I have any opinion about them? Or am I missing the bleedin’ obvious, not for the first time?
Best
dave
Probably too economical on my part, Dave. Those who don’t know him well? Thanks for the comment. I’m happy to know you’re reading more carefully than I’m writing.
–David
June 17, 2009 at 4:41 am
gary davison
Thoroughly enjoyed this, David. The writing feels thick, condensed and sparing. Gives it a powerful feel. If that makes sense. Nice one.
Thanks, Gary, and welcome to Very Short Novels. Yes, your comment makes sense, to me at least, although I might have called it spare or unsparing. But thick sounds right.
–David
June 17, 2009 at 10:39 am
Lisha Ojun
Hi David, very nice. It’s cool to find someone who’s writing shorter fiction than me. I usually keep my pieces below 800 words…
Thanks, Lisha, and welcome to Very Short Novels. I’m pretty sure we’ll all be stopping by soon to see what you do in 800!
–David
June 23, 2009 at 11:36 am
grantman
..this one made me uneasy.. and was suppose to I guess.. there are always two sides, but when one of the sides seeks to eliminate the other side when they feel talking will no longer produce an amicable solution, then no one wins….loved or not…
grantman
Thanks, grantman. When I first posted this VSNovel, I called it “Impress Only Me.” It made nobody uneasy but I don’t think anybody noticed then the husband is a terrorist. I haven’t changed a word of the story, only the title.
–David
August 26, 2009 at 11:31 am
Shankha
Nice story… but the question… how does he manage to stay with his wife???
It’s an intriguing question, Shankha, one I’m not sure I understand completely but which could be answered many ways, depending on whether you mean how can he keep a wife, or how could he stay with such a wife, or simply, how can he act as a terrorist and still have a home life. All good questions. Thank you for them, and welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
September 24, 2009 at 6:37 pm
Polaris
Loved this part:”Nicks in his hair are all that remain of the violence of things that went wrong in the field, unless he’s dreaming of those troubles now.” You were born to write.
And you are just too kind. Thank you, Polaris.
–David