Fifty-five years of job reversals and mortgage payments all come down to this: a slow trickle of bargain hunters with their Penny-Savers, picking through a houseful of used furniture priced to move, each piece tagged with a little red sticker like a drop of blood with numbers penciled in, the fours like little sailboats, the sevens with slashes through them like they taught him in school: Dad’s last move, a sad milestone for us both. He wouldn’t let me hire a service or do the job myself. I woke this morning from a dream of Dad spinning down a runway with a walker, doffing his toupee and modeling his old suits. The stickers are ridiculous; he should be getting twice as much even after an agent, but he wouldn’t hear reason. This new couple seems sympathetic, or the wife does, better than most. She’s gone to look at bedroom furniture while her husband stands, neck broken, scanning the titles in the bookcase. She doesn’t know what to say to Dad so she simply lets him talk. He’s telling her the story of the bedroom suit, that’s what they called them when he and Mom were kids starting out, and then the story of how she twisted her ankle when they were lugging it into the only house they ever owned. When he stops mid-sentence and can’t go on, she nods in understanding and touches his arm. She has some cash in hand and starts peeling off bill after bill. I don’t think she’s counting. She calls to her husband to bring the truck, then wipes her cheek and sighs and starts removing the drawers. I watch Dad’s face to see if he’s all right. He catches my eye and winks, and fans his face with a handful of hundreds.
Copyright © March 1, 2007 David Hodges
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March 1, 2007 at 11:55 pm
David Schleicher
Heartbreaking and sad…and touched a certain personal note with me, as I am sure it will with many others…
Thanks, David.
–David
March 1, 2007 at 11:58 pm
jaterry
What a sly fox…you and the dad in the story!
Gotta hand it to the guy.
–David
March 2, 2007 at 10:34 am
David Raho
Nicely put together as always David. A real slice of life.
Thank you, David. They seem real to me.
–David
March 2, 2007 at 10:43 am
Marloes
The only thing left in my mom’s house after we cleared most of her stuff was our parents’ bedroom set. There is no market for old-fashioned lits-jumeaux anymore. It’s the saddest thing we had to do, clearing our family home. Be glad your dad has taken that burden away from you.
Thank you so much for that personal reminiscence, Marloes. This is a storyline so many of us have experienced, or will. But, just so there’s no misunderstanding, this did not happen to me. I tell stories.
–David
March 2, 2007 at 10:53 am
ngriffin
Very moving…..you and your dad sound a lot alike……
Thank you, ngriffin. I like the comparison, but again, these stories are not about me.
–David
March 3, 2007 at 4:36 am
litlove
It’s because you make them so real, David. The voice is so authentic it would be easy to forget the shapeliness of the fiction. But this is a beautifully shapely piece, nevertheless, and I loved that little twist at the end.
Thank you, Litlove. Dad was always doing things like that (just kidding).
–David
March 3, 2007 at 11:49 am
jimdwalton
299 words or less allows me a visual picture, worth thousands of words. I am reminded of my first home purchase and the old man crying as he left for a condo. A WWII veteran, his only home, built new after the war, raised his family, a Baltimore row home, across from a stream, near a park, sold to me in 1980, a wonderful community, now because of drugs and despair, a dangerous place, a piece of America gone forever, at least the old man did not see how his community has become. Thanks for the reason for reflection.
He cried in early versions of my story, too, Jim, and for good reason. But I couldn’t do it to him. I had to give him something else. Thank you so much for your recollection.
–David
March 3, 2007 at 3:59 pm
Lori
I’m glad you changed it — Dad crying would have been too heartbreaking. The narrator is near tears enough for both of them.
Thank you, Lori. I never thought about taking votes, but thanks for casting yours.
–David
March 3, 2007 at 6:45 pm
mandarine
It sounds as the dark echo of BlogLily’s mother in law farmhouse clearing session. Reason enough for me to start giving away and dumping stuff as of now, long before it’s too late.
If you haven’t used it in ten years, mandarine, you’ll need it the day after you give it away!
–David
Then I’ll borrow it back, and help myself to a second glass of Pastis with my neighbor in the process 😉
March 4, 2007 at 5:50 am
raincoaster
I’ve been there, and I only wish my story had ended like yours. My father would have loved that!
Thank you, raincoaster. This does seem to be a very familiar storyline, except that everybody’s experiences are so different.
–David
March 4, 2007 at 4:33 pm
JaneDoughnut
Go Dad! I’m so glad this had a funny ending.
Now let us praise incorrigible parents!
–David
March 6, 2007 at 9:40 am
red dirt girl
And here I thought I was reading yet another poignant David piece……..only to be surprised at the end……i love the fanning of the hundreds!!!!! But then again, I should, by now, be used to your surprise endings, David! I’ll be more anticipatory in the future!
Thanks, red dirt girl! It came as a bit of a surprise to me too, but surprising like the inevitable.
–David