His mother never wanted him, but at his most notorious he was the second (and the eighth) most wanted man (also the eleventh, but beyond the tenth, he couldn’t be bothered) in the state where he lay hiding, parenthetical, practically invisible. Defiant celebrity will have to wait until his capture and trial; for now he can’t risk being noticed. Two women died in the daytime blast he executed, both pregnant with babies who could not be saved, which he finds ironic and for which he takes no credit. A nurse, lashed by nail shrapnel, lost one eye and the use of her right arm. Do I look scared to you? she’ll ask him from the witness stand. This is what it takes to be second most wanted. He hasn’t worked since, but, by planting stolen ID near the dying teller during a bank robbery, he managed to hang an alternate version of himself onto the top ten list. That alias has ranked as high as eighth and looks like Robert Reed. Since then, he’s performed small amateur surgeries on his cheekbones and jaw. His looks were unremarkable even before he went into the abortion clinic bombing business, but now his face is half erased, the other half looks stabbed. Nobody will look at him long enough to recognize him. Meanwhile, he’s been busy in other states, as other men, while agents in pursuit go chasing wardrobes and mustaches that no longer exist. They need a break. He knows how to become a coat and hat, then burn the coat and give the hat away. When he is ultimately handcuffed near a dumpster for vagrancy, interrogated, identified, and slapped around with the name his mother gave him, expect the law to keep him alive for life, for consecutive, sanctified lives.
Copyright ©January 24, 2007 David Hodges
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January 25, 2007 at 1:20 am
Casey Galatos
Hi David!! This week’s latest ‘Shout Out’ at Cyber-Holidays goes to Very Short Novels, for the great concept and content. Thanks for this great resource 🙂
Thank you, Casey.
–David
January 25, 2007 at 7:11 am
jaterry
WOW…what a powerful kick in the gut first thing in the morning.
Maybe they should come with Advisory Warnings!
–David
January 25, 2007 at 11:52 am
jaterry
Yes, you could rate them with espresso cups, according to how many shots you should ingest before reading. Gotta get your mind right first sometimes!
Working on that. Haven’t quite worked out the html yet.
–David
January 25, 2007 at 6:26 pm
davidbdale
One more thing Jill. Your “comment’ link doesn’t work. It directs traffic back to jaterry.wordpress.com, which wordpress informs us has been deleted by the authors. You’d probably prefer a working link to http://www.wordsmithextraordinaire.wordpress.com/
January 26, 2007 at 3:01 am
litlove
I really admire the coherence of this, and the way it reveals its wholeness to the reader gradually. Technically very strong today, David!
Thank you, litlove. I try to do both, but technique and heart are nearly incommensurable. Every time out, I’m happy to achieve either.
–David
January 26, 2007 at 5:58 pm
loricat
Good one. The irony is strong, without being slathered thick, if you know what I mean…Tapping us on the shoulder, instead of beating us over the head.
:p
Thank you, Lori. It’s hard, but necessary, to walk softly in this neighborhood.
–David
January 26, 2007 at 10:56 pm
glitterlessgold
Hey. You should make a zine out of this. Seriously.
Hello, glitterless! Glad you think the work has merit! I just dropped by this morning for another dose of snarkiness. So happy to see you’re still using that provocative header.
–David
January 27, 2007 at 2:14 am
Donnie Lam
Hi David,
Thanks for dropping by at MyBlogLog. What a very interesting concept you have here. I like it and will be back.
The feeling is mutual, Donnie.
–David
January 27, 2007 at 10:52 am
Ricardo
David,
Awesome concept. It is so hard to find good short stories in the Web!
Here is a short story (double the size of yours). Let me know what you think. I am starting writing them. It’s called Joanna’s Surf.
Ricardo
Thanks, Ricardo. I will read it and reply.
–David
January 27, 2007 at 1:13 pm
ombudsben
I like the ending twist–kept alive for consecutive life sentences. Well done.
I don’t know if you’re familiar with the real-life bomber, but he lives on in jail on just such terms.
–David
January 28, 2007 at 6:33 am
Annelisa
Glad to find I have no empathy with this character – only morbid fascination!
Another great story, David!
Thank you Annelisa.
–David
January 29, 2007 at 6:10 pm
junanteola
what an amazing blog and concept you have here! i’ll be coming back, and hoping you won’t mind, i’m adding this to my blogroll.
That’s what they call in horse racing the trifecta!
–David
February 7, 2007 at 8:49 pm
briseis
I really enjoyed this one. I love the crisp, clear, and professional way with which his past has been detailed. A killing here, defacement there. All in the line of work.
You’re a genius.
Mom, are you using briseis as your alias again?
–David
February 7, 2007 at 11:16 pm
Lakshmi
“..he managed to hang an alternate version of himself onto the top ten list..” Heres wishing that you manage to ‘digg’ your way into published author status… 🙂 I like this one..
Thank you, Lakshmi. Want to help me with digg? I’m only vaguely familiar with it.
–David