Her guide did not lead the new doctor all the way to the village; instead, halfway up the rise, he gestured with his stick toward the cluster of huts in the high distance. Four days they had traveled together without talking, by oxcart, by flatboat, on horseback, on foot, and now she had a need to share her misgivings about the job. She touched her pocket for the letter of introduction and climbed. She found him in the graveyard, incongruous in his white coat, facing the stones but looking at the middle air. “I wear it because they think it heals them,” he said. “You will do a different sort of healing.” She put her pointless letter away and read the names on the markers. “These are your patients,” he told her, touching the stones in turn. He led her to the clinic and sat her at a table piled with letters. “They have families who need to hear from them.” Still she had not spoken; still she did not speak. She was to write as frequently as she received replies. Her handwriting was of no concern: they wanted to believe. First she would read the letters to learn about her patients. “In life,” he said, “they disappointed their loved ones, but in death, with your help, they will lead inspirational lives.” Her correspondence had convinced him this was her branch of medicine. Others would keep the living alive. He gave her water, bread and fruit and left her to her studies. She was far from home, without a guide, exhausted, no longer a doctor, a student again, alone. She read the first letter and wept. When she took up her pen to explain to her mother why she had left without saying goodbye, she had made a beginning.
Copyright © August 5, 2008 David Hodges
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August 5, 2008 at 2:30 pm
meena iyer
Well why did she write letters? I think am completely lost 😦
Sorry, Meena. Frequent readers of Very Short Novels know that the altogether unlikely happens here all the time. She was hired to write letters to distant relatives of the deceased, who do not know they’ve lost someone, so that the dead, for them, will live on. (That time I only needed 28 words!) Thank you for your question and welcome to Very Short Novels!
–David
August 5, 2008 at 4:15 pm
emeline
Hi David.
As usual the main character is dark and disturbed! A range of questions are surrounding the story, or just mysteries which are necessary to stimulate the imagination! I’ve always the impression that you try to write about the various sides of life: birth, death and so on. I like the way you help the readers to ask questions about their own existence!
Best regards,
Emeline
And best regards to you, Emeline. I love your comments which, in addition to stimulating thought, are also excellent evidence of your existence. Thank you again.
–David
August 6, 2008 at 1:31 am
petesmama
“When she took up her pen to explain to her mother why she had left without saying goodbye, she had made a beginning.”
Is she dead too? That would be a strange twist.
I’ll say! What a remarkable idea. You may come back any time, petesmama. Thank you for your comment and welcome to Very Short Novels.
–David
August 6, 2008 at 8:29 am
emeline
Hi All.
To Petesmama:
I don’t think that her mother is dead too. Since the relationships between a mum and her daughter are not always made with happiness, maybe the both had troubled. That’s why the main character had left without saying goodbye. That’s just my way of thinking!
Emeline
August 6, 2008 at 9:40 am
litlove
Oh human beings are sick in so many ways aren’t they? I really loved this one, with its exotic location and its young doctor thrust into a different kind of healing than she’d been expecting. It’s so true that bodies all too often refuse cure, but emotions are always gracefully resilient. As ever the VSN’s point to a better organisation of life, if only we had the wit and the creativity and the courage to go there.
For me, it’s the complicity of the loved ones that breaks my heart and gives me hope, Litlove. They know they’re getting letters from a proxy, but they’re willing to accept whatever care comes their way from someone who means them well. I’m so glad to see you back here!
–David
August 6, 2008 at 10:05 am
petesmama
Hi Emeline: I was actually thinking is the young doctor dead herself? That could explain why she “left without saying goodbye”. Few dead people do. The idea appeals to me.
Also (sorry David, misusing your comments box a bit) I was sad to find that Emeline’s blog is in French – I would have loved to read it.
I was similarly disappointed, Petesmama. As for the young doctor, dead or alive question, I’m with Emeline. I don’t think she’s dead, but I can see why you might think so. She travels for four days without talking to the guide (maybe he doesn’t know she’s there!) and never speaks to the doctor either. His speech is more problematic, of course, but could have been a rehearsal, and maybe he placed the food on the table to be ready for a living doctor he expected. The movie “The Sixth Sense” is full of such artificial constructs turned to beautiful effect. Not what I had in mind though.
–David
August 7, 2008 at 10:43 am
emeline
Hi All.
To Petesmama:
I perfectly understand what you try to explain me about the daughter and the fact that she has probably left because of a mental disorder. That’s a great idea! However, I think that the main character doesn’t want to die; she used a lot of words with a meaning close to the life notion: “she had made a beginning”, for exemple, the sentence means that she wants to continue her own life; she’s got enough strenght to write a complete letter! Her way of behaving doesn’t mean “the end”.
[I’m sorry whether you don’t understand what I’m trying to tell you! I’ve the right words in mind but that’s so complicated to explain them in the English language!]
To David & Petesmama:
I’d like to write some short novels in English but I’m not enough fluent to narrate a story. Since I’m going to work in London, I’ll be fluent, soon!
Best regards,
Emeline
Thank you, Emeline. Nothing could be more charming than your English as it is. I hope London won’t spoil you.
–David
August 21, 2008 at 11:32 am
Wizzer at Guru fodder
Should she maintain the pretense? There’s a moral dilemma – and at what point does she kill off the already deceased!!
My head is spinning with the possibilities of the fiction she could weave.
Perhaps in her first letters they report a little cough? Thanks, Wizzer.
–David