Before it grew too big to lift, the hospital could have moved to a better neighborhood or invested in its neighbors. Instead it pushed out handymen and cleaning ladies and street hawkers like my uncles and nudged their tilting houses down, clearing room to stretch out one expansive wing after another, each named for a rich benefactor, north and south along the boulevard. Then, when the dispossessed had no place to go, it paid them to submit themselves to research, or didn’t pay them, or snatched up subjects after dark and ran its experiments to better mankind, if not us. My aunt said Uncle John was used in terrible ways before he died, but she wouldn’t talk about it. She didn’t have to: we had comic books; we’d seen twisted science in the movies. Knowing we were suggestible, our mothers invoked the night doctors to keep us off the streets after dark. Of course, no one could corroborate the rumors while we were kids, but we grew up paying the hospital, more than it deserved, a respect that was not all fear. Then my life occurred and promptly stalled. I got sick and made a career of it that outlasted every remedy. I am in need of the night doctors. Soft spotlights rub the face of the hospital after dark. Traffic lights cycle while past this low bench vacant men walk with extraordinary care, feeling the ground ahead of them before setting their feet down to cross the street. Whatever I have is no more credible, except to me, than the stories old wives tell after their husbands flee. I need someone daring to take me in, someone who isn’t afraid to break a few eggs. If need be, I’ll even go in through the front door.
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July 5, 2010 at 6:46 am
Ashley
This was haunting in an absolutely beautiful way.
Thank you so much, Ashley. (I hope it’s also beautiful in a haunting way! 🙂 )
–David
July 5, 2010 at 7:39 am
davehambo
ditto Ashley, one of your better ones boss, not that any are less than good!
Thanks, Dave. Great to see you back here again.
–David
July 8, 2010 at 5:26 am
petesmama
I tire of saying I like your stories. So for today it is just ‘Hello’ and I was here.
“Hello,” petesmama! I like your visits.
–David
July 8, 2010 at 5:11 pm
nursemyra
“I got sick and made a career of it”……. love that line
Nothing compared to your brilliance, Myra. You will be in my blogroll forever because, whether you’re posting gimcrack updates or profiles of the private lives of artists, your inventiveness never flags. Anyone who does not visit you for a sample is missing out.
–David
July 10, 2010 at 9:54 pm
grantman
.. I agree with nursemyra , that line ” I got sick and made a career of it,” is just brilliant.. Carolyn Myss would love it.. Sickness and being sick serves so many long after the cause for the illness is gone… great to see you back!
grantman
I do believe I will have to go look up Carolyn Myss. Thanks for the tip, grantman. Good to see you back too!
–David
July 12, 2010 at 8:44 am
fightforthewrite
i like. check out my short story blog.
http://fightforthewrite.wordpress.com/
August 4, 2010 at 7:43 pm
thomaschalfant
Wow, David. This is really powerful and original and I really didn’t know there was anything like it out here. You definitely got me hooked – thanks for the invite! Such a great and challenging concept.
I’ve been here a long time, Thomas. Thank you for the visit and welcome to Very Short Novels. Any readers interested in smart, sure-handed narratives should you follow you back to Future Tom, or your Fiction Portfolio, or wherever you’d like to guide them.
–David
August 7, 2010 at 6:03 am
bill
Really well written!
Thanks, Bill!
–David
August 7, 2010 at 7:09 pm
Tony Salvucci
Hi David,
I read some of your Very Short Novels. They are great.
This concept is very interesting. I enjoy writing short stories and poetry. But, sometimes there are stories that pop into my confused mind that would be ideal a Very Short Novel.
Well, I’d be happy to see them if you’re willing to share, Tony. Thanks so much for your visit and comment and Welcome to Very Short Novels! (P.S. your linkback doesn’t work.)
–David
August 9, 2010 at 8:34 am
Bill V
Your work covers a lot of ground so quickly and brilliantly! Now I’m afraid of night doctors & I used to work 3rd shift in an Emergency Department where the doctors were anything but scary.
Thanks again, Bill! I certainly don’t want to disparage good doctors everywhere, but I sense you’re joking so I won’t take your comment as criticism. I couldn’t begin to do what emergency room doctors do and I’m glad I don’t have to. 🙂
—David
September 14, 2012 at 3:38 am
emerald
etchous!
June 7, 2013 at 7:04 am
urvi
It’s was so nice and I love it so much.