Just as the rich man has nothing and no man who has never lived in prison can be free, my jailers were wrong to promise me solitary when the fertile air all around must vibrate with songs, carried to my window by the wind, of the workers in the laundry as they labor, and machete blows of workers clearing tall trees from the jungle just outside the prison race through doors and down the halls ahead of the guard who brings my meal—they separated me from family and made me kin to all—whose heels as he clicks them, whose soles as they scrape, tell me his wife has had their baby and that it is a boy. The spider in the corner is not silent. He coughs as he spins his sticky sieve to catch what travels on the drafts. I hear his prey. The prison at night or in soft rain makes a sound like trees that wave in the amputated homeland behind my eyes. Guilty are we of landlessness because they have seized our land and when we’re evicted we’re guilty of living abroad. They keep us from schools by educating us and set us up in practice to keep us from the law. How could I at trial refrain from accusing the court of contempt? I can leave at any time, but my work here is not done. While they confine me I am the struggle, but if they open the doors and I walk out they will own me again. Better they should keep me here where I can keep an eye on them. They want me to sign for my freedom but I tell them only free men can sign contracts. No. They’ll have to free me first and take their chances.
Copyright © December 08, 2007 David Hodges
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December 8, 2007 at 11:12 am
briseis
This is wonderful! It’s very enjoyable, and very well written, of course.
Thank you, Briseis. I’m glad you liked it.
–David
December 8, 2007 at 8:38 pm
litlove
I do like the way that a piece entitled confinement should be an example of how far a man’s mind can travel without constraint or restraint. Thought, dignified by mindful awareness of the moment, is powerful and admirable. (Well, that’s how it came across to me, anyway.)
Thank you, Litlove. I love that you’ve identified the first of many paradoxes Mister Mandela’s reactions to his biography so often in his own words embrace.
–David
December 10, 2007 at 12:55 pm
grantman
thinking Papillon here…thinking injustice….thinking how ones mind begins to run and run when it has nothing but time to fuel it….very in tune with what is going on in Burma these days….. nice piece
grantman
Burma today, South Africa yesterday. Thanks, grantman.
–David
December 10, 2007 at 3:33 pm
Wizzer
There’s a real depth to this piece. I love the softening created by the sound of “songs carried by the wind” yet the words of those songs are no doubt tainted by pain and struggle.
If man could ever find away to confine another’s thoughts THEN we would have REAL problems.
I think we already do, Wizzer. I think we’re all trapped in patterns of thought we’d never accept if we took the time to examine them. Thank you for your constant support and always thoughtful comments.
–David
December 11, 2007 at 11:23 pm
raincoaster
Really, one of your best.
Thank you, raincoaster. I’m happy to see you again and always grateful for your comments.
–David
December 12, 2007 at 11:18 pm
Paula
You can imprison my body but not my spirit!
David, I enjoyed this.
Thank you, Paula, and welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
January 11, 2008 at 6:40 pm
Tomas
Wow, this is wonderful picture. It talks and teaches not hurry with the quotes.
The flowers blossom and wither, but they both smell and give us a sip of fresh air if we listen to wind.
I could say the same about the gorgeous pictures on your blog too, Tomas. Thank you very much and welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
January 13, 2008 at 8:55 pm
Polaris
Powerful. It is amazing that you can seamlessly evoke the absurdities in “law”, “education” and “freedom” in such a short space.
Thank you so much, Polaris. It helps that in this case my subject himself lives a life emblematic of every incongruity you mentioned and others as well.
–David
January 15, 2008 at 4:25 pm
Narnie
This spirals with thought. I love the way you have contrasted what we would immediately perceive to be the intention, before changing that in our mind. I am personally a word lush, which I am trying to change for the purposes of blogging so these shorts are inspiring. Excellent.
Thank you, Narnie. I’ve been guilty of excess too, so I understand. The longer I work in this very short form, the more it seems too long. If I inspire anyone, I’m gratified.
–David